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~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan) (Page 28)

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 4:13am | IP Logged
PART 32
Everyone was playing holi. Geet and Maan were enjoying. Geet almost forgot that she was pregnant. Geet and Maan enjoyed and had a good time. Geet put color on Dadimaa and Dadimaa also put colors on her. Everyone had an awesome time and enjoyed. After 2 hours, Geet, Maan and Dadimaa went inside to rest.
Geet- Main bahut thuk gayi hoon, main ghar chalti hoon.
Dadimaa- Arey beta, yeh bhi to aapka ghar hain.
Geet-Main manti hoon Dadimaa, lekin Landlord kabhi kabhi gusse ho jati hain.
Dadimaa- Chalo, theek hain beta.
When Geet got up, she felt dizzy but continued walking. Geet left and reached home. Geet went home and went to sleep.
In the morning, Maan called Geet.
Maan- Geet, aaj tum office nahi aa rahi ho kya?
Geet- Aa rahi hoon. Abhi to kitna time para hain.
Maan- You're 1 hour late.
Geet- OH SHIT! Main abhi aati hoon.
Geet got ready and left. When Geet entered KC, she saw Sasha. Sasha was back to her evil little plans.
Geet- Arey, tum itni jaldi aa gayi? Abhi to tumne Mumbai mein ek hafta rehna tha.
Sasha- Han, lekin maine kaam jaldi khatam kar diya aur jaldi vapas aa gayi.
Geet- Accha, main chalti hoon.
Sasha nods.
Sasha thinks- Back to planning. MK aur tumhare cabin mein maine microphone laga liya. I need to catch up.
Geet entered Maan's cabin with tears in her eyes. Maan was busy in his work.
Geet- Maan. Mujhe...mujhe aapse bahut jaroori baat karni hain.
Maan looked up and noticed tears in her eyes.
Maan- Kya hua? Koi pareshani?
Geet bursted out crying. Maan got up and went to Geet.
Maan- Geet, kya hua?
Geet was still crying. Maan put his hands on her face.
Maan- Meri aankhon mein dekho aur batao, kya hua?
Geet- Main....main...
Maan- Tum kya?
Geet- Main pregnant hoon.
Maan was shocked. Geet hugged Maan and she was still crying. Maan hugged Geet also.
Geet- Main bacche ke liye....ke liye tyaar nahi hoon Maan!!
Maan- Shhhh....bas bas Geet. Kuch nahi hoga.
Geet- Mama aur papa ko to batana bhi parega.
Geet looks at Maan.
Geet- Main Maa hone ke liye tyaar nahi hoon. Mera career, Mama papa, Humara, en sab ka kya hoga? Main tyaar nahi hoon, aap mujhe samaj rehe ho haina?
Maan- Han Geet. Main tumhe samaj raha hoon and I totally agree.
Geet wiped her tears.
Geet- Ab.....abortion?
Maan nodded.
Geet- Maan, aap aise mat samajeye ke main es bacche se khush nahi hoon, main khush hoon, lekin tyaar nahi hoon.
Maan- Geet, main bhi nahi.
Maan kisses Geet's forehead.
Maan- Hum dono ne galti ki, ab hum saath saath sudharenge. Hum kal ko hospital jayenge.
Geet nods. Geet hugs Maan.
Geet- Aap kitne acche ho.
Maan- Vo to main hoon.
