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AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 (Page 15)

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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 8:57am | IP Logged
superb chapterSmile,iloved abiya-mish convo and poor samThumbs Up ,he had to say "truce"LOL

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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
hey pocoBig smile i just have to say you are absolutely fabulousClap
 
u know im totally over the depression phase and im soo lookin forward to this new track which is undoubtedly gona be a major turning point. i can't wait to see hw abhay and pia are gona connect again. they are soulmates after all so it will be really interesting to see hw they pass this test of love.
 
i really love anushka and am sad that she's so weak right nw but i admire her confidence. she knows what she's doing and got it all planned out. she really is a master witch.
 
and even though i love sam n mish together, i understand why he fits better wid T. i think they are perfect for each other. from what i see T has triggered sam's feelings and emotions to a deeper extent.
 
oh and im loving abhay n pia's cute fights. they are soo adorable. And abhay wearing colour was surely somethingDay Dreaming i truly loved that scene especially when sam, mish and tracker were gawking at himLOL sam is too good and i love his wicked sense of humour. i loved the sam-mish fight too ,even more when abhay jumped inLOL
 
only you can come up wid such a brilliant piece of work wid all the twists n turns and make it xtremely enjoyable instead of all the depressing scenes we were expecting.
 
keep up the brilliant work and im really looking forward to ur nxt update. take careHugHug

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Hii Poco...
wat a beautiful update...... its sssooooo gripping that hoeever tired i am after back to work, the moment i notice it, i havvvveee to finish reading it.. and everytime it ends, i have just thot.. yeh dil maange more.. very very soon..
thanks for the updates..
you r smply the best FF writer.. :-)

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

LOLOMG OMG!!

poco, this has got to be one of your best story track.. for me atleast!! like seriously yaar, itne ideas laati kahaan se ho? so into this story track..Tongue

the highness seems to be a nice soul herself, and she quite likes anush too...

you knw wht, more thn anything, the only thing am excited...no, over excited is for= ZEENIA!!

oh god, this character was so needed with the heavy a-p and s-m-t track we r going to have.

and.. i'll miss anush too.. kabeers gonaa have a toucgh time.. trust me, the kid in me is just waiting for her entry!!LOL

and hopefully the spice aunty will take away the curseOuch

abhay in another color?Embarrassed poco, i usded to keep asking u of this track.. remember? i thot tum bhool gayi:P

and wen their friends r around, its more fun to read bout them, their reactions, specially abhay's, id expect a totally diff abhay if id see him onscreenLOL

a-p are so in lovee, and one thing tht i just wldnt want to read is as anush said, zee shldnt make fun of piya, piya wld still take her as anush rite... she'd be completely broken then..

sam-mishEmbarrassed- these little little scenes tht u give me of samish.... how can i thank u for them.. they both r so scared of abhayLOL and they so wnt giveup giving each other those looks..

mish waits anxiously for one movement from sam, and she bites his head offLOL and sam has so learnt of the heat between them, he just refuses to accept it.. and then he gives it right back on her face.. he even gave ruhi the creeps today.. 

i guess this phase is still fun to read.. idk wht will it be like ahead, but till now, samish is my personal favorite track.. 

and.. u didnt answer one thing poco, so ill ask again... coz u knw more whts up with sam.. i still dnt understand him... sam chose t over mish, and we all knw why.. mish treated him tht way and yeah... but wht if he knew mish did love him? wld he still choose t over her? (remember him saying mish 'doesnt love me' after he woke up from the dream-tht maya showed him?)

and sam, who just blows a gasket wen he looks at mish, he still wants to stay connected with her..Embarrassed  w/e it is, he does care, right??Embarrassed




Thank you so much , Liz.. Zeenia is going to be a blast - she is all mischief and naughtiness and she is going to shred Anushka's reputation to bits. Kabir will totally lose his head wondering what the hell has happened to the softie Anushka. Piya will know that its Zeenia and not Anushka. Sambhav-Misha will be civil to each-other from now on. As for Sam, well, by the time Misha realizes and accepts her love for him , Sam will be attached to T and the situation at that point will not let Sam leave T . If you want to ask me that will Sam fall in love with T? YES.

