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~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan) (Page 11)

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 2:58am | IP Logged
hey that was a pretty short update..............but loved it............pl cont soon

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged
PART 16
Geet wakes up in the morning and goes to college. When she enters college, she starts texting Maan and she has the biggest smile on her face while texting him.
Riddhima- Arey Geet. Tum to bahut dino ke baad aayi ho?
Geet was still looking at her phone and smiling and was busy looking at her phone.
Geet- Han...vo main...kaam.... bye.
Riddhima looked at Geet in a strange way.
Riddhima- Eh Dude, mujhe bhool gayi?
Geet- Nahi yaar! Main tumhe kaise bhool sakti ho?
Geet was still looking at her phone and was texting.
Riddhima- Accha, what's my last name?
Geet was STILL busy in her phone.
Geet-  Khurana.
Riddhima- WHAT? Khurana? Yeh kahan se aa ga....
Riddhima stops talking in between and opens her mouth and her eyes are wide open.
Riddhima- Khurana. Khurana. Naam to maine suna hain!
Riddhima puts her hand on her head to think.
Riddhima- Ughh...uhmmm... HAN!!!!! MAAN SINGH KHURANA!
Geet looks at Riddhima.
Geet- Kya? Vo..Vo kaun hain?
Riddhima- Geet! Don't act like you don't know who he is! He's your boss for crying out loud!! Vo tumhara boss hain aur tum puch rahi ho ke vo kaun hain?!!
Geet looks at Riddhima.
Geet- Riddhima mujhe jana hain!
Riddhima holds Geet.
Riddhima- Geet mujhe phone do!
Geet- Nahi!
Riddhima- Geet give me the phone!!
Riddhima goes on Geet's back and tries to grab the phone. Geet is running around with Riddhima on her back who is trying to get her phone.
Riddhima- Geet Mujhe phone do!!!
Geet- What happened to privacy these days?!!!
Everyone was looking at Geet and Riddhima.
Geet couldn't bear Riddhima's weight, so she fell on the ground and Riddhima managed to get Geet's phone. Riddhima started reading Geet's text messages that Maan sent her.
Riddhima exclaimed- YOU'RE DATING HIM??????!!!!!!! HAYEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everyone was looking at Geet.
Geet- Riddhu!
Riddhima- Awwww!!! Kitne cute messages hain! Geet! I'm so proud of you!
Geet- Bol to aise rahi ho jaise mere finals mein full marks aaye hain, pff...proud di lagdi.
Riddhima hugs Geet.
Riddhima- You two are soooo cute!!!
Geet blushes. Geet takes her classes until 1:00 and then goes to the office and runs to Maan's cabin without looking that Sasha was sitting on the couch and hugs Maan.
Geet- I missed you!!
Sasha opens her eyes wide open. Maan hugs Geet back and then looks at Sasha.
Maan- Uhh Geet. Peeche dekho.
Geet turns around to see a shocked Sasha.
Maan- Sasha, tum ek ghante mein aana.
Sasha nods and glares at Geet.
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Precap- I don't know yet!!!!

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 3:57am | IP Logged
loved the update..........just one thing do u hv any kinda -ve characters or kinda dramatic seq............bcoz i just loved the way u r making it happy happy updates i want it to stay the same way.........
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 5:31am | IP Logged
OMG
Awesomeee update
loved it
Amazing part
yippie they confessed
so beautiful hayee
cant wait to read more
update soon please
thank u so much
and so cute the asking for kiss partEmbarrassed