Geet smiles.
Geet- Main apne cabin mein jaa rahi hoon. Kaam karne ke liye.
Maan nods.
Geet steps out of Maan's cabin and Sasha comes in.
Sasha- MK, aaj Mr. Kapoor ne bulaya aapko, 2 hours ki meeting hain, aap abhi chal jao.
Maan- Hmm.
Maan steps outside and kisses Geet's forehead.
Maan- Main meeting ke liye ja raha hoon, Noida mein.
Geet nods. When Maan leaves, Sasha goes towards Geet.
Sasha- Great job Geet! Excellent!
Geet was confused.
Sasha- Bahut bahut mubarak ho.
Geet- Main kuch samjhi nahi.
Sasha- Kyun? Kuch yaad nahi hain? Shocking news jo tumne bataya MK ko aur mujhe nahi bataya.
Geet- Kya?
Sasha turns around and looks at everyone.
Sasha- LADIES AND GENTLEMEN! Aap Geet ko mubarak nahi daogi kya?
Everyone was confused.
Sasha- Humari Geet- Punjab ki ek larki jo yahan parne aayi hain, humare MK ki girlfriend hain aur 18 years ki hain- Ek....Maa banne vali hain. Oh, correction correction, mera kehne ka matlab tha ek Binbiyaahi Maa banne vali hain.
Everyone including Geet was shocked.
Sasha- She's pregnant.
Geet- Tumhari himmat bhi kaisi hoyi meri private life mein interfer karne ki.
Sasha- Mujhmein bahut himmat hain. Maine to kuch aur hi plan kiya tha tumhe badnaam karne ke liye but this is 10 times better!
Geet was angry at Sasha.
Sasha- Ms. Geet Handa, jiske shaadi nahi ho chuki hain, jo MK ki girlfriend hain, jo 18 years hain, jo ab pregnant hain....dekho isko. Tumhe sharm nahi aa rahi hain?
Geet- Shut up Sasha.
Sasha- Kyun? Why should I shut up? Tum ho kaun? MK ki girlfriend right? Meri boss nahi ho tum, MK mere boss hain.
Sasha looks at everyone.
Sasha- Dekho is larki ko. Es besharm larki ko.
Everyone was staring at Geet.
Sasha- Geet, kya tum pehle bhi kisi larke ke saath sau chuki ho? Or is MK your first? Suhaag raat pehle hi manaliya tumne? Geet...kya tum janti bhi ho es bacche ka asli baap kaun hain?
Geet slaps Sasha.
Geet- BAS SASHA!
Sasha- Tumhari himmat....
Geet- HAN! Mujhmein bahut himmat hain! Tum kaisi aaurat ho! Tum aise kaisi bol sakti ho? Han, main Maan ke bacche ki Maa hoon. Lekin, esmein humari koi galti nahi thi. We were drunk.
Sasha- Drunk eh?
Sasha grins.
Geet- Khabardar agar tumne mere bare mein aisa kuch bhi bola. Main ek ensaan hoon, mere se galtiaan ho jati hain, main perfect nahi hoon.
Sasha stares at Geet.
Geet- Aur han Sasha, kisi ki personal life mein interfer karna bilkul...uncool hain and a total turndown.
Geet goes to her cabin and everyone was still staring at her. Geet looked at everyone.
Geet- Get back to your duties everyone. Including you Sasha.
Everyone continued doing their work and Sasha felt embarrased.
Geet thinks- Basti complete.
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Precap-Abortion+ Dadimaa's reaction+Geet goes to Punjab with Maan
 
