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awesome OS Aanchal!

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PART3
NUPUR HAS GAINED CONCISENESS


ma:thank god tumhe hosh aa gaya main to jaise mar hi jaya tha.


nu:mayankkkkkkkkk.

ma:haa nupur.

nu:why did you heart..............
ma:i am sorry nupur main tumhe hurt nahi karna chata tha par main majboor tha  i am sorry tumhe hurt karne ke liye.
nu:kitna bolne lage ho mayank main apni nahi tumhari baat kar rahi hun tumne apne aapko itni badi saja kun di tumne mujhe kun nahi batya.
now its time for mayank to shock that itna sab hone ke bad bhi nupur usiki chinta kar rahi hai .

ma:tumhi batao nupur tum meri jagha hoti to kya karti .


now it's nupur time to be silent because she knows mayank is right at his place.

nu:thik hai is bar to main tumhe maaf kar deti hun bat  agli bar nahi .

at that time other's family member comes in  .
gu: diiiiii app thik hai na ye kya pagalpan tha.
nu: looking towards her father
     "dad i am so soory meri wajah se apko kitni paresani hui na"

nd:haa beta paresani to hui aur taklif bhi bat ye sab tere dukh ke samne to kuch bhi nahi but aisa bachpana kabhi  mat karna .
nu:nahi karungi aur apne dad ke gale lag gati hai.

now nupur's dad goes towards mayank

nd:holding mayank both hands in his hand .mayank tum nupur se pyar karte ho.
ma:haa uncle.
nd:to sadi karoge usse

now everyone looking towards him .
ma:nahi.

evryone :what?????????????????????

ma:mera matlab he karunga par abhi nahi .
nd:to phir kab .
ma:pehle mein nupur ki sari wishes to puri kar dun .
gu: konsi wishes.
ma: ye jo tumhari behen hai na iski bahut sari lambi list hai usi ko pura karna hai.

at that time nd leave the yonger one to disscus about plan
nd:mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai mayank lekin jo bhi karna jaldi karna
when nupur dad's leave the room
gu: haa mayank batao meri di ki kya kya khawaise hai
ma:batado nupur.
nu:nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
ma:ab chupana kya samrat aur gunjan apne hi hai koi gair thodi hai
now hering this nupur start blushing seeing this samrat start teesing her

sa: oh ho soon to bi mrs mayank sharma aap itna laal kun ho rahi hai.

gu:meri behen ko chidana chodo samrat aur tum mayank bol rahe ho ki na ahi.

ok batata hun


FLASHBACK

AT AHMEDABAD TRIP  .

THEY ARE SEATING IN LIVING AREA AND TALKING ABOUT THEIR LIFE AT THAT TIME MAYANK HAS STARTED FEELINGS FOR NUPUR

nu: thanks mayank tum mujhe yaha laye mera mood bilkul thik ho gaya .
ma: thanks ki koi jarrorat nahi hai phir bhi " your welcome".
nu:haa to mayank apne bare mein batao .tumhe kya kya pasand hai.
ma:well mujhe kitabe pasand hai . class mein top karna pasand wagehra wagerha .
nu:oh my god tum to ekdum sadu ho tum se jo sadi karegi bahut pachtagi .
ma: oh really now just shut up aur tum apne bare mein batao  aur specially ye batana tumhe kaisa chaiye .
nu:mujhe now comes to nupur list what she wants in her life partner .
    1. wo handsum ho (mayank is handsum)
    2  uske galo pe dimples hon.(and you all no about it
    3  everyone  respect him and loves him  ( you no mayank sharma is loved by everyone
    4  wo mujhse bahut pyar karta ho. (now mayank  start loving her very much )
    5   bahudur ho (you all know about it late when mayank save her from gunda's)
    6  bado ki respect karna janta ho ( maynk respect his elder very much)
    7  mujhe aur meri behen ko kabhi alag naa kare ( how he can dare to seprate the gunur)
    8 last not the least wo mujhe aise propose kare jaise  aaj tak kisine naa kiya ho.(she is not talking about love confession  just for marriage proposal).
ma: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

flashback ends

ma: to tum samjhi gunjan mein tumhari behen ki 8 condition mein 7 mein to phit bhetha hun bat abhi tak 8th  pura nahi hua hai

gu: thik hai bat agar tum 7 condition puri nahi karte na to main tumhe apni behen puri nahi karta .
ma: but ye condition pura karna to samrat ke hath mein hai.
sa: mere haath mein .........now understanding his words . ohhhhhhhhhhhh.

now mayank goes towards nupur and holding her hand .

ma: to miss nupur bhushan tyar ho jao tumhari 8 wish ke liye .
nu: soch lo mr shrma nupur bhushan ko impress karna itna aasan nahi hai .
ma: thik hai madam aap jaldi thik hoiye tabhi to aap ko lake gayunga .
wishparing in her ears .
ma: so miss bhushan tyar ho pachtane kre liye . now after heing this nupur start blushes more .

ma: good night nupur ab so jao aur sapno mein sirf mujhe he dekhna . now he take the comforter and put on nupur and kisses on her forehead and nupur goes in slumber .

ma: gunjan nupur ka khyal rakhna .

now when mayank reaches the door he turns back.

ma: we willbe................................................................
SORRY FOR THE DELAY BUT NOTHING IS IN MY HAND DUE TO CERTAIN THING I AM NOT ABLE TO UPDATE IT REGULARLY BUT TRY TO UPDATE MY FF'S ON FRIDAY& SATURDAY AND SOMETIMES ON SUNDAY.

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Edited by aancchal - 15 March 2011 at 8:46am

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Edited by mahakmev - 15 March 2011 at 10:18am
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