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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
very nice..

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
yippeee maaneet meeting in next update...................cant wait for them to meet and see how the life will b changing for them both..............pl cont soon

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 6thElement

Let me first congratulate you on reaching 50 on this thread. Its been only 5 updates and you have a mad crowd following you. I'm sure you know all about it when I say, its great to bask in the glory of comments and feedback. 

Ok coming back to the updates.
All of them were very well written.  Can't wait to find out about the one night that changed her notion towards her men.
You have the readers on a leash, leaving them guessing about Geet's family too. Two for the count so far.
The next is Maan, who is quite take back by his own attraction to Geet. I believe there will be more updates where he is questioning himself about why he is being pulled away from Sameera.
So far Sameera looks quite healthy in the mix and I don't sense an evil tone in the time she did show up in the story.

I can't wait for the conversation they will have once they meet. I hope they have a striking one to start with. Are there going to be more nok-jhoks between them at the shaadi? Please do. We all can use up some marriage hall tiffs between the two. 
I'm refraining from analyzing the characters purposefully, for I want more of their selves to come out in the open before I could do so.
All in all, great update and never ever stop writing. It really is the window to the soul.

PS I'm not a review critic. I will definitely try to put my view points forward in the best way that it comes to me. Kindly excuse any improprieties. 

Hasini
 
 
Thank you Hasini for a long comment.
Ur comments mean a lot.Smile
Yes, Sameera is quite healthy...lets c if she stays the same.
Maan's self questioning, u guessed it rightWink
Nok-jhoks...lets see if I am able to do that.....
N u r absolutely right about writing being the window to the soul. I have learned to accept that fact already....after writing these 5 updates.Embarrassed
There was nothing improper about your comments...so don even think about all of that...
Rachana

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
waiting for maan and geet to meet again!
 
continue soon!

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged
amazing
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:58am | IP Logged
"I wandered Lonely as a Cloud"

I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten
thousand saw I at a glance,

Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
A poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed---and gazed---but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:

For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.


William Wordsworth





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