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~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan) (Page 42)

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loved the romantic update............

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part 39
nice cute part.................spending the night in the jungle..................cont soon...............
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YEH TOH ACCHA THA..........BUT P RECAP IS DANGEROUS.............WAITING 4 NEXT..............
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heyyy .... lovely updates ... its really nice ... 

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PART 40

Geet and Maan woke up in the morning.
Maan- Good Morning Mishti.
Geet- Good Morning Jaan.
Maan- Arey vah, tum to pehli baar subah uthi.
Geet- Ab to aadat dalni paregi.
Geet and Maan got up and packed the tent and left towards the road. Maan saw that his car was totally damaged.
Maan- Meri gaari, kal raat andhere mein dikh nahi raha tha.
Geet- To maine kaha tha saune ko!
Maan- Geet!! Neend aa rahi thi! Esmein meri kya galti hain?
Geet- To kya chai nahi pe sakte the, gaari rok leni thi aur chai pe lene thi.
Maan- Geet, chai ke saath kuch nahi hota.
Geet- Accha fir coffee? Aapke dimaag mein nahi aaya tha kya?
Maan- Geet ab argue karna band karo. Aur chalo.
Geet- Kahan?
Maan- We have to walk. Urke thori na ja sakte.
Geet- Ugh.
Geet and Maan walked for about 2 km and they reached a small town and rented a taxi and went home.
Maan took Geet to her house.
Maan- Ok, kal milte hain.
Geet-  Ok bye.
Geet kissed Maan's cheek and went inside and Maan went with the driver back to his house.
When Geet went inside her house, the landlord was standing in the front and there were boxes filled with all of Geet's stuff.
Geet- Uhmm, Aunty, yeh kya kiya apne?
Mamta- Mere ghar se bahr niklo.
Geet was shocked.
Geet- Kyun?
Mamta- Oh, mere se puch rahi ho kyun?
Mamta got the letter from the hospital.
Mamta- Hospital se Abortion confirmation letter milya.
Geet looked at it.
Mamta- Tum pregnant thi, unmarried ho, 18 years ki ho.
Geet looked at Mamta and put her head down.
Mamta- Yahan sanskar vali log rehte hain. Tum jaise nahi.
Geet had tears in her eyes.
Mamta- Vo hain tumhara saaman, 15 minute ke andar isko apni gaari mein rakhlo aur jao yahan se.
Geet had tears in her eyes.
Geet- Aap ik aaurat hokar...
Mamta- Main kuch nahi sunna chahti. Get out and leave.
Geet got her stuff and put it in her car. Mamta watched silently as she put it in her car. Geet left and then stopped her car on the road.
Geet- Ab kahan jao?
Geet called Riddhima.
Geet- Hello Riddhima?
There was alot of noise in the background as if Riddhima was in a club.
Geet- Hello? Kahan ho tum?
Riddhima- DANCING BABY! WHOAA!!
Geet- Ok, nevermind, bye.
Geet looked around.
Geet- Ab to ek hi rasta bacha hain.
It started raining and Geet went back inside her car and drove to Maan's house. Geet was wet from the rain and was cold. Geet arrived at Maan's house and knocked the door and Dadimaa opened it. She noticed Geet's stuff on the ground.
Dadimaa- Aaye beta aaye.
Dadimaa called the servants.
Dadimaa- Nakul, Geet ka samaan kamre mein rakhdo.
Geet sat on the couch and had tears in her eyes.
Dadimaa- Kya hua beta?
Geet- Mujhe ghar se bahr nikal diya gaya.
Dadimaa- Kyun?
Geet- Mere abortion confirmation ghar mein aaye the jab main Punjab gayi thi, Landlord ne par liya aur kehti uske ghar mein sirf sanskar vali larkiyan rehti hain, mere jaise nahi.
Dadimaa- Koi baat nahi bete. Ab se tum yahan rehogi. Tum yahan humare saath rahogi.
Geet- Dadimaa main aise kaise kar sakti hoon..Aap log...
Dadimaa- Mujhe kuch nahi karna, aap yahin rehnge.
Geet looks around.
Geet- Maan kahan hain?
Dadimaa- Apne kamre mein honge. Aap jao uske kamre mein, usko surprise kijeye.
Geet- Yeh accha idea hain.
Geet slowly went into Maan's room and he was sitting at his desk doing work. Geet slowly went towards Maan and hugged him from behind.
Geet- Hi!
Maan was surprised.
Maan- Hi, tum yahan?
Geet- Kyun? Main yahan nahi aa sakti kya?
Maan- Han aa sakti ho lekin...
Geet put her head down.
Geet- Mujhe ghar se bahr nikal diya gaya.
Maan was shocked.
Maan- Kya?!
Geet- Keh rahi thi ke uske ghar mein sanskar vali larkiyan rehti hain, mere jaise nahi.
Maan was upset.
Maan- Main baat karonga use.
Geet- Nahi! Rehne dijeye. I don't want to stay there.
Maan- Lekin usne tumhe kya kya bola. Jubaan to dekho us aaurat ki.
Geet- Maan, rehne dijeye. I don't want to fight. Ab jo ho gaya, ho gaya.
Maan kissed Geet's forehead.
Maan- Tum jaisa chahegi, vaisa hi hoga.
Geet smiled.
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Precap- Geet decides to stay in the outhouse to taunt Maan;)
 

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