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~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan)

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged

Hi Guys! I'm iluvblue0812 and I'm starting my first fan fiction story on Geet and Maan. I used some of the ideas from other stories and made it my own creation, so I hope you guys like it!! Smile

CHARACTERS
Geet Handa- An 18 year old modern/ traditonal girl from Punjab studying in Delhi. Fun loving, bubbly,  Beautiful, smart.
 
Maan Singh Khurana-  25 year old business tycoon from Delhi. HOT, charming yet angry.
 
Savitri Devi- Maan's Dadimaa. Very kind and wants the best for her grandson.
 
Dev-  22 years old. Maan's younger brother. Kind, handsome and loving.
 
Rano-  Geet's Mother.
 
Kuldip- Geet's Father.
 
 
Aditya- Geet's friend who is attractive but Geet doesn't really like him that much.
 
Okay! Those are all I can think of right now! Here's the story!
 
PART 1
(IN PUNJAB)
Geet wakes up in the morning. She gets ready in a traditional salwaar kameez to leave Punjab to study in Delhi.
Rano- Meri beti kitni bari ho gayi hain. Delhi mein apna dhyaan rakhna aur aise hi acchi bacchi rehna. Vahan jaakar badalna mat. Aise rehna.
Kuldip- Meri kuri kinni vaddi aa te mainu Rab da shukar karna chahida aa ke mainu tere vargi beti milli aa. Apna dhyaan rakhna accha?
Geet- Ji papa. (nods her head)
Geet hugs her parents and leaves for Delhi in her car. After five minutes, she stops her car on the side of the road and changes her clothes in her car.
Geet- Eh parents vi na sochte hain ke hum bacche pata nahi kinne shareef aa. Ailo, oh lok samjade aa ke main Delhi salwaar suit pa ke jawangi? Ha Ha!
Geet puts on jeans, a loose top and converse. Someone comes and knocks on her car door. A boy.
Geet- Oh ki chahida tenu?
Boy- Dekh! Mera Naam Aditya aa!
Geet- Fir main ki kara? Tattoo banava apne forehead te?!
Aditya- Oh Yaar! Main Delhi jana aa!! Main admissions liye late ho jana and Bauji ne mainu KHA jana! Please yaar! Mainu samjhane di koshish kar.
Geet thought for a moment.
Geet- Accha. Aa beeth.
Geet continued driving
Aditya- By the way, kisi larki ko gari mein change nahi karna chahiye. Pata nahi kaun tumhe dekh sakta hain.
Geet stopped her car.
geet- KYA??? YOU SAW ME CHANGE? Tumne mujhe change karte hui dekha??!!! You fool!!!
Aditya- Aarey yaar! Mainu kuch nahi dekha!
Geet- Promise?
Aditya- Promise!!
Geet continued driving.
Geet and Aditya arrived in Delhi after 8 hours.
Geet- Tum kaunse college mein ja rahe ho?
Aditya- University of Delhi
Geet- AREY! Main vi vahi jaa rahi hoon. Bolo, tumne rehna kahan hain.
Aditya- Greater Kaliash.
Geet- Impressive. Main Vasant Vihar mein.
Aditya- Wow. To tum mujhe lekar jayengi vahan par?
Geet- Yaar, main Delhi mein abhi abhi aayi hoon aur main nahi chahti ke main ghum jao. Es liye tum kise aur se lift mang lo, main tumhe vahan corner mein drop kar leti hoon.
Aditya- Vaise hum log to milte rahenge haina?
Geet- Of course! Akhir humne to kitne baatein ki hain. Here's my number.
Aditya smirks.
Geet gives him an odd look.
Geet- EH! Aise mat samjhna ke main tumhe pasand karti hoon. You're just a friend.
Aditya- Accha thanks. Bye!
Geet- Bye!
 
Geet goes to her house in Vasant Vihar and is totally impressed. She loved her house. As soon as she arrived she went to sleep as she had to go to college tomorrow and also find a job.
 
