Originally posted by _Akanksha_
i just wrote a BIG comment & pressed the backspace key. -.- F*L.
anyway, im too lazy to write it all over again..but. yeah. for you. i will. i LOVE kabir here! he's so awesome. i see a lot of tyler in him, to be honest. as in, the only difference is that he couldn't escape his fate..will kabir be able to? could he control the slayer inside him? if not, he'd be a lot like T, controlled by what he is; losing all his humanity slowly? though, i love the way his mind was everywhere but on anushka's - erm, zeenia's - clothes when he was dancing with her. she is toh totally fida over him.
Kabir has a lot of Tyler in him but Kabir is braver and he knows what he wants and what he is going too do. He will be nothing like T. Zeenia is driving him up the wall but lets see for how long he cannot figure out that his Anushka is not around. heyy, tyler is brave..isn't he? well, okay, he ran away..but. i love him. :P okay, well, that's a relief. daksh won't torture him like the bolshaves torture T, then? lol, he'll be fine.. i hope. zeenia can bheja fry anyone.
speaking of t, i love t & sam. i love how they're like a distant dream. star-crossed. intense! <3 carler are my favourite in TVD and they so remind me of 'em. i especially loved em in this part - it really gets to you when people like T or Kabir are happy! =]
T is perhaps the life changing experience that is softening Sam.He is beginning to care about people, think about other things than being a Chief and preparing for Abhay's long awaited funeral. He is finding the human being inside him again. And when T goes away , she will still leave the human being inside him behind.
Aw, that's nice. =] you know how i didn't like you for the sam-t track, now i'm loving em a lot. they have a bond so special & so intense - i love 'em. <3
abhiya were awesome. i love how everyone - including mac - can read the possessive inside abhay for pia except him. and he's all wicked trying to get over whatever he feels for maithali's doppleganger. a special mention to how pia handles all of this - she doesn't cry in a corner, she fights for her love, sticks with her love, believes in HIS love when he has forgotten everything about it.
Abhay is trying to translate all his emotional frustration into a wicked havoc on Piya . Or maybe he is trying to find out what Piya feels. Piya is feisty and aggressive but Abhay is her weakness. That might just break her if Abhay takes this too far just to wash off the guilt of cheating on Maithli.
Aw, well, if Pia breaks down in the end, I bet he'd feel guilty for whatever 'wickedness' he is gonna cause. Btw, does Abheer know about this brain transplant operation that happened to Abhay?.. That he forgot Pia n everything? 'Coz he's trying to reach to Abhay through Pia, right?
coming to my favourite part, poco, i need some answers. what does abheer want to do with misha? is it .. erm, another daksh-panchi replica? - will he sleep with her or something? anyway, i LOVED this update. misha is all pia-o-fied, LOL. but, i really loved how she was full on obsessed with him!
Abheer is cracking his entry into the Dobriyaal world and then the Raichand world through Misha. From Misha to the Dobriyaal family , from them to Piya and others and ultimately at Abhay's neck. He is going to spread like a cancer . Abheer's long term goal is to have an enslaved Abhay with the power of the ring who will live and die by Abheer's wishes. Abheer will hold everything Abhay loves at ransom.
Abheer does not plan to sleep with Misha or do nay dirty stuff with her. But Misha and Abheer will get drawn into a whirlpool where they both will collide against their own will. Unlike Sam, Abheer does not believe in rules or holding back. No rules or laws of the vampire world bind him as he is a vagabond. I love your play with words..I read these paragraphs, like, 10 times, trying to figure out the story but my brain reaches a DEAD END after a specific point. so, erm, abheer wants abhay enslaved because of his powers. and.. the whole 'colliding against their own will' and 'not holding back' thing only makes me want your updates SOONER. :P
continue SOON. && i just wrote the comment AGAIN. -.-
THANK YOU HONEY!
Psh, THANK YOU for this story ! An update makes my day! :D