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AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 (Page 9)

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:16am | IP Logged
aww dnt worry pocoHug, we dnt expect replies, just tht u dnt mind giving us someLOL

daksh seems to be this dark, mean, angry, handsome, young(erm..) types.. and panch dear, dnt go tht far, abhi hi daat padne waali haiOuch
and.. wht black shadows wer they? and this is y he yells at her.... and tht was scaryOuch one line from daksh and she strted quaking in  her boots, one momt his thoughts wer making her go pink and the next very moment- THISOuch
loved the way uve written this part, with every lil detail, making reading a pleasureBig smile

am glad tht chand and haseena dnt hate pia, enuf of negitivity for abhiya now.. no more hopefully.. uve made me fall for this goodie goodie vampie abhay.. angel like, no faults, no evil in him.. quite calm and friendly, he'd do anything for his loved ones..friends, family.. he can evn deal with bloodTongue but poco, arent there any issues with him, any weakness, the other side of him.... or is he just plain good?

anyway nice update, abhay and chandeenas convo was nice and meaningful, they care for their son and abhay will always respect them..Tongue
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
It was a very well written chp.I felt kinda bad for Panchi.Daksh did have a good reason to get worked up but still I mean she has absolutely no clue about all this and she got yelled at for that,poor thing!Ouch Despite being a vampire I wonder why Abhay isn't able to sense any kind of danger coming his wayConfusedAnyway,looking forward to the next chpSmile

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei poco,
this is d 1st time i'm writing a comment even though i press like button..so i got 1st b4 the other regular friends who comment abt this update..1st of all i should say tat u r an amazing writer even though u know it for urself from all the comments n no. of members who press like..i love all ur writings (FF,analysis everything)..u hav a spl way of telling things..

Thank you so much for taking out time and replying to my FF and i really appreciate that. Smile

so today's update had more of panchi n daksh..panchi wud hav been scared to see daksh in this state..will she come back to c him even if its related to work?but i started loving them too apart from abhiya,samish,kabir-anushka..but apart from samish u r starting to giv sam-t parts...but v love more of samish..but feel sorry for t's present condition..but u said earlier tat mish will b sam's soulmate so reg d dream in d last update i got confused..will he really choose t over misha?

Daksh will smooth matters out with Pancchi once his temper cools. Pancchi did something forbidden and dangerous without realizing it. If Daksh wouldn't have come out in time, Pancchi would have been dead. Sam-Misha are soulmates and that is not going to change. But T is a very important part of their arc and as the story progresses , you will know why. Yes, Sam will choose T over Misha because Misha has rejected him, will reject him. There is a lot of ego between them and as we have seen , they are volatile.


so when is danish going to die?even though he did some bad things this is not way for him to die...u cud hav better let him die b4 itself without making him a vampire..poor danish..

Danish has done his share of evil deeds and we can say that becoming a vampire was just the twist in his destiny. He needs to be released now and he will be. He has paid enough ,suffered enough - he should sleep now. Danish will be killed by a vampire slayer and soon.

in next update anush is going to erase abhay's memory of pia right?but v want 2 c the fiercy comeback of anushka very soon..when will she tell pia abt her erasing abhay's memory..
i feel very much amused thinking of reading when anush will come back powerful n make natz n metz cry 4 wat they did with her.really i'm expecting it..ok tats it for now..update soon..

Anushka will erase Abhay's memory in the next to next update. She will tell Piya about what she has done when Abhay will not remember Piya's love and will go back to Maithli. Don't worry about Anushka. She has something cooking in her head already even though she has to go ahead with the manipulation.



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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by heena_mehta

hey poco dat was such a stunning and mindblwoing part...i luvd every single bit of it!!
daksh and panchi's part was awesome.....
i knw giving xplanations is not part of daksh's nature bt still i m luking forward for his xplanation to panchi, regarding his sudden outbrust......is he gng to say sry???ConfusedConfused

Daksh will say sorry but he will not explain things to Pancchi. That is not his nature at all. But he will normalize Pancchi in his own way.

so finally abhay has accepted his relationship wid piyaEmbarrassed..
i just luvd d way abhay placed himself infront of his parents regarding his and piya's life!!

Abhay is not the one to be cowed down , manipulated or made to follow orders. He is his own man and both Chaand-Haseena know that they have little control over his decisions. As per Abhay , him and Piya are forever.


tel me poco, av u taken some professional classess of writing or wat i feel abt dat supernatural thing is rite??Wink

Oh Lord. You sure are going to brand me supernatural very soon. OuchLOL

just wanna say u r awesome!!

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

aww dnt worry pocoHug, we dnt expect replies, just tht u dnt mind giving us someLOL

YAYY! Now, i can comment for once and all. ROFLHug

daksh seems to be this dark, mean, angry, handsome, young(erm..) types.. and panch dear, dnt go tht far, abhi hi daat padne waali haiOuch
and.. wht black shadows wer they? and this is y he yells at her.... and tht was scaryOuch one line from daksh and she strted quaking in  her boots, one momt his thoughts wer making her go pink and the next very moment- THISOuch
loved the way uve written this part, with every lil detail, making reading a pleasureBig smile

Daksh is young! LOL He is not handsome , he is HOT. Blushing.....The shadows were ghostly powers who are summoned by vampire slayers to derive  power  from. Pancchi is just attracted to Daksh on pure physicality - there is no emotion involved yet because she hardly knows Daksh. And Pancchi is stupid if she thinks Daksh can't sense her hormonol jumps. AngryLOL



am glad tht chand and haseena dnt hate pia, enuf of negitivity for abhiya now.. no more hopefully.. uve made me fall for this goodie goodie vampie abhay.. angel like, no faults, no evil in him.. quite calm and friendly, he'd do anything for his loved ones..friends, family.. he can evn deal with bloodTongue but poco, arent there any issues with him, any weakness, the other side of him.... or is he just plain good?

Liz, Abhay is a vampire with layers. A vampire whom the werewolves want , the Bolshvas want. Then, how can he be without faults? Inside every human being lives a demon and inside every supernatural , there is a dash of evil. We all have something that we want to lock away and Abhay is no different. And we shall see that as we go ahead.


anyway nice update, abhay and chandeenas convo was nice and meaningful, they care for their son and abhay will always respect them..Tongue

Chaand and Haseena care for Abhay , yes but remember i mentioned the sanctum? It is more for the sanctum that they need to guard Abhay. Abhay respects them but will he always respect them ? Hmmmm.


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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruthiR

It was a very well written chp.I felt kinda bad for Panchi.Daksh did have a good reason to get worked up but still I mean she has absolutely no clue about all this and she got yelled at for that,poor thing!Ouch Despite being a vampire I wonder why Abhay isn't able to sense any kind of danger coming his wayConfusedAnyway,looking forward to the next chpSmile


Daksh just saved Pancchi from being devoured by a set of ghosts and of course he lost his mind at what had just happened. LOL.... don't worry, he will manaao the poor thing soon and that too without much effort.

If you look at it , the only troubles that Abhay cannot sense are the ones that are supernatural. In my theory , supernatural blocks supernatural. See, Abhay coudn't sense Anushka's troubled decision or what was running in Chaand and Haseena's minds. Because they blocked him. Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 6:15am | IP Logged
 u know poco u r beyond words.... All ur updates be it FF or episode  decision, all so well reasoned ..... u don't let things flow in vain. U give history about all even if the minuet  things.and that is wht maks evryone more fond of u....i try to read ur replies and really hats off to u for replying to each one us...u answer our curiosity and yet again develop another... ! 

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