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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
grt update dear ... thank u so much for this long update.
hmmm...2000+ words ...grt huh ... warna tu to ekdum gyithi Evil Smile

now come to this update.
it was brillinat ...beautiful ...wonderul ...n hilarious.Big smile
mayur phone convo was hilarious ... they still same.LOL
poor mayank ... bhul hi gya tha k aaj uski sagai hai ...lolLOL

Nupur: Aaj hamari SAGAI HAI!!
Mayank:OH! Main toh bhool hi gaya.. by the way, purani ring doosre haath mein pehen lo han.
Nupur: Kyun?
Mayank: Kahin tum phans na jao.
Nupur: Woh kaise?
Mayank: Woh aise ke agar raat ko maine tumhe angoothi pehnane ke liye tumhara haath pakda aur tumhare haath mein pehle se hi angoothi hui toh...
Nupur: Toh main bata doon ke tumne pehle se hi angoothi pehna di.
Mayank: Kyun tum shaadi se pehle hi widwa hona chahti ho?
Nupur: Mayank! You are so impossible.
Mayank: 5609.

poor mayank ... nupur ko tease karna nhi bhulta ... nupur pissed off him ... bechariROFL
love their convo ... shadi se phle hi bidhwa ...ROFL
ohh ... i just love mayank's counting ...Day Dreaming
so mayur unfortunately ... actually fortunately met at shop ...n they shocked  to see each other.Tongue
n now...mayank ws back to his work ... teasing nupur ROFL

Nupur: Mujhe koi shok nahi hai.
Mayank: Mujhse sagai karne ka?
Nupur: Nahi! Tumhara peecha karne ka.
Mayank: Yani' sagai karne ka shok hai?
Nupur: Nahi!
Mayank: KYA!! Tum mujhse sagai nahi karna chahti?
Nupur: Mera matlab tha.. karna chahti hoon.
Mayank: Yani mujhse sagai karne ka shok hai?

most hilarious convo of a going to be Fiance jis  ...ROFL
poor nupur was so confused.ROFL..mayank ne kitna confused bana diya by godROFL
loved it.Smile
like mayur sagai scene.Big smile
i can imagine whole mayur scene ... nupur looks so beautiful in lehanga...n mayank look too much handsome in sherwani.Day Dreaming
lol ... sagai se phle hi ye dono suru ho gye.ROFL

Mayank: Nupur... arre han yaad aya bachon ki toh baat wahin reh gayi... toh, kya decide kiya, kitne chahiye? Mujhe toh 10 chahiye.
Nupur: Theek hai. Toh khud hi peida karna 10 bache. Urghhh. Biwi chahiye ya nahi?
Mayank: Chahiye na.. Tum nahi hogi toh bache kaise honge.

only mayank can say like this on his engagement day.ROFL
wo nhi sudharnewala.Silly
baapre ...10bacche chiye ...agar 12 bolta to ek puri team ban jati aur wo bhi extra player k sath...ROFL

When she disconnected, Mayank said "I love when you actually get irritated of what I say."

this line was so sweet ... it shows how much mayank loves her.Day Dreaming
this was d witness of his true love for her.Day Dreaming
loved it.Smile

love engagement scene ...n also like their cute lil nokh-jhokh.Smile
itwas grt ... i loved to watch mayur cute lil nokh-jhokSmile
hayyy nupur's mehendi ...hayyy dark-maroon color ...mayank kitna pyar karta hai usse yaar.Day Dreaming
mayank' k naam ki mehendi ...hayyyDay Dreaming
yaar...i alwz thot k sameer jarur kuch na kuch karega ...par thank god, usne kuch nhi kiaErmm
hayyy ...mayur marriage.Day Dreaming
it was so beautiful ... i can imagine whole marriage scene.Big smile
u wrt beautifully ... u knw, this marriage scene was more beautiful than mayur marriage in mjht.Big smile
grt writing dear...hats off to ur writing skill.Clap
like their silent vows along with ritual.Day Dreaming
it was so grt to watch them married.Day Dreaming
excellent Annie.Big smile
fab job.Clap
continue soon.Smile
thanks for the pm.Smile

aur next part mujhe 3000+ words me chiye ... kyunki precap sounds interesting. aur tu to romance+humor ki maharani hai itna to kar hi sakti hai ...Embarrassed
aur haan main tujhe request nhi kar rahi ... dhamki de rahi hu ... warna Evil Smile tu janti hai Evil Smile

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 September 2011 at 1:46pm

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Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
tht was soo nicee part

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3583

Posted: 14 September 2011 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Thank u so much a dear for this Lovely part
So beautiful and cute
waiting for there suhag raat
thanks For Pm and Big part
cont soon

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-DreamzGirl- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 18943

Posted: 14 September 2011 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
nice and long part...

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.SA. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
OMG Annz ,main to mar gayi yaar.
Mayank Nupur ki sagai aur shadi ek hi update mein.Day Dreaming
lovely update, do continue soon.

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daniella05 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
beautiful part...
really amazing!!
continue soon

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priya_27_23 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
waiting for next update soonSilly

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siditi Senior Member

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 12:05am | IP Logged
Pink, i love ur fan fictions

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