Hi guys! I hope you guys are liking this track! I know Sasha is a big problem! But I just hate showing constant happiness. But when Geet and Maan go to Punjab, we will witness Geet's parents shocked and Dadimaa upset but supporting. In Punjab, Geet we will see some funny moments between Geet and Maan and we'll be back on the happy track.

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged

Omg omg omg
Ab kya hoga
Can't wait
Is shasha ki himmat toh dekho
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
grhhhhhh dt Sasha Angry
hate her............
nice update .......waiting for more happy moment Smile
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 4:49am | IP Logged
thanks for assuring v will b back on happy track..............urgh.............hate sashaAngry
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
loved it...

Sasha i hate her Angry
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
lovely update dear........good that geet gave back to sasha............
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
she told
loved the way maan acted
arghhhhhhhhhhh sasha
haha uski basti hoyi thi
cant wait 4 next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
PART 33
Maan comes back from his meeting and goes to Geet's cabin. Geet didn't tell Maan about the incident with Sasha.
Maan- Geet, kal tumhara abortion ki appointment 10:00 AM ki hain.
Geet- Fir vahan se hum Punjab jayenge. Main Mama aur Papa ko humare bare mein bataongi aur saath mein...abortion ke bare mein. Maan- Fir tumhara college ka kya?
Geet- Vo main sambhalongi. Aap fikar mat kijeye.
Maan nods.
Maan- Chalo, tum ghar jao, packing karo, fir hum Dadimaa ke pas jayenge.
Geet had tears in her eyes.
Maan- Ab Dadimaa ko bhi batana parega.
Geet nods.
Geet goes home and packs. As Geet was packing she started crying really loud. Her landlord, Mamta, who lived downstairs came after hearing the noise.
Mamta- Geet beti! Darwaja kholo!
Geet was crying and opened the door.
Mamta- Kya hua?!! Huh? Batao.
Geet was still crying.
Geet- Kuch....kuch nahi.
Geet got her bags.
Geet- Main kuch dino ke liye Punjab ja rahi hoon. Bye.
Mamta- Bye.
Mamta thinks- Kuch to hua iski saath. Pata karna parega, mere ghar mein reh rahi hain, mujhe rent de rahi hain, mujhe pata karna hoga.
When Geet went downstairs, Maan was waiting for her.
Maan- Chalo.
Geet sat in the car and they went to Maan's house. Dadimaa was sitting on the couch.
Dadimaa- Geet bete! Aao.
Geet sat on the couch and Maan sat next to her holding her hand.
Dadimaa- Maan bata rahe the ke aaj tumne humare saath kuch...jaroori baat karni hain.
Geet had tears in her eyes.
Geet- Ji Dadimaa
Dadimaa- Boliye beta.
Tears rolled down Geet's eyes and Maan put his arms around her shoulder and comforted her. Dadimaa was concerned.
Dadimaa- Kya baat hain beta?
Geet- Dar lag raha hain.
Dadimaa- Kis baat ki bete?
Geet- Jo baat main aapko batane vali hoon...vo sunkar aap...aap kaise react karenge. Mujhe aap...aap kya samjhange. Aur...agar nahi batati to... to galat hain.
Dadimaa- Beta, aap itne kyun ghabrah rahe ho? Humein tum par bahut bharosha hain. Aap jo bhi karte hain, galat karte hain, to hum khush honge ke aapne sach bataya. Aur agar nahi batate to han, bura lagega. Lekin batiye to sahi, hua kya hain?
Geet was crying.
Geet- Dadimaa... yeh kehna aasaan nahi hain aapko. Maan ko kehna aasaan tha, lekin...
Dadimaa- Beta, hum aapke Dadi hain. Agar Maan se aasaani se keh sakte hain, to humein kyun nahi?
Geet- Dadimaa...main....main....main pregnant hoon.
Dadimaa was shocked.
Dadimaa- KYA??!!
Geet bursted out crying.
Maan hugged Geet to comfort her. Dadimaa was still in shock.
Dadimaa- Pregnant?
Maan- Lekin...kal Geet....abortion kar rahi hain.
Dadimaa- Aap logo ne....
Geet continued crying.
Geet- I'm sorry Dadimaa!
Geet got up and hugged Dadimaa.
Geet- Mujhe maaf kardo! Maine aapka bharosa thor diya!
Dadimaa- Nahi nahi beta! Bharosa nahi thora! Hum bahut khush hain ke yeh aapne humein khud bataya! Han! Sach bataya humein!
Maan- Dadimaa, kal main aur Geet Punjab ja rahe hain, Geet ke parents ko milne ke liye.
Dadimaa- Yeh aap logo ne accha kiya.
Geet sat on the couch next to Maan and hugged him.
Geet- Ab Mama aur Papa ka kya reaction hoga? Vo shaayad thora gussa karenge.
Maan- Koi baat nahi, main baat karonga.
Geet nods.
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Precap- Abortion+ Punjab trip
 

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