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Ketha Hai Dil - Note - Page 60 (11/19/11) (Page 20)

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by doosheeka

nice character sketch.................continue soon...................


Thank you for the comment

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

woowww that is gonna be awsum...............

thnx for the pm.............



How can you say that? Now I have to work hard in making my skills according to your expectation...

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deekshacg

this is really great. do continue soon and add me to ur pm list.


I'll add you soon
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rupzloveu

add me in ur pm list


I can add you soon when I get time...
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
I am touch by so many replies...
I don't know if I can come across your exceptation..
Please forgive me.. if I fail.

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I'll try my best to answer your question.

Yes, Geet had rough time. Please ignore her age because in olden days age doesn't matter for families when their girls become burden on their shoulders.


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Enjoy

Prologue (1)
Humari Geet Hui Parayee

.... Everyone have dreams of desirable wedding... par some aren't even lucky.

Its my badaai...

I never thought Dariji would hug me... I stood frozen...

Dariji: Don't get your hopes high. Just remember one thing.. never come back or put shame on our names.

I wasn't crying of feeling anything.. when Manjeet chachu gave my hand into my husband's hand.

Manjeet: Beta, promise you'll take good care of humari jaan. Her one smile means a world to us and her tears ripe us apart.. inside our hearts. Also she's the most innocent pure person who won't speak up her desires easily in life.

My eyes got moist.. a bit!

I looked at my chachu before being dragged by my husband... sat inside my husband's car without turning or looking behind. I left my maykaa forever. (It's so irony, maykaa comes from the word Maa par I'm so lucky cause I don't have either Maa or maykaa).

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Drive to his place.. was long.. we stopped at hotel for dinner.. I wasn't eating anything, but stare at my food.

"why aren't you eating?" my husband asked me.

I just stay mum...

"Do you want some thing else?" he kept on asking me.

I lower my head in discomfort...

Background Music: Ab Bhook Mujhe Lagti Hi Nahin
Ab Pyaas Meri Jagti Hi Nahin
Ab Bhook Mujhe Lagti Hi Nahin
Ab Pyaas Meri Jagti Hi Nahin

Two girls swirl around me and my husband while they sing and dance around us with dole beat...

Background Music: Ghar Baar Chuta, Sansaar Chuta
Har Tarah Ka Vyapaar Chuta
Duniya Ne Sooli, Hai Sooli, Hai Sooli

My husband kept on looking at me with questions..

Background Music: Duniya Ne Sooli Tang Di Hai
(Maine Ishq Mein Choli Rang Li Hai) - 2
Maine Ishq Mein Choli, Rang Li.. Hai

I look into his eyes before (both of them got inside the car) driving away.

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Early in the morning we arrive around six at my new home.. its huge.. I stood by my husband.. while elderly lady welcome us inside. I took blessing from her along with my husband.

Completing each rituals took several hours before his Dadi left us and his siblings started asking us questions.. mostly me.

I lower my head.. avoid looking at them.. its uneasy for me.

My husband notice it.. cleared his throat...

His siblings looked at him with confuse look..

"Samrat.. Nupur.. excuse your Bhabhi... I know you want to get to know your Bhabhi par its been long journey.. if you don't mind" I heard him explain his siblings. I lower my head in shame of discomfort.

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Nupur help me settle on the bed.. cover my head with my ghunghat...

I watch her leave and stopping her brother outside for shagun.. I smile hearing their conversation. I lower my head when door open and closed..

I felt scared, nervous, and every emotion anyone could feel on their first night with stranger.

He walk toward me...

I tried moving away from fear around me...

He sat in front of me.. remove ghunghat off my head.. touches my arms.. my shoulders before clutching my hair.

I wanted to scream in pain.. he was hurting me.. I kept on struggling.. He lean forward.. I lean backward due his weight on me. He gave me wet kisses on my face than my sensitive place before biting me roughly..

I wanted to scream... before I can push him away.. he entered me..

I silently cried.. moaning for softie.. for his protection..

...heavy wind blowing inside a room.. where person slept peacefully on his bed, but suddenly jerk up sweating.. looked around here and there.. before getting out of bed.
Stood looking out his window.. feeling his Misti.. moaning for him.

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Summary of Prologue (1)
Humari Geet Hui Parayee: begins with Geet's point of viewing throughout her journey from her vidaai to her husband's place. During her first night she's nervous of fear and missing Softie also his protection.

Glimpse of Softie is shown.




Edited by Miketa - 04 March 2011 at 5:01pm

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
nice prologue..................who is her husband and who is this softie i mean which one of these is maan..................since softie says mishti i think he is maan but samrat and nupur r maan's siblings so i think her hubby is maan ............urgh................well need more info to know right............waiting for updates....................pl cont soon

Edited by preethia - 04 March 2011 at 2:47pm
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 3:09pm | IP Logged

Interesting yet confusing

continue soon n plz do add me in ur pm listEmbarrassed



Edited by cyum321 - 04 March 2011 at 3:14pm
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Wow amzing part. Please add me to your PM list. And i have 2 guesses that the husband for sure is Maan right? but wow he is so mean, and i think her softie is Mayank since in Mayank's introduction you said smthng about loving his misti (meaning geet). OMG don't tell me that mayank will marry  poor nupur just to take revenge from maan and then maan will find out and curse poor geet, cause thts what it looks like from the vm ( which is BTW mindblowing). PLz add me to your PM and plz dont mind my blabering

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