Edited by maangeetcrazy - 04 March 2011 at 5:34am
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 10:54am | IP Logged
PART 17
Geet- Ab to usne sabko bata dena humare baare.
Maan- Esmein burayi kya hain?
Geet- Burayi hain ke ab hum etne professional nahi rehenge.
Maan- Geet, I promise you, hum professional rahenge.
Geet- Agar maine koi galti ki, toh aap mujhe saza denge haina?
Maan- Han.
Geet- Promise?
Maan- Promise.
Geet- Pinky promise?
Maan holds out his pinky- Pinky promise.
Geet- Soch lo, varna aapki pinky toot jayegi.
Maan- GEET! I promise, I pinky promise, I swear.
Geet smiles. ( For those who don't know- pinky means chee-chee.. the smallest finger)
Meanwhile, Sasha goes outside and starts telling everyone about Maan and Geet's affair.
Sasha and everyone gather around in a circle and Sasha tells everyone.
Sasha- Main aur Maan andar Mr. Chopra ki project discuss kar rahe the aur achanak vo bimbo andar aa gayi aur usne Maan sir ko hug kiya!
Everyone gasps.
Pinky- Sasha Ma'am. Aapko zaroor koi galat family hoyi hain.
Sasha- Shut up Pinky! Koi Assistant Architect apne Boss ko HUG kar sakta hain? Agar MK ko bura laga, usne to bol dena tha, lekin usne kuch bhi nahi kaha!
Everyone was discussing the affair and when Maan and Geet came outside everyone looked at them. Maan wanted Geet's cabin next to his and the cabin next to his was Sasha's cabin, so Maan decided to give that cabin to Sasha.
Maan- Sasha!
Sasha- Yes MK.
Maan- Apna cabin clear out karo.
Sasha- MK? Why?
Maan- Kyun ki yeh ab Geet ka cabin hain, tum doosre cabin mein jao.
Sasha nods and while walking past Pinky she said- Dekha, maine kaha tha.
Everyone was staring at Maan and Geet.
Maan- Ab aise ghoor ghoor kar kyun dekh rahe ho?! Get back to your duties!!
While Sasha was clearing out her cabin, she was talking to Tasha.
Sasha- Es Geet ka kuch to karna parega. She has to leave.
Tasha- Sasha...
Sasha glares at her.
Tasha- Silly me, I mean Ma'am, aap kya karenge.
Sasha- Kuch to karongi. Soch soch ke. Tab jaakar kuch honga.
Geet shifted into her new cabin and there was a glass window instead of a wall to divide Geet and Maan's so, they both could see each other. While Geet was doing her work, Maan kept on staring at her after a few minutes.
Geet was too busy in her work and after a few minutes, she looked at Maan's cabin. Maan was staring at her and she smiled and continued doing her work.
After a few minutes, Maan went into a meeting and Sasha came into Geet's cabin and sat and a chair.
Sasha- To tumhara affair Maan ke saath hain?
Geet was busy doing her work- Ese tumhe kya lena dena  hain, jao jaakar apna kaam karo.
Geet continued doing her work and Sasha just sat there.
Sasha- You are dating him aren't you?
Geet stomped her pen down.
Geet- Han! I'm dating Maan! Khush?! Ab kaam karloon?
Geet continued doing her work and Sasha made an evil smile.
Sasha- To fir kuch professional nahi rehta. Yeh to bahut problem hain Geet.
Geet- Humare beech mein sab kuch professional hain.
Sasha makes that disgusting evil smile of hers and leaves the room.
Sasha- Kehne mein to aasan hain Geet ke sab kuch professional hain. Lekin dheere dheere, sab kuch personal ho jata hain. Time to lagega es plan ko kamyaab karne mein. We'll have to wait for sometime, patience will be needed.
Maan comes into Geet's cabin after his meeting.
Maan- Hi Geet.
Geet stops doing her work.
Geet- Hi Maan. Kaise hain aap?
Maan- Hungry. Kahi khanna khaane chale.
Geet- It's 4:00, how about a coffee with cake?
Maan- Perfect.
Geet and Maan go to a cafe and get coffee with chocolate cake and talk.
Geet- To apne family ke baare mein kuch bataye.
Maan- Uh..I have 2 brothers and 1 sister. I'm the 2nd oldest of all. My older brother has a business empire in London and mine is all over India. My little brother is studying to become a doctor and my little sister is doing Fashion designing aur meri Dadimaa bhi hain.
Geet- Aur mom and dad?
Maan makes an angry face.
Maan- They're dead.
Geet frowns.
Geet- Oh, I'm sorry.
Maan- Tumhe sorry kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain. They're dead for me.
Geet- Matlab?
Maan was annoyed.
Maan- Can we please change the subject?
Geet looks at Maan strangely.
Geet- Uhmm...apka favorite color kya hain?
Maan- White.
Geet- White? Kitna boring color hain.
Maan- Nahi Geet, white color boring nahi hain, esmein ek bahut strong meaning hain.
Geet raises her eyebrows.
Maan- White color means peace, sympathy, love, purity, innocence.
Geet smiles.
Geet- Maine aise to kabhi socha nahi tha.
Maan- Aur tumhara favorite color.
Geet- Mmm...Red.
Maan- Red?
Geet-  Red means love, passion, beauty, outragesness, aggresion, power....BAHUT meanings hain.
Maan- Tumhare list mein to kafi intense cheeze hain.
Geet- Jaise?
Maan- Love, passion, beauty....
Geet- Han, I'm a romantic type of girl. Mujhe aise cheeze acche lagte hain.
Maan smiles.
 
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I hope you guys are enjoying the story so far! As you can notice, Sasha is up to some evil plans which will create some problems. Well let me know how you like it!!

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
wow super duper mindblowing
but hate Sasha evil she is upto
something both part amazing
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
thanks pm
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged
loved the update..................
hope yeh sasha jo bhikare it brings maaneet close rather than mu.............
so they hv started to date now.............
cant wait for the next update...........
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
love it.
hate sasha.

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