Geet woke up in the morning and she got ready. She went in her car and as soon as she started her car, it broke down.
Geet- Oh shit! haye Rabba! Aaj hi eh karna si? Aaj hi meri gaddi ne break down hona si! Haye!!! Ab main kaise jaongi!
Geet stepped out of her car and started running towards the main road. After asking for a lift for 10 minutes, she had to run in front of a car. She saw a nice Mercedes Benz coming down the car. She smiled.
Geet- Hun lift ta lena hi lena aa.
Geet ran in front of the car and the car stopped immediately. The person opened the window. ( It's Maan Singh Khurana!!!)
Maan- TUM PAGAL TO NAHI HO?
Geet- Nahi! Par Late Hoon!
Geet sat in the car.
Maan- Excuse me? Tum kise puchkar beti hoon?! He yelled in anger
Geet- Haye Rabba! Attitude ta dekho! As she looked at Maan making her hair come off her face to show her pretty sparkling eyes and her fair face.
Maan felt sparks in his heart. He had never seen such a beautiful girl before. Geet sat there staring at him.
Geet- OH HELLO? Aise ghoor ghoor kar dekhi jana aa ya mainu college vi le ke jana?
Maan- What?!
Geet- Accha! Main bhool gayi. Aap Delhi valon ko Punjabi nahi aati. Meri kahene ka matlab tha ke mujhe aise mat dekhye aur mujhe college lekar jao.
Maan- Ek minute ek minute!! Mainu Punjabi aaondi aa! Second of all, tum kise puchkar yahan bethi hoon?
Geet- Apne dil aur dimaag se! KHUSH? bata diya ab chalo!!! varna mere pehle din par meri band baj jayegi!!
Maan looked up and sighed.
Maan- Kaunse college?
Geet smiled in happiness and hugged Maan.
Geet- Yes Yes! THANK YOU!!!!
Maan felt the beautiful touch of Geet. He never felt something more beautiful. He sat still staring at geet. After a moment, he realized what he was doing.
Maan- Umm, kaunse college.
Geet- University of Delhi.
Maan drove. Geet smiled while looking outside.
She quickly turned towards Maan.
geet- Hi! I'm Geet! Sorry, introduction thori late hain! Aap ne pehle drama bahut kiya aur apne bari bari aankhen se mujhe ghoor rahe the, es liye naam nahi bata hua.
Maan was kind of annoyed.
Maan- Hmm.
Geet- Aap apna naam nahi batayenge ya main apko sadu bulaon??
Maan- Sadu?
geet- haan! Sadu! pata hain first impression par judge nahi karna chahiye lekin main karti hoon! Aap pehle impression se mujhe SADU lagte ho.
Maan in anger. Maan- Main koi sadu hoon! Main Maan Singh Khurana hoon!!
Geet- Dekha! jaise gusse main bol rahe ho, to sadu hi lagte hain!
Maan continued driving and sighed. Yeh ladki to bolti ja rahi hain.
 
      ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
Precap-  The never ending car ride.
 
 
 
Ok, so I just DASHED through everything and skipped to the point of the meeting of Geet and Maan. I know the entry of Aditya probably sounds weird but later in the story, he'll be needed!
 
Tell me how it was! This is my first story! I ACCEPT ADVICE and its really needed! Suggestions are also awesome!
 
Thanks!!!
 
 


Edited by iluvblue0812 - 22 February 2011 at 8:50am

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Oye dil khush kardita. Love the punjabi dialogues. Yaar yeh gezt to wadi hushiyar nikli lol.
Meeting ho to aissi. Saddi punjaban ne bilkul sahi car roki :D

Love the story. Do continue dear.

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonu4ever

Oye dil khush kardita. Love the punjabi dialogues. Yaar yeh gezt to wadi hushiyar nikli lol.
Meeting ho to aissi. Saddi punjaban ne bilkul sahi car roki :D

Love the story. Do continue dear.

Humera
Thanks so much!!!!
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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by komlika

awesome........do PM me Smile
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Sounds interesting so far. Please pm me! :)
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