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AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 (Page 109)

ilove99 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 05 November 2010
Posts: 12994

Posted: 11 May 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
it is awesome poco Claplovely...but  mish...what's her business with abheer?what does he want from her?
that was too... passionate abheer seems evil...very evil!!!
he wants to hurt abhay but why what the hell is his problem?

and how did he kill those dogs and served for others we a good example too know how evil is he but also a big flirt or he was just showing it off!

now i understand why that poor farmer was afraid?doesn't he have any soft thing left in him like damon had for elena?he seems to be same in evilness as damon 
anyways i hope he will bring a good twist  to the story ...

i wonder what will be sams reaction...jealous,angry,scared or what?is it true tht no one can compete him...well,sure abhay can but only when abhay knows about his powers!!!

i didn't understand the double abhay thing what is it?what do you mean by two abhay?

abhiya were on fire today!! poor pia how much she will tolerate...
abhay is rally changed he is blaming everything to pia 
now i think pia will be singing -
mai karu to salla character dheela haiLOL

but you have not wrote anything about anush from a long time what's happening to her?how is she?did the curse break?i am missing her!!!!

update soon poco...luv u and ur ffWink

Edited by ilove99 - 11 May 2011 at 3:21am

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I-love-Roses IF-Dazzler

Joined: 14 February 2011
Posts: 2677

Posted: 11 May 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged
What an awesome n passionate update didi! I'm hating abheer even more. And abhiya? I'm jst speechless

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minahil1997 Goldie

Joined: 17 February 2011
Posts: 1701

Posted: 11 May 2011 at 3:51am | IP Logged
oh wow poco!!!!
 first yipeee!!!! it was a long update and a really nice one i loved itParty... abheer is a total bad boyWink ... and misha is already falling for himUnhappy ... i hope that he doesnt betray her and leave herOuch... i wish that both of them fall for each otherBig smile...abhiya part was superbBlushing... i am dying to read wat happens next and i would really love to see the frustrated face of mathili wen she comes to know bout it and abhay disagrees to sleep with herDay Dreaming... eagerly waitin fr ur nxt part continue soonHeart

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ssshh Goldie

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Posts: 1028

Posted: 11 May 2011 at 4:46am | IP Logged
LOLLOLEmbarrassedWinkOMGShockedEmbarrassed,what a interesting and amazing updateClap.i can n't breath properlyEmbarrassed.
i really love abhesha and abhiya 's partEmbarrassedEmbarrassed. i know that abheer is evilAngry but i can n't help bt i like himEmbarrassedWink. i don n't know why he hates abhayConfused.he is unpridectibleConfused bt i like his confidenceEmbarrassed.will he do any hanky panky with mishaConfusedShockedWink. he is smoothly i love himWinkEmbarrassed.
abhay gonna be insaneLOL.he does n't know what is he doingLOL.abhiya's locker room fight is really interestingWink and also it end up on kissWinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.LOLLOLlolz
awesome updateBig smileTongueSmile.

Edited by ssshh - 11 May 2011 at 11:01am

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_Klaroline_ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 November 2010
Posts: 2595

Posted: 11 May 2011 at 7:00am | IP Logged
lovely update
Abhiya was the best
Their arguement was really passionate
Abhay is blaming pia for everything even though he knows that he has a feeling for her
I really want to know what will be the response of abhay for that kiss
Pleeez continue with abhiya part
Pleeez can u pm me
Love u

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SatanLaughs Senior Member

Joined: 04 March 2011
Posts: 675

Posted: 11 May 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
D abhay-piya part was simply AWESUM.. It was FULL f passion & i lvd evry minute descriptn update SOON..& PLZ DO PM ME , WEN U UPDATE NEXT..

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Akankshaa. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged


poco, i love abheer. i am seriously in love with him. LOL he's so evil, and so hot, and so intense, and so .. evil. reading his scenes with misha, where he's just playing with her head..and her reactions to his bipolar swings are such a treat. lmao ..''hot'' pause. ''hot chocolate'' that cracked me up. ROFL oh, and i love the way he brought the werewolf thing up, & the available thing..and the virgin thing, damn it, he sure has guts. ROFL the whole calling her lamb thing.. i found that pretty adorable, to be honest - damn it, i am weird, ain't i? LOL. despite everything, i still don't find him cold-hearted; he's just too cool to be a villain. i esp love the way he passes all those comments & she is all feisty with him despite him having a psychological and physical advantage. aha, so misha is a 'toy' he liked, haan? let's see. (; oh, do i even need to mention? - the neck kiss was HOT.

the AP confrontation was awesome. even pia's feisty and i like that - and abhay's no less. ''i know what you were doing..'' ''oh yeah?'' *smirk* ''what was i doing?'' LOL the whole cornering her thing was nice..and the turmoil that abhay had been going through all this while - finally found a release. the kiss was awesome. let's see what abhay feels, nao. Embarrassed 

okay, is misha really going to go back & go like, ''hey guys, guess what? the satan kissed me.'' ROFL continue soon. <3

Edited by _Akanksha_ - 11 May 2011 at 2:43pm

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sosweetsumi IF-Dazzler

Joined: 02 April 2005
Posts: 4490

Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
great one ...
abheer is pure evil hope sam and abhay save misha 
piya abhay scene was good...
pia is behaving much maturely then her age...
hope abhay have some good memories...
do continue
bye sumi

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