Joined: 01 August 2006
Bonjour - Guttentaag - Salaam - Namaste,
Here's the teaser / first part. There is more coming up soonish... I mean, real soonish!
"Babaji... ab mein kya karoon? Yeh kaisa mazaak kiya hai in sab ne?"
Maan frowned in interest, whilst adoring the cute sight of his soon to be bride who was not pausing for breath as she eyed her mehndi in worry as if ready to flood the room with tears. He edged forward when he felt something firm grasping his shoulder.
"Dadi... er.. aap?"
Geet shot her head towards the curtain entrance with eyes shaped like fat "O's" in fear. She watched nervously, as Dadi turned Maan around, forcing him to go away from the place. Geet was relieved when Maan vanished, and quickly began fidgeting and started the "chan chan" noise of her bangles once again as Dadi walked upto her.
"Geet beta, aap teek to hain? Aap apne haaton ko aise kyun hilaye jaa rahi hain?"
Geet instantly pulled her hands behind her
back, knowing that she had to hide them from Dadi or else Geet's anger would
turn into embarrassment and her embarrassment would result into her death.
"Dadi ma, kuch nay, vo.. mein.. mein to bas avaiyn apni choorian ko channka rahi ti.. mujhe inki chan-chan, chan-chan bauhat pasand hai" Geet replied with a nervous laugh, mentally slapping herself for such a stupid lie.
Dadi eyed Geet in confusion and placed a loving hand on her cheek. She realised Geet would be nervous about the wedding and could understand her situation. "Geet beta, aap fikar mat kee jiye. Aaj bauhat khushi ka din hai, sab kuch theek hoga". She patted Geet's head once more and told her that the girls would be on their way to her shortly to get her dressed for the wedding ceremony.
Geet was quickly reminded of her annoyance with the mention of the "girls". It was because of them that she was suffering at this very moment. She was unable to understand how to face everyone soon with her hands in such a... such a... compromising state. She moved her attention back to her hands which were then quickly taken into another's, as she felt herself being pulled into a tight hold.
"MAAN?" Geet's agitation suddenly rose once again as she pleaded Maan to let go of her hands. Maan was perplexed as he had in fact grabbed Geet by the waist, not her hands. He leaned forward, taking in the sweet expressions of the beauty before him. He traced her fearful face with his eyes, stopping at her moving lips.
"Geet". Maan's warm breath trailed onto Geet's lips preventing her from fidgeting any longer. Her eyes instantly met Maan's and trailed down to his lips as he spoke softly, making her eyes close in content as his intoxicating voice made her lose all senses.
"Geet" he uttered, pressing her waist harder and continued "maine tumhare haath nahi pakre hue.."
"To mat pakriye na, varna dekhne ke
baad, pata nahi kya kya pakar ne ka dil karega"
Geet's eyes instantly popped open in shock of what she might have stupidly revealed in her daze. Her fear hit new levels as she could see the growing curiosity faintly appearing on Maan's face. She watched silently as Maan's gaze shifted from her lips, to her eyes, to her hands which were no longer clenched into fists against his chest, but were gripping his shirt loosely, and back upto the eyes that were blurting out what Geet feared.
Geet felt a cool breeze touch her skin as she felt Maan's hand slowly retreating from her waist and moved up towards her hands.
*In fulltoo Worldcup mode as I'm in a very good mood*
chotii chotii cheezein to note:
Idea for OS
The OS should be completed in 4-5 parts, depending on how much you guys like it and how much I end up writing It seems to be turning into a Mini SS... We'll see about that though...
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