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AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 (Page 51)

TheBlackJaguar IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 12:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ssshh

well good jobThumbs Up.its nice chapterSmile.poor piyaOuch,she can't control her emtion and reveal it in form of anger on my poor abhayConfusedWinkLOL.who don't even know his faultLOL.but its good that he has some unknown feeling for piyaEmbarrassed which will help piya to get his menWink,oops sorry whatever i really feel sorry for abhay who have to face piya's anger LOL.
wowBig smile,mish on T's home,for whatShocked?don't knowConfused bt one thing confirm is that she can't leave or give a single day to sam without fighting or argueWinkLOLROFL.or else saywill not give a peacefull day to samROFL .
both sis's will not give a any chance toteir beloved to flirt with other girlsROFL .that's the spiritThumbs UpWink.
poor panchiConfused,she don't know what the hell ,she is goingAngryi don't like a puppet panchi in serial or ff who don't consider her freind for her love.Angry.
will u tell us what's the poweror weakness of vampire slyorD'oh and how will abhiya fight to these super natural clanShocked.
also curious to kiber's secretErmm,i hope he will not turn into bad after relevation of his secretShocked. or against to abhiya.and what about his feeling for anu EmbarrassedConfused?
fast update,i don't like itWink,b'coz i love itHug
update soonSmile

 Thank you so much, sweetz. Abhay-Piya are going to be fun, DP are tragic and Kabir will quite be a revelation as he will refuse to slay vampires without valid reason. Vampire slayers have immense physical strength and they get the powers of the vampires they kill. 

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TheBlackJaguar IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chill_Out

Originally posted by Pocahontas

  And it is good to have you back , Chillz . I thought you had lost interest in my FF.LOL... come back soon as i await your feedback. Embarrassed

Aww! That is so sweet! It's amazing to be back, too! Lol! I can never lose interest in your FF, Poco! That's asking for way too much out of me Tongue
Edited my comment on pg 45. In case you don't want to go back, I'm posting here again Big smile

Omg! Poco, this FF is going more amazing than ever! What I like the best is that each and every character is somehow related to the main plot and that's what is ideally suppose to happen! 
I really like this Zeenia female but I do miss Anushka. Hope to see her back soon. Abhay remembers Anushka right? How will they explain Anushka gone and Zeenia in her place to him? And better still, what will they tell Kabir?
Speaking of Abhay, omg, he is so powerful and he doesn't even know it! Wow! I really liked that part because it actually made me understand so many things. I think we all had this question lingering on for a long time: Why Abhay? So, we will see Abhay literally suffering from MPD in case he gets his hands on that ring? So technically, since Zeenia has taken over Anushka's life, so she is suppose to protect the ring now. I instantly develop that trust on her that she is going to do her job well. Or maybe, like Pia, I trust Anushka's choice!
And gosh, now we have Abeer too? This just keeps getting more and more intriguing! I can't wait for his entry! Btw, separated at birth as in as vampires right? 
I actually feel so bad for Pia. Watching Abhay in love with someone else after all that they've been through. Ouch! 
I don't know why, but I can't bring myself to hate Maithili after what I read on page 36. She seems genuinely overjoyed to have Abhay back. Nevertheless, it hurts to see Abhay in her arms =/
BTW, did I ever mention that I've started liking Sam-Pia as much as I adore Abhay-Misha? LOL LOL LOL I don't know, there's something so endearing about them! Tongue
And I so loved when Misha said 'His mind might have forgotten you, but his heart remembers you'. She's so right! Supernatural power can control the mind not the heart. Reminds me of when Jeremy tells Damon that he'd never taken away his suffering on losing Vicki. He'd just made him forget the reason for his suffering but the suffering had always been there. So, bottomline is that Abhay has forgotten Pia but not his love for her. I can see that. He also feels the emptiness, he also senses something alien on touching Maithili simply because in his heart of hearts, he is still Pia's Abhay. It's actually worse for him, he has no idea what is happening with him, he has no idea why he gets so uneasy in his programmed life!
Lol! Daksh and Panchi finally kiss? Gosh! Is she in for another heartbreak? Because I so don't want that! Cry I thought it'll be revealed by now who Daksh actually is Tongue
Lizzie told me PiaMish are in for a rift? Please say No, Poco! You know how much I love them! AbhIya are also not together right now for all practical purposes. I can't have PiaMish separating too! I won't be able to live with it! Ouch Ouch Ouch
Coming to the whole Sam-Mish-T thing, well, T needs help. I can see that she's having a rather tough time living with herself and Sam is helping her out. Both are mutually developing a soft corner for each other. I don't think T will have the heart to do anything to harm Sam intentionally. It will have to be instincts, if at all she does something. Misha and Sam need to stop giving each other so much attitude and just talk now! With so much happening around them, they really need to clear stuff out at least with each other.

Errmmm...I believe I've covered up pretty much everything I've read since the morning. Lol! You're so amazing, Pocoz! The updates were mindblowing! Lizzie and her spoilers really didn't spoil anything because the way you write is out of this world! It still kept me hooked despite having a rough idea of the tracks! :P

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!Hug......its so good to have you back, honey. Yeah, you have covered everything that you missed and am glad that you still like the story. Embarrassed

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TheBlackJaguar IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 12:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AbhiYa_luver

Thanks for the luck Poco! I'm pretty sure that I did good. Right now, we are doing sound waves, and it was the final project for the subject. We had to make a musical instrument, so I made something sort of like wind chimes!

