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AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 (Page 116)

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
awesum part!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Thanks Poco for this long awesome update.
Abheer. What a character! Not sure, what Zee is gonna do. Fir now it just looks impossible for Misha to resist Abheer. Sam's concern was so touchy. AbhIya were amazing.
I think Abheer will visit him in his most fragile statue.
Will be waiting for more.

Luv, Neha

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Amazing update!!! It completely rocked!! The Abhiya part was so passionate and then so sad!! You have shown all the feelings just perfectly and I could feel Abhay's confusion and Piya's pain... =( Is Abhay going to find out soon? He is going to be so hurt.. and I wonder how he will react to it...

And Abheer... Shocked He is just so god damn evil. He has the blood of all supernaturals.. He is the epitome of evil... Tongue But seriously... I hate this guy!

Sam's concern for Misha was just so touchy and it made go aww... I felt like he would rip Abheer's head off for being so close to Misha and kissing her.. Tongue Loved his concern...

Ooo.. the meeting.. I wonder why Sam and Zee need to go there!? Hmmm...

And the ending of the chapter sort of has left me confused me.. "A
nd leaving Piya's arm with a jerk , the old unrest rising in his eyes, he goes away. Piya looks at Zeenia who is standing with Misha near the car. And they both think the same thing….ANUSHKA!" Why were they thinking of Anush?? Hopefully my confusion will be cleared soon!

Anyways, continue soon!

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 7:02am | IP Logged
wow so sam stil luves mish and zeenia is stil going crazy over abheer totally crazy

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 7:50am | IP Logged
edited on page 115.

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa


ABHEER!!!
nitz... U ACTUALLY GAVE BIRTH TO THIS CHARACTER????
like seriously dear.. after sam... u changed abhay completely... then u gave me zeenia!! sh is this character whis is just some other character, thenon imp one... but still so close to me.. i so cannot look at this ff without her... and sam ofcourse!!! u even made me like t.. even after she was being paired opp sam... and then made me like the whole *abhay forgetting piya* period..

In short, you are liking the way this FF is going , right? I guess its not even a FF anymore. It seems to have nothing to do with PKYEK anymore except the names and some fragments. Thank you so much for liking everyone in the story, Liz. They all are full of faults but you still like them and that says  lot to me. I love giving Zeenia those lines. She is, like, never serious. LOL



 am glad to be following this ff.. even after being busy, it pulls be bk to itself
and then aKKu keeps telling me bout it.. she so wants to discuss it, and is like- JAAOOO... COMMENT KARRO!!!!
so am here.. i cannot comment in 2 lines, so i rather comment after 2 3 parts due to lack of time.. forgivess maata poco! 

ohk.. bk to abheer... sweetie, i can see wht a badass he is, but ive read this book (again coz of akku) and here, the lead is this bad.. mean.. heartless, and still, he just turns into a newleaf wen he falls for THAt girl.. its nt on the spot... he changes quite later.. so if abheer changes, am so in for abhisha.. and even if he doesnt... lol... am still ok with him at the moment...
each and every part of his i read.. just makes me grin.. tho I AM considered for mish.. but then she has sam and abhay to see to it tht she wont actually be hurting her self.. and again, i dnt think abheer mite go to an extent of killing her.. but am just a lil scared of him hurting her emotionally.. like- jus a lil..
after wht happened with sam, i dnt think she'd be all ok soon.. but then she still has sam as a friend na...
currently, ABHEER  is the flavour of my month.. lol.. not evn sam

Liz, am myself traveling with Abheer and i suddenly feel that i have no control over this particular character. He seems to have a life of his own , a mind of his own and its going to be hard writing about him and writing him. I don't know whether he will change. He is , i don't know. I am still finding adjectives for him. Abheer doesn't kill people, physically. People just die for him. He is a hypnosis , a trance in the name of a vampire. I have no idea yet where Misha is going with him. 

abheer actually has her.. calling her a lamb and getting away without her one liners?? he cant do nething to pia.. and he hates T?? lmao... she irritaates him?? lol..panchi kabeer and metz.. he is so bored looking at the way their life is goingconfused and SO NT INTERESTING.
and he likes zee like i do but he cant take a lot of zee at atime!!! 
he is telling her everything.. he is so not playing the mysterious man ne more... and he isnt even scared of ne one!!
god!! am loving this man!
i like the confidence he has wen he says tht nothing is definate.. surely not hatred 
god! am i mad.. i cant like a villian for my mish...
its all ur fault poco! u dont get to make VILLIANS so sexy

No, you are not mad. Abheer is flawless evil. He doesn't care about anyone and he ha no idea why people complicate their lives so much. Its easy for him - just get done what you want to be done. LOL

prr pr parrr.. i hate him calling her a toy

and abhiya... right now.. i so have no words to describe how well was the whole scene written.. i literally have no words coz after i was done with the part, i was still staring at my screen with no expressions on my face.. but just a feeling.. something magical.. sigh!


