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~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan) (Page 15)

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
nice update ..
cont soon ..thnx for d PMSmile

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
awesome updates
 loved them both
 cant wait 4 da next
 part con soon 
thanks 4 da pm
RukhluvMaan Goldie
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Wow...wow...wow..
OMG LOVE UR FF....
And i just read all parts in one go....
And wow. I will start from 1st part...wow. So shocking.geet changed from shalwar kameez to jeans and t shirt..wow.. In car... And 2part. Maan and geets first meeting..wow.. Geet is so Bindaas... And fight with sasha. Hahahaha.so funny.it was helarious... And throwing cake and all to each other.hahahaha. And fas gaya beech me bechara maan... And and haan.that the client part and dinner with his son was so funny... They way maan and geet were acting like bf and gf...and haayii the confession.... amazing.. I just hate sasha... And haan the way maan change position of geet and sasha.,. Hahahaha. Sasha ki to har taraf se bandh bhaji hai... And now she is planing for geet .oh lets see what will happen... Love ur ff....

Edited by rokhshana - 08 March 2011 at 12:26pm
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
wow Maan enter Geet world
ha ha ha but hate Sasha
both parts wonderfull
my dear pls cont
soonnnnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
wow..............maan enjoying and partying...............well waiting for the next update
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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 3:45am | IP Logged
woow
Very nice update
I just love it
Plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged

Very nice
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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged

PART 22

Geet and Maan walked through the quiet streets of Delhi and go into a hotel ( they were too drunk to find their own house).
Maan- 1...ROOM.
Receptionist- Uhmm..how many people are in your party?
Maan- Abhey Ullu ke patthe,
Geet interrupts.
Geet- MAAN! Yeh larki hain, Ullu Ki Patthi kehna chahiye!!!
 Maan-Han! CORRECT!! Ullu ki patthi, hum 2 jane hain aur kya aapke staff ko bhi bulado?
The receptionist sighs and gives them there room card and Geet and Maan go.
Maan- Ladies first.
Geet goes in the room and Maan SLAMS the door.
Geet- Abhey DARLINGGG, itne zor se kyun?
Maan- Sorry...
Geet and Maan lay on the bed and Geet looks at Maan and goes on top of him.
Geet- I.......LOVE YOU.
Maan moves Geet's hair from her face to see her pretty face. Maan kisses her forehead. Geet closes her eyes.
Maan looks at Geet and Geet nods. Maan kisses Geet's forehead, cheeks, nose, slowly touches Geet's lip and then kisses her ears and moves down towards her neck. Geet moans. Maan kisses Geet's shoulder and moves down to her arms. Maan takes off her bracelets. Maan slowly moves up and takes off Geet's earrings and then her necklace. Maan blows on Geet's neck. Maan kisses Geet's neck and then Maan slowly moves his hands back towards Geet's dress and unzips it. ( They were way too drunk to even realize what they were doing!!)
Geet- AREY IDIOT! JALDI KARO NA!!!
Geet takes off Maan's shirt and pants and boxers and Maan takes off Geet's underwear and bra. Geet and Maan consumate and go to sleep in each other's arms.
The next morning, Geet wakes up before Maan and sees that she has no clothes on. Geet sits up. Geet wonders where her clothes are. She turns around and see's Maan next to her. Geet gasps and puts her hands on her face and starts crying. Maan wakes up from the noise and see's that he is not wearing any clothes and see's Geet crying. Maan quickly sits up and puts his hands on his head.
Maan- Yeh humne....yeh humne kya kiya.
Geet continues crying.
Maan- Geet, we were drunk last night.
Geet cries louder.
Geet- I lost my....virginity to YOU!
Maan- Geet...we were drunk, we were totally lost.
Geet continues crying.
Geet- Ab hum kya karenge?
Maan just looks down.
Maan- Maine...maine kaha tha itna pat peeo. Lekin tum sunti kahan ho.
Geet cries harder. Geet gets up and Maan looks at her.
Geet- Udhar ko chehra karo vaise bhi kal raat dekh hi leya tha sab kuch! Ab fiaada kya hain?
Maan looks away.
Geet gets her clothes and goes to the bathroom. Geet comes out and quickly gets her things and leaves. Maan quickly puts on his jeans and follows Geet.
Maan- GEET!! Geet! Roko! Geet!
Geet- Kuch nahi sunna maine! Main drunk thi aur aapne fiaada utha diya haina?
Maan- I was drunk too! Main bhi sharabi tha! Esmein meri galti nahi hain! Tumhari galti bhi nahi hain!
Geet walks away.
Maan- Geet! Mujhpar kyun gussa kar rahi ho?
Geet walks towards Maan.
Geet- I SLEPT WITH MY BOSS! YOU!
Maan- Geet...
Geet interrupts.
Geet- Main kuch der ke liye akela rehna chahti hoon, see you at work in the afternoon, Bye.
Geet leaves and Maan goes back inside the hotel room and gets his things and pays and leaves.
Maan comes home and Dadimaa looks at him.
Dadimaa- MAAN!
Maan senses that he is in trouble.
Dadimaa- Poori raat aap kahan the?
Maan didn't give an answer.
Dadimaa- Maan, hum aapse kuch puch rahe hain!
Maan- Uh...Dadimaa main...Main Rishabh ke ghar gaya tha, hum baate karte karte sau gaye the.
Dadimaa stares at him in disgust. Maan realizes what he said sounded kind of wrong.
Maan- Nahi Nahi! Dadimaa! I'm not gay!
Dadimaa stares at him again.
Dadimaa- Hey Bhagwan, mere bete ki kya halat kardi aapne.
Maan goes upstairs and freshens up and leaves for the office. He keeps on thinking about what happened last night.
Geet arrives at the office and is not in a happy mood. Maan calls Sasha in the cabin.
Maan- Sasha, tum Mumbai jaongi, 2 weeks ke liye, vahan restaurant vala project tum hi karogi.
Sasha thinks in her mind- Oh shit, agar main 2 weeks ke liye vahan jao, to mera plan ka kya hoga.
Sasha- MK, aapko nahi lagta ke Geet ko bhi mere saath jana chahiye?
Maan- No. Tum jaogi, you're more experienced. Geet ko office mein adjust hone do.
Sasha nods.
 
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Precap- Sasha's plan postponed + Geet's anger
 

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