Abhay confuses me sometimes. He knows in his heart that Piya is special to him, be he ignores his heart, and just listens to his mind, and what he is thinking. When things like love came around, you should not think from your mind, but from your heart. Abhay does that, but then he catches himself, and reminds himself that he loves Maithli, and that Piya is just her niece, nothing more. He should listen to his heart more often! Smile I was wondering, if he finds out that he loved Piya, not Maithli, and figures out what Maithli did, will his memories come back? What I mean to say is, are his memories completely gone, or are they just suppressed, and his heart is doing all of the "remembering"? Even though T thinks she doesn't have feelings, you can tell that she feels somewhat bad for all the things she is doing to Sam. That little shred of humanity is what makes T different from all the other Bolshes, right? It is ironic, that the hidden Bolshva, the one they had been looking for for so long to be their strength turns out to be the one who has the most sense of right and wrong. Were all the Bolshes this way feeling bad at first, but then destroyed all shreds of their humanity, or is it just T who is feeling? Misha is confusing me too. I though that she was jealous of all the attention that Sam gives T, so why would she tell T to call him?

Update fast Poco... or at least answer all my questions! LOL

You made wind chimes? WOW! they sound good?

Abhay's memories will come back on their own, overriding Anushka's spell and shocking everyone. The power of love is the greatest and no black magic can consume it. T is a hidden Bolshva who was found too late and did not grow up with the clan. She lived amongst human-beings and whatever humanity she had , no matter how little has become magnified now as she misses it. Misha is going to surprise you. Embarrassed

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TheBlackJaguar IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 1:01am | IP Logged

Misha apologizes to T and Sam for treating them so shabbily. Daksh sleeps with Pancchi and conveniently makes her forget it , exercising control over her. Danish attacks Kabir and Kabir defends himself, killing him with Daksh's help. Danish dies in Pancchi's arms, his misery coming to an end. Piya visits Maithli at her house but with Zeenia. Abhay wants to bring Maithli to Raichand Mansion , Haseena and Chaand throw a fit . Its Piya who convinces Abhay to reconsider his decision. 

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mangona Senior Member

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 3:16am | IP Logged
hi poco iam silent reader but  now is the time 2 break silence and congrats from me ur a awsome writer and i dont have words 2 describe u ad me in ur pm list

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Untitled001 Goldie

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pocahontas

[QUOTE=Paradisekiss053]It was great read both chapters... yes I am glad he didnt forget her completely but thats even worse in my point of view. he just feels for her. he will realize it soon. As for T and Misha one. Good one. This proves T is good from heart actually. i dont know why but i really feel bad for her. I think she is good.

Thank you.Big smile....Abhay's mind is conflicting with his heart, actually and that is going to drive him up the wall. I feel bad for T as well. She is just damned forever. 

Really does she have to be eternally damned? Not that I like her in the show but everyone deserves someone and I kind of like Sam T more than Misha Sam. I dont know. I guess I am awkward! Tongue

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.Jane.. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pocahontas

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!Hug......its so good to have you back, honey. Yeah, you have covered everything that you missed and am glad that you still like the story. Embarrassed

Thanks, Pocozzzzz! Hug
Actually, I had exams, then something else came up so couldn't really follow. I'm so Sorry =(

@Precap: Aww! I'm so glad Misha apologised! So that's why she was at T's!! Great! So can I hope for things to sort out between SaMish? Big smile
WHAt? Daksh SLEEPS with Panchi? Seriously?! Omg! No!! You're kidding me right? Of course, the precap was posted on 1st April! Lol!! Ok, on a serious note, omg! Omg! Omg! Yeh kya hua? Why did Daksh do that and how did Panchi agree in the first place? Or did he have the compulsion power? Omg! Will he use Panchi like Damon used Caroline?! Uh-Oh! 
Kabir and Daksh kill Danish? I thought you said Danish will go and beg Abhay to kill him! But ya, this change in track will be very emotionally exhausting, specially for Panchi! Omg, he dies in her arms! That is so sad! Ouch But I guess he'll go to a better place.
Lol! So Pia can still convince Abhay, huh? Abhay wanted to bring Maithili to the R's, I can imagine what poor Pia must've gone through!

Update soooooooon, Pocozz!! Waiting! Big smile

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WiseGirl Senior Member

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
Yeah, Poco, they sound pretty good, but they don't make a scale or anything... But I got full points for it, so for that, I am happy. 

That is why you said that Misha was going to surprise me! I didn't think that Misha would need to apologize. I mean, all she did and said had good reason, and she didn't know any better than to react the way that she did. I hate Daksh! How can he do that? He just wants to test his control over Pancchi, and he doesn't even care for her. Like I said before, he is just using her to get what he wants. Yay! The part where we find out that Kabir is a vampire slayer is finally coming up! But, it's a good thing that Kabir isn't going to kill vampires without a cause. That would have caused an unnecessary rift between him and Piya, and ruined their friendship. Will Daksh make Pancchi comfortable with the supernatural world with his control over Pancchi? Almost everyone who is important to her is supernatural or involved with the supernatural. At this point, I wouldn't be surprised if Arnab and Madhu turned out to be supernatural too! LOL I wonder how Zeenia is going to react to Maithli... I think that if Maithli wasn't evil, then Maithli and Zeenia would be like best friends. It's a good thing that Piya still has some influence over Abhay. It will probably reassure her somewhat that his heart will overtake the memory loss.

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