abhay is already screwed up coz of the memory lane.. and piya screwed it up all the more.. and the funniest was wen he went like- this kiss was just the preliums.. :P

Abhay is on a roll.He is no longer the genteel , sweet , mild vampire. There is a lot of aggression and density to him now. His character is evolving and Piya seriously doesn't know how to tackle him. 

next with mish.. she is all scared and b4 calling abhay she cals up sam.. and is like - SAM! RED ALERT!! this girl is hilarious...
AND THEN THE POOR DOLL IS STILL NOT OUT OF THE SHOCK!! poco am so addicted to this again!!!
get me out of thisss..
and out of the blue MADAME ZEE GOES LIKE-if he wasnt this charming, itd be fun killing him..

hell yeah!! he is charming!! his charms have worked on me, and still am nt scared of wht worse he can do.. i knw tht he has no extent, but i choose not to see tht.. :P
poco!! idk if i shld love or hate u for making him!!
am so addicted again!!Embarrassed 

You are addicted to Abheer, i think. Not this FF. LOL

and on the other hand am soo loving sam.. he is another adorable invention :))
he is so worried for mish... i always wanted to see him this way... :P
and then he want to get her neckdetoxed.. i wonder how long will this be for??

the ritual to save mish looks quite promising.. and in the next update we get to see anush right??
plz cont soon..
g2g and read this update all over again!! it was just amazing.

Sambhav ? Hmm... You are not going to like what he is going to do. Soon. The animal in him will cause devastation again and this time the mistake will be irreversible and scar both him and a certain someone for life. Ouch

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

res! pocooo, i lobe you. i'll unreserve tomorrow! <3 

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okay, tell me where to start!? i've re-read this part again and again.. like i do for all of your parts. let me start with a simple - do you know how much of a fabulous and realistic writer you are?! go make a show, i'll sponsor you. :P 

Thank you, Akkoo. I hope to be an ace TV scriptwriter and a novelist someday - am on my way already. So maybe this is just the groundwork that am doing. It will happen eventually, it has to. Fingers crossed. Big smile

the abhiya part was beautifully described. you make someone like me who doesn't even like abhiya love their parts - i guess, that's all i can say. this is the only ff where i actually like 'em, apart from sanu's. :P i loved pia and abhay breaking down, and then the whole deja vu feeling. and ohmigosh, did abhay just threaten pia that there will be more than just a kiss if she hides things from him? that was.. well...wild.

Abhay is not going to rest now. He  will find out the truth - about Piya , about what everyone is hiding from him and finally leading him to the ring. 

misha is so confused, i feel sorry for her. i know it's gonna get worse - but, if they do manage to do the ritual with the help of T, won't misha be able to resist him.. and then, well, abheer could always think of a new plan, turn other people into his favour - i kinda got that from their conversation. but, then, having misha under his control was a plus point, right? or would the 'ritual' not be successful for any reason whatsoever? i have my doubts about t helping them, though i think she would..'coz of the kiss scene n yeah.

Errm. What if Misha is attracted to Abheer inspite of the ritual? What if her attraction to Abheer is not because of his supernatural magnetism? And what if Abheer doesn't want to control Misha but wants something from her? Abheer can have any woman he wants and he has come for Abhay , right? Then, what does he want from a cute girl next door like Misha, hmm? 

i love sam - he's just SO adorable. i know, i know, i kinda got disloyal there, loving abheer n all - i still love him; he's such a vagabond, and yeah.. i love badasses n all..and i know so do you, you love claus. :P okay, coming back to sam, he's such a cutiepie. he was worried, angry, some more worried, and some more angry that she didn't take a stand when he kissed her, aw. i don't know whether to hope or not to hope that the ritual works. i prefer the fiesty misha, but the helpless misha is fun, too. LOL to be honest, i want abheer to get a taste of her feistyness where she isn't attracted to him. (;

Oh, i am in love with Joseph Morgan and addicted to Klaus. He really is my new obsession. Haha. Sambhav will soon have no right to judge or sermonize anyone. The ritual will work , of course. Abheer doesn't take attitude because nobody gives it to him. Just look at him. Who would give him attitude and why? He is such a sweet talker and pretty caring. Isn't he? Embarrassed



continue sooon! ...varna gaane gaayenge. Big smile

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Akshi0019

its gr8...StarStar i loved it...LOLLOLi hope abhay will find out d truth early...SmileSmilen misha will be fine
 

Abhay's journey to the truth will be step by step. And Misha may or may not be fine. Its tough to say anything at this stage. Smile

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