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**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] (Page 23)

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fab part hun!!!!

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ohh trish .. we die yaar .. update soon plz .. cant wait ..

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                                                Part-10

 

 

(Shlok & Aish was talking & Daksh listening at them)

Aish:"Shlok?"

(she's feeling strange & strangly looking at him)

Shlok:"kyu?naam pasand nahi aya?"

Aish:"no no'..actually mujhe class k liye late ho raha  hai''''so,nice to meet u Shlok"

Shlok:"nice to meet u too"

(he was looking at her like he was know her for many years ago)

Aish:"bye'."

(she left)

(Shlok said himself)

Shlok:"mujhe aapni feelings ko control karna hoga"

(took a breath & he also left)

(then Daksh said)

Daksh:"mujhe iss wacko se hi pata karna padega  k ye dono kya baatey kar rahe the"

(Aish walking,followed by Daksh)

(when Aish came closer to the class door then Daksh shout at her)

Daksh:"Asmin'''ruko"

Aish:"now what?aab maine kya kia?"

Daksh:"tum uss ladke se kya baat kar rahi thi?"

Aish:"kounsa ladka?"

Daksh:"mere samne zyada smart banne ki kousis mat karna ''''vohi new entry"

Aish:"oh u mean Shlok? he is such a nice guy"

Daksh:"whatever'''tum usse dur  rahogi"

(suddenly Shlok came there)

Shlok:"ye kisse mile or kisse nahi ye batane wale tum kon hote ho?"

Daksh:"isska partner"

Aish:"oh hello''.main sirf tumhari gym partner hoon or tum kiss haaq se ye saab puch rahe ho?"

Daksh:"main tumhe Shok se pahele se janta hoon"

Shlok:"mera naam Shlok hai"

Daksh:"listen mr.whatever'..mujhe tumhare naam se koi farak nahi parta''''.tum Asmin se dur rahoge"

(Aish started flirting with Daksh)

Aish:"kyu Daksh?........tumhe jalan ho rahi hai kya?"

Daksh:"what?.......dekho mujhe koi jalan nahi ho rahi hai"

Shlok:"so?.........tum Asmin se dur raho''''.Asmin chalo class k liye der ho jayegi"

Aish:"han"(again she's feeling strange)

(Shlok & Aish enterd in the class & Daksh looking at them very angrily)

 

 

(after college Anchal standing on road for lift)

(Arjun passing by'''.he stoped his car after Anchal)

(he started thinking)

Arjun:"oh no!kahi fires mera vahem to nahi?..............kya Anchal sach me yaha hai?"

(he turn back for Anchal)

(Anchal surprised to saw him there)

Anchal:"Arjun?tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?"

Arjun:"pahele batao kya tum sach me yaha ho?"

Anchal:"kya matlab?tum kya kahe rahe ho?mujhe samajh me nahi aaraha hai"

Arjun:"btw,tum yaha kyu khari ho?"

Anchal:"vo actually mujhe ghar jaane k liye lift chahiye thi to''.

Arjun:"main tumhe lift de deta hoon''''.chalo"

Anchal:"okey"

(she sat in the car)

(then they gone)

(in the car)

Arjun:"suno Anchal"

Anchal:"ha.."

Arjun:"kya tum aaj mere office ayi thi?"

Anchal:"main or tumhare office?.....nahi to'kyu?"

Arjun:"nahi baas aisehi"

(he was something like blushing)

(Anchal also staring at him)

 

 

 

(in Raichand's house)

(Shlok entered through the main door'''Haseena came there)

Haseena:"so'''.kya hua college me?usse mile?"

(Shlok was very happy)

Shlok:"ha mom'''..usse mila bhi or baatey bhi ho gayi)

(it was a cute smile on his face)

(Haseena looks scared)

Haseena:"what?.........kya ussne tumhe pahechana?"

Shlok:"I don't think k ussne mujhe pahechana hoga'''.maine usse aapna pura naam bhi nahi bataya hai"

Haseena:"kya matlab?"

Shlok:"matlab maine usse sifr aapna naam bataya hai'''..sirname nahi"

Haseena:"lekin mujhe lagata hai k vo jaldhi samajh jayegi''''.vo itni bhi nadan nahi hogi"

(Shlok smiled)

Shlok:"pata chale to chale but main ye pata lagne nahi dunga ki main kon hoon or kya hoon"

Haseena:"I hope so"

 

 

(in Aish's room'''.she was thinking about Shlok)

Aish:"Shlok'''ye naam kuch jana pahechana sa lag raha hai,lekin yaad nahi aaraha ki kaha suna tha"

(Meera entered in the room)

Meera:"hey sweetu  wasup"

Aish:"nothing''.bass kuch soch rahi thi"

Meera:"kya?Daksh k bareme?"

Aish:"massiiii'''.aapko kuch or nahi sujhta hai kya''''.mere itne bure din bhi nahi aye hai ki main uss Daksh k bareme sochu"

Meera:"to kisske bareme soch rahi thi?"

Aish:"u know aaj college me ek naya ladka aya hai'.Shlok"

Meera:"one sec one sec''kya kaha Shlok?"

Aish:"ha"

Meera:"ye naam to''..

Aish:"wohi to'..main bhi confused hoon'''.kahi ye vow ala Shlok to nahi?"

Meera:"ho sakta hai'''..usska sirname kya hai?"

Aish:"yehi to problem hai'''..main puchna hi bhool gayi''''kal college me puch lungi'''''fir pata chalega k ye konsa Shlok hai"

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sorry 4 late update
i was so busy thouse days
hope u guys like itBig smile


Edited by 00123trisha - 14 March 2011 at 12:27am

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me first.. yipeee. Trishu darling, wowiee update. Daksh getting jealous. Asmin cant remember Shlok.. waiting for the next update. pls hurry up ok. ur ff is driving me crazy.

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
it was nice update soon dear

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 2:12am | IP Logged
love it yaar .. finally u give update after a long time ..
wel hum toh wait kar kar ke mar hi rahe the ke tumne bacha liya .. wel nice this one too ..
wait for the next update .. and try to soon update ..

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@Ramona & Shelly-thank u sooo muchHug

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