Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Mayur FF..Ye Hi Pyaar Hai updated on pg140 (Page 135)

Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 17 March 2010
Posts: 16739

Posted: 21 July 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged

Witer Note

Thank you so much friends for giving your beautiful responseHugHugso here is next update...i hope u ll liked it..
Remember me in ur prayersEmbarrassed

The following 27 member(s) liked the above post:


Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 17 March 2010
Posts: 16739

Posted: 21 July 2011 at 2:44am | IP Logged

Part 23


Nupur was continuously blabbering while Mayank was listening her with amusement'


Suddenly Nupur felt water drop on her face'


"barrish"she excitedly said and Mayank looked up ,some water drops fell on his face too'.

Mayank made her stand on her feet and held her hand..he ran towards the shelter'..but she freed her hand


"Mayank mujhe baarish main bheegna hai"Nupur said in a childish tone and Mayank looked at her with a bit irritation as she was not listening him


"Nupur you will get sick"Mayank warned


"main nahi bemar hoon gi..Promise"she requested him while flipping her eye-lashes and Mayank get lost in her mesmerizing beauty


When Nupur noticed he did not give her respond'.she ran towards the middle of road and started jumping and dancing in Rain..


Her red wet saree was hugging her body..while her wet hair spreading all over her shoulder'her pink lips making her more beautiful and Mayank could not help but starring her..

"Mayank yahan aao barrish main"she said him waving her hand but he was lost in her beauty..she was looking breathtaking in her saree''


He went up to her'.she smiled to see him coming towards her'''.


Mayank came near her..he was looking at her passionately and Nupur heart felt the intensity in his eyes'

Mayank held her wrist and pulled her towards him looking into her eyes'a shiver ran down in Nupur's spine as their bodies touched..she felt strange feeling which she never felt before..she encircled her arms around his neck..he was so closed to her and she was feeling blessed in his arms'.

"Maynk"she tried to say something but he kept finger on her lips to stop her to say another word



Her heart skipped a bit as she felt sudden passion in his eyes''..


"You are looking beautiful"Mayank said looking at her lovingly and she could not help but blushed..


"I want to dance with my beautiful wife in Rain..can I dance with you?"he said dramatically and Nupur smiled'


He put his hands around her bare skin and Nupur closed her eyes in antiception..her heart beat starting fast..he pulled her more closer and they both were swinging in the beat of rain'Rain drops were falling on their bodies..Mayank twirled her and she was enjoying every moment in his arms..he pulled her closer again and wrapped her in his arms..he leaned his face towards her and she could feel his warmth breath on her face..sshe closed her eyes and he pressed his lips against her soft skin'she tightly held his shirt..


He again kissed her on her cheek and whispered near to her face


"I love you Nupur"


She smiled after hearing those words.. 


He dragged his lips and kissed her on the edge of her lips'their breath was mingling with each other and his touch was giving her tingling sensation..


He was about to kiss her on her lips when she called his name




He stopped himself as he heard her voice'he realized what he was going to do..he pulled himself a bit apart'


"I am sorry Nupur'I just could not control on'."he was feeling guilty for doing that



She stop him to say another word''.


"you no need to say are doing right..its your right and I am our wife"


He looked at her with surprise when he heard those words''.

"Nupur"he was surprised at her words


"Mayank I want to confess something"she was looking at him lovingly..he could felt love in her eyes..he was feeling immense happiness in his heart as he waited for her so long.,..


"I love you Mayank"she sad those words and Mayank was shocked and extreamely happy after hearing those words which he wanted to listen from her..


"Nupur please say again what you said"he asked her in disbelief while tears of happiness were twinkling in his eyes


"I love you Mayank"


"I love you from the day when we met first meeting you captured my heart..when you saved me from falling down and enveloped me in your arms I felt content,secured..

Yeah I love you..i tried to hide my feelings..when I had hurt hurted me too..

I loved you deeply,madly and today I want to confess my love because now I cant live without are my life Mayank and I wanted to be with you always"she confessed cupping his face


Mayank without wasting a moment hugged her tightly'he was exctreamly happy as finally Nupur confessed her feelings,accept his love'she too gave respond to his hug with same love and passion


"I love you Nupur"he said hugging her


" I love you too Mayank"she said with same love and affection..


Finally Mayank love melted her'''..




Mayur first kiss n some cute  momments




here is next comments n press like tab if u liked itEmbarrassed

Edited by maria-soniarti - 21 July 2011 at 11:24am

The following 63 member(s) liked the above post:


ria.arjun IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 July 2011
Posts: 4058

Posted: 21 July 2011 at 3:01am | IP Logged
OMGGG!!  23 parts????? Shocked
when will i finish??? LOL ill comment after im done with all parts!!!
i read all parts n it was magical Embarrassed
waitin for the next part Blushing

Edited by rapunzel_angel - 22 July 2011 at 7:17am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 June 2010
Posts: 8667

Posted: 21 July 2011 at 3:02am | IP Logged
confession finally!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Fantasy. Senior Member

Joined: 24 May 2011
Posts: 624

Posted: 21 July 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged
wow...beautiful update
finally Mayur confession.i loved Rain scenes
continue soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


.SilentOcean IF-Dazzler

Joined: 02 February 2011
Posts: 3174

Posted: 21 July 2011 at 3:10am | IP Logged
beautiful confession...Big smile

precap is romantic..Embarrassed

waiting for it!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Irum. IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 August 2009
Posts: 4372

Posted: 21 July 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
so finally  she confessed her love .
It was very romantic.Day Dreaming
thnx for pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Bhawna_arti IF-Dazzler

Joined: 02 December 2010
Posts: 3436

Posted: 21 July 2011 at 3:16am | IP Logged

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 123 124

Author: hazra66   Replies: 987   Views: 60901

hazra66 987 60901 12 May 2013 at 10:30pm by ...Aayoo...
mayur os gallery- mayur romace updt pg 1

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

Author: snehajose17   Replies: 64   Views: 22959

snehajose17 64 22959 05 May 2012 at 2:35am by AnilalovesJUN
Pyaar Rab hain iya rab hi pyaar hain updatepage35

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 36 37

Author: Krishna_Sourav   Replies: 289   Views: 29073

Krishna_Sourav 289 29073 07 August 2010 at 11:22am by -Anonymous11-
pyaar hi pyaar.....

2 3 4 5 6

Author: PrInCeSs_dIVa   Replies: 42   Views: 12506

PrInCeSs_dIVa 42 12506 19 July 2010 at 8:20pm by Shafoo
pyaar payaar aur sirf pyaar adhiraj& suhaani

2 3 4

Author: snehajose17   Replies: 30   Views: 5602

snehajose17 30 5602 11 May 2010 at 3:31pm by shruti_luvs_msk

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index