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by heena_mehta

poco dear last part was fantabulous!!!....
bt y it came to end ??Cry....i felt it was so short...although i feel this thing each n every time, i read ur ff......i want it to go on and on and on......LOL......n wanna lost some where in ur supernatural world of love, magic, powers witches, hatred and all emotionsSmile

omg!! abhay was wearing a different colour!!........seeing him in a different colour is like a dream wen it comes to pkyek.......bt finally thorugh ur ff it has come trueEmbarrassed...

finally u av shown a ray of hope through anushka's visit to dat highness....dat natasha and maithili's game wl surely come to end!!
 wl anushka bring abhay's memory back wen this whole game comes to an end?

wats wrong wid sam.....cn't he understand misha's situation......i m just so confused wen it comes to both of them....ConfusedConfused.....both of them need to work with their ego problem!!Ouch!!
hope abhay's words help them although i know its difficultLOLLOL
..........................

luv
heena





Thank you so much, Heena. I am glad that you enjoyed the update. But how was it short?Shocked...i wrote 9 pages!LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL....Sam-Misha? Just enjoy them. I don't think anyone can understand them and why they are connected and yet disconnected. Anushka will be back and till then, we will have fun with Zeenia. These are the last moments of Abhay-Piya before the memory manipulation and am trying to make them as happy and as beautiful as possible. Big smile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sosweetsumi

okay wow 
anuskha is great she had back up plan for everything 
and abhay in colors was so great
everyones reaction was hilarious
abhay the peacemaker why i am not surprised.
sam and misha needs to grow up but yeah they have a different equation.
do continue
bye sumi


Thank you, Sumi. Abhay is a sweetheart. It is difficult to imagine that he could have a dark side, isn't it? But he has.  Sam-Misha? They will grow up together. LOL
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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Antara106

Great update Poco....Thumbs Up
 
hmmm, Anushka said something (or thought maybe) about her being a SAPPHIRE witch...  umm, what exactly is a SAPPHIRE WITCH???? And if a KEEPER enters into her body while she goes to the underworld, what exactly will happen to her powers??? i mean to say that how will her powers get transferred to the keeper?? And Daksh is not a VAMPIRE??? If not, what exactly is he..... Definately not a human, i guess...Ermm.
 
I'm really sad for Abhiya.... They just got together and they are gonna get separated so soon???? hmmm....Cry
 
Your updats are getting interesting day by day..... well, keep writing and updating..... Waiting to read the next update soon.....


Sapphire witches are the most powerful breed of witches. Anushka is the last Sapphire witch in earth and if she has daughters , they will be the next generation of Sapphire witches.  The keeper guards the body and the original spirit can transfer his/her powers to her. The Keeper loses them as soon he/she vacates the body.  Daksh is a vampire slayer.

Abhay-Piya will still be fun. Don't worry. Smile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rozy77

hey pocoBig smile i just have to say you are absolutely fabulousClap
 
u know im totally over the depression phase and im soo lookin forward to this new track which is undoubtedly gona be a major turning point. i can't wait to see hw abhay and pia are gona connect again. they are soulmates after all so it will be really interesting to see hw they pass this test of love.
 
i really love anushka and am sad that she's so weak right nw but i admire her confidence. she knows what she's doing and got it all planned out. she really is a master witch.
 
and even though i love sam n mish together, i understand why he fits better wid T. i think they are perfect for each other. from what i see T has triggered sam's feelings and emotions to a deeper extent.
 
oh and im loving abhay n pia's cute fights. they are soo adorable. And abhay wearing colour was surely somethingDay Dreaming i truly loved that scene especially when sam, mish and tracker were gawking at himLOL sam is too good and i love his wicked sense of humour. i loved the sam-mish fight too ,even more when abhay jumped inLOL
 
only you can come up wid such a brilliant piece of work wid all the twists n turns and make it xtremely enjoyable instead of all the depressing scenes we were expecting.
 
keep up the brilliant work and im really looking forward to ur nxt update. take careHugHug



I am so grateful to you for reading and enjoying my work. i will try to get Abhay-Piya as intense as i can when we get to the point of him having forgotten her. It is all cute , romantic and rosy right now because it will get aggressive , bitter and intense later. Sam-Misha will behave themselves now , hopefully. LOL.... yeah, everybody was gawking at Abhay. He just looked out of this world. Embarrassed

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