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Mayur FF..Ye Hi Pyaar Hai updated on pg140 (Page 95)

Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MjhtFan_Mahima

part 10-
oh wowww
simply wowww
gr8 job yaaar
i loved the shopping part
that was fantastic
Thank u so much sisHug

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MjhtFan_Mahima

part 11-
dia is falling for mayank
and samrat sang a gr8 song
Thanksss sisHug

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Thank u sooo much friends for ur beautiful comments n responceHugHugHug

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:32am | IP Logged
@Tasfia,Moona...i hope u ll both enjoy the i add Pani wala scene ...WinkWinkWinkLOL

Part 16


Nupur came out of washroom after wearing blue saree ...she was drying her hair..when her eyes fell on Mayank he was selecting clothes for himself ...

She shook her head and smiled

She went close to him


"Can I help you"she asked

Mayank who was busy in selecting clothes for himself  raised his head and looked towards her'

Her wet hairs were spreading on her shoulder..some water drops were falling on her face'her scent'she was looking beautiful..he was lost in her beauty..

She was standing close to him ..he wanted to enveloped her in his arms to feel her scent,to feel her skin..

He was starring her and Nupur was blushing hard..his intense,passionate gaze made her heart beat raised..


"Can I help you"she repated her sentence trying to came him out of his dream world..

He came back to his senses when he listen her sweet voice..he looked towards  her ..She was blushing


"hun..yeah"he said and took some stepped back

He was feeling embarrassing to starring her like a fool


"go and get freshen up..i will take out your clothes"she said with smile


"ok"he said and smiled..he went up to washroom without looking her as he was felling embarrassed


She smiled looking at him



After sometimes, he came out of washroom when his eyes fell on bedHis clothes,his towel was neatly placing on the bed.and a note was placed near the clothes...a smile crept on his face

He took it and opened it


I don't know much about your choice but I chooses black  shirt and blue Jeense..i hope you will like it..


He smiled whole heartedly'

She was not in room as she was already went downstairs




"Maa can I ask something"she asked Shilpa with hesitation..Nupur was making breakfast while shilpa was helping her

"haan beta pocho"

"Maa..Mayank ko khane main kya pasand hai"she said with hesitation'Shilpa smiled and looked towards her with suspicious eyes..

Nupur looked towards her and cursed herself for asking that question'


"aj Mayank ki choice ke bare main bohat pocha ja raha hai'kuch khaas baat hai kya"she asked while naughty smile was playing on her lips..


A red colour crept on Nupur's face'


"wo..h  main '.aise hi'poch rahi thi"her words were chocking due to her shyness



Shilpa smiled


"Mayank ko gajar ka halwa bohat pasand hai"she told him


"gajar ka halwa but I don't know how to make it"Nupur thought and make sad face


"What happened beta"Shilpa asked as she saw her sad face


"Nothing Maa"Nupur smiled and said







Mayank came downstairs and found Nupur busy in working and talking with shilpa..


Mayank entered in kitchen..Nupur could sense his presence'he was looking handsom ...


"Mayu tu kitchen main kya ker raha hai"shilpa asked him when he entered in kitchen


"Maa..woh'.wohh"he was trying to made some excuses while Nupur giggled


Mayank looked towards Nupur'.and she tried to control her laugh..


"Maa who main pani peene aya tha"finally he said stealing glancing at Nupur


She blushed as she understood he came to see her'.


"tum chalo main Nupur ko kehti hoon..woh tumhain pani deti hai"


He glanced at Nupur and walked out from there'..




Nupur entered in hall with glass of water in her hands..Mayank was sitting on sofa doing some work on his laptop..she came near him and offered him glass of water'

Mayank caught her hand inspite of glass..she looked at him with surprised while a naughty smile was playing on his lips..a shiver ran down in Nupur's spine



"Mayank mera haath choriye ..mujhe kitchen main kuch kam hai"she said trying to freed her hand but his gripped was too strong


"Nahi"he leaned his face towards her said naughtily looking into her eyes'


Nupur blushed..


"mujhe kitchen main kuch kam hai"she said with pleading eyes but he did not freed her hand


"kam bad main ker lena"he said coming close to her

Her heart beat rose due to his closeness'


she was trying to freed her hand but he was not in mood to freed her hand..he was starring her continuously and she was blushing


"Maa aap"Nupur said looking at other side..


Mayank hurriedly freed her hand.and looked towards the other side but Shilpa was not there...Nupur laughed whole heartedly'

Mayank glared at her..she showed him thumbs down and ran towards the kitchen'





here is next update...i hope u ll like itEmbarrassed..plz do comments n press like tab if u liked itEmbarrassedSmile







Edited by maria-soniarti - 19 May 2011 at 7:49am

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--Sanchu-- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:44am | IP Logged
very cute mayur...
nice update...
continue soon...
thanks for the PM...SmileSmileSmileSmile

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--jiya-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:51am | IP Logged
cute update mariaEmbarrassed
thnx for pm

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Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged
cute update maria
thanx for pm

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged

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