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Ketha Hai Dil - Note - Page 60 (11/19/11) - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Lovely update
Haha sasha got told
Wonder hu mayank was talking 2 to
Cont soon plz Xx...
Thx 4 the PM



I always wanted to see Maan actually give Sasha the attitude par he never does... You'll know soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

liked the part...



Happy to know that you enjoyed the part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sharmake11

love it

amazing update
pls cont soonnn
thank yu so muchhh
but yu didnt pm me😭😭😭



Sorry I missed you...

I am just posting next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here is the part I promised

There might be more coming up, but I am not going to pm anyone now (for these parts)

Part IV
(B)

(Scene One - Gunjan feels suffocated)

I wanted to scream for help...

I felt his breathe on my neck...

leave me... I screamed..

Shut up... he screamed back...

I kept on fighting...

Stop it... If you keep on struggling.. you'll just wake up beast inside me... he nibble my ear before biting my sensitive part of my neck.

I screamed and push him away and slapped him.

(Scene Two - Party begins)

Later in the evening, guest started to arrive...

Samrat assign to greet the quest...

Nupur tease Samrat...

Maan stood beside Adi and talk about their business affairs...

Dadi's friends kept on asking about Geet..

Dadi excuse herself...

Dadi: Maan beta

Maan excused himself...

Maan came toward his Dadi...

Dadi: Beta go and check what's taking Bahu so long...

Maan made his way toward his room...

(Scene Three - Geet in troubling & complaining to her Babaji)

Babaji! Who invented these sarees... I kept on looking at my saree with anger and cursing my luck...

What's wrong? I heard my husband's voice.

I turn around and look at my husband. He came toward me. I cover myself with my arm across..

I notice smirk on his face...

I kept on moving backwards and he kept on moving forwards... until he trap me in between his arms against the wall...

"What's wrong? Wifey" I looked at him that close my eyes... He order me to open my eyes,,,

I open them...

He leaned forward and whisper into my ears "what's wrong? Why aren't you already? People are dying to meet Maan Singh Khurana's wife"

"What can I do?" I asked him with my head lower with shame...

He looked at me...

I close my eyes and told him..."how can a fifteen year old know how to wear a saree?"

He loosen his grip and looked at me...

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Posted: 12 years ago
she real 15yrs old 😲
wonder how maan i'll react
cant wait to know what happen
next pls jaldi karo yaar
 
love it
awesome update
pls cont soonnn
thank yu so muchhh
muah
pls longer one
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Posted: 12 years ago

supreb update,

fiften yrs ..really.
cant wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sharmake11

she real 15yrs old 😲

wonder how maan i'll react
cant wait to know what happen
next pls jaldi karo yaar
 
love it
awesome update
pls cont soonnn
thank yu so muchhh
muah
pls longer one



Yep, she's fifteen! Even I wonder how Maan is going to react (maybe pull his hair)

Trying... typing the part...

Can't promise how long its going to be...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: shah10

supreb update,

fiften yrs ..really.
cant wait for the nxt update



Indeed she is fifteen
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sonali_N

awesome update ..

loved it
waitng for other part 
thnx for updating 
and also thnx for PM 
loved d maaneet seen more
cont sooon😊



Oh! Thank you...

Next part is posted!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG geet is 15 😲
nice update
u r updating another part 
ohh thnk u thnk u thnk u in advance
cont sooon 
waiting eagerlyyy 😊