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Ketha Hai Dil - Note - Page 60 (11/19/11) (Page 46)

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 12:01am | IP Logged
OMG geet is 15 Shocked
nice update
u r updating another part 
ohh thnk u thnk u thnk u in advance
cont sooon 
waiting eagerlyyy Smile

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonali_N

OMG geet is 15 Shocked
nice update
u r updating another part 
ohh thnk u thnk u thnk u in advance
cont sooon 
waiting eagerlyyy Smile


Indeed she is fifteen...
Please no thank you...


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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 12:47am | IP Logged
Here is the last update for today

Enjoy it!

Part V

(Scene One - Impatient wait of Dadi)

Dadi kept on looking upwards...

Nupur: What's wrong? Dadi

Dadi: Beta, its been five minutes since I've send your brother upstairs to call your Bhabhi?

"...and bhaiyya hasn't come down yet! Right Dadi!"

Dadi: haan Samrat

Samrat smirk...

Nupur lean closer to Samrat...

Samrat: Are you thinking what I am?

Nupur nods her head...

Samrat: Fallow me!

(Scene Two - Maan totally shock by the new his wife gave him)

I couldn't believe my ears... my wife just confirm her age... I thought she is 18yrs old, but that means her family lied to me? Why?

She looked at me...

I couldn't even look into her eyes with guilt...

"Please don't blame yourself cause I don't" She told me, but I kept on looking at her...

"Please... say something" She shook my arm...

I looked at her... took deep breathe... I opened our wardrobe... took out her best chooridar and gave it to her..

She nods her head...

I wait silently for her to come out from the bathroom... about three minute she came out dressed beautiful

I kept on looking at her...

"Now we know why Bhai hasn't come down yet cause he can't keep his eyes of Bhabhi" his siblings screamed inside his ears...

I looked at them with stern look...

Samrat: Oye! Don't give us that look..

I control my anger... gave my wife a-look before making our way down the stairs with my siblings behind us...

(Scene Three - Dadi introducing Geet)

Dadi introduce Geet to her friends...

Dadi: Ms. Ritu, meet my bahu Geet

Ms. Ritu smiles and roll her eyes..

Nupur came running and pulled Geet away from Dadi's annoying friends...

Nupur: Bhabhi, why are you so quite? Lets go and find Bro

Nupur drag Geet along with her...

(Scene Four - Sharma Family Arrival at Khurana place)

Mayank with his family came to Khurana mansion... Karan kept his hand on Mayank's shoulder and whisper... "don't create a scene for your Dadi's sake"

Mayank nod his head...

Samrat greets them wit sarcastic smile...

Prerna caressed his forehead...

Samrat: Dadi, not the hair

Samrat hugs Mayank for his Dadu's sake but whisper in his ear "don't even think.."

Mayank: that anything can change

Samrat: between us!

Broke apart

(Scene Five - Nupur finds her Bro)

Nupur tap her bro's shoulder...

Maan turn around...

Maan: Kya?

Nupur: Its your reception than why are you talking about business instead of being with Bhabhi?

Nupur look at Adi and Sasha...

Nupur: excuse Bhaiyya cause he's gonna give Bhabhi company and dance with her...

Maan glare at Nupur...

Nupur won't help or do you want me shout for Dadi?

Maan grab Geet's hand and took her to dance floor...

(Scene Six - Maaneet dance on Tere Mast Mast Do Nain)

Maan: Taakte rehte tujhko
Saanjh savere

Dadi admires her grandson and bahu dancing together... Prerna tap Savarti's shoulder... both hug each other...

Maan: Nainon mein haye
Nainon mein haye

Taakte rehte tujhko
Saanjh savere
Nainon mein bansiya jaise
Nain yeh tere
Nainon mein bansiya jaise
Nain yeh tere
Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain

Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain

Maan look into Geet's eyes... only find innocence of purity...

Maan: Pehle pehal tujhe,
Dekha toh dil mera,
Dhadka haye dhadka dhadka haye
Ooo Pehle pehal tujhe,
Dekha toh dil mera,
Dhadka haye dhadka dhadka haye
Jal jal utha hoon main,
Shola jo pyaar ka,
Bhadka haye bhadka bhadka haye
Neendhon mein gul gayehain

Maan swirls Geet in circle and brings her back to his arm..

Maan: Sapne jo tere
Badle se lag rahe hain
Andaaz mere
Badle se lag rahe hain
Andaaz mere
Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain

Geet slowly loosen her grip from Maan...

Geet: Tujhse shuru huyi,
Tujhpe hi khatam ho
Duniya meri duniya duniya meri

and walks backwards...

Geet: Tujhse shuru huyi,
Tujhpe hi khatam ho
Duniya meri duniya duniya meri
Yeh baat dil mein thi,
Nainon ne bol di
Main hoon teri,
Main hoon main hoon teri
Tujhko hi yaad kar ke
Aanhein baroon main

Maan watches her disappear into the darkness...

Geet: Milke bhi mil na paun
Ab kya karoon main
Milke bhi mil na paun
Ab kya karoon main

Geet turn around and freeze on the spot... whisper Darji



Edited by Miketa - 08 May 2011 at 12:48am

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
beautiful part.
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Awesome!Clap Continue Soon!Smile

Edited by SajanRox - 11 June 2011 at 2:22am
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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
awesome update ..
loved itSmile
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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 3:31am | IP Logged
hey awesome miketa just read all the parts..they are beautiful..awesome wrk...plz add more sajan scenes...and plz pm me...
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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Awesome updates. Loved it a lot. Wow! Today is a treat for us. U have updated 3 parts! Omg! What did sam done! Gunjan slapped sam! But, he did wrong. Is sam loves gunjan? If he loves her, why didn't he confess? Is mayank was talking to taani in phone? And omg!! Maan came to know about geet's age? Now, what will be his reaction? How will he behave with geet? And darji in khurana mansion? Why did he came there? I don't want him to create any problem in geet's life. And why didn't gunjan attended the party? Hope sajan will have nice track. Please do cont as soon as possible. Thanks for pm

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