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arjunratirocks Senior Member

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
sorry for replying late Cry ad ur update is just rocking plz yaar jaldi update kiya karo Big smile

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daniella05 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 9:45am | IP Logged
lovely update
continue soon

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fend IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
hey annie
awome update loved it
loved mayur scenes so cute
very well written
thanks for the pm

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love.mayurarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
fabulous update

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Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 2:22am | IP Logged
Annie beautiful part, they are adorable and the most loving and caring couple, Loved it.

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C_O_O_L Goldie

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
v beautiful update!!!

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parul_bansal Goldie

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
awesum ! awesum ! awesum!
that karva chauth part is awesum n the whole update was perfect...Clap

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged

Annie, m really very sorry for not commenting previous 2 updates... but u knw na ... i was in my home after long time ... so Embarrassed
but i have read and pressed the like button ... u know, i dont like to comment in short in ur FF i didnt comment ... nothing is better than something u knowWink

now come to this update.Big smile

wow ...girl ... u surperbClap

loved it totally.Big smile

awesome.Big smile

mayur r sooo much adorableDay Dreaming

hayyy ... i cant get over on their charmDay Dreaming

awww ... mayank was so caring ... loved d way he adore her.Big smile...but mayank is mayank ...kuch bhi karo wapas aahi jata hai .ROFL..

Finally tum officially Mrs.Mayank Malhotra ban hi gayi.

i laughed out, when i read this line ... i thot ...chalo ye to suruwat hai ...age age kya hoga!!LOL

by god ... their morninghad been started at 1 in noon godLOL

*Mayank this isn't good for your health.* *Tum Mayank ho khumbkaran nahi..* He said quoting her words.

nupur manegi nahiConfused ...humesha hi mayank ka dosh haiOuch ... par aaj to wo khud hi phas gayiTongue

OMG!!! mayank was so naughty ...n his talk also very naughtyBlushing

i loved karvachauth talk.Big smile

it was adorable Big smile

awww mayank was sad that nupur doing this vrat ... n he was so sweet nicely he managed to skipped breakfast.Heart

he was such a sweetheart.Heart

like tie dori scene remembers me mjht scene .Embarrassed

mayank was very romantic and caring tooBig smile ... the way he asked her ...jaida bhuk to nahi lag rahi hai???Day Dreaming

he cared her too much.Big smile

n the way he put sindoor on her maang was heavenly .Day Dreaming ... i sooo loved this scene.Big smile

mayank thot, nupur would angry on him ... thats y he avoided any eye contact ... but nupur found him adorable.Day Dreaming

Nupur: Kuch khaya kyun nahi?
She asked with concern.
Mayank: Bhook nahi thi..
Nupur: Meri ankhon mein dekh ke bolo..
Mayank: Han toh kya hua Nupur... tumne bhi toh kuch nahi khaya tha na.
Nupur smiled. She kissed his forehead.

i just loved this scene.Big smile

how toouchy and how sweet this scene was ... i couldnt explain.Clap

hats off to u annie.Clap

u did a tremendous jobClap

"She's the most caring wife ever." echoed Mayank's heart.
"There could never be any husband/lover better than him." said Nupur's heart.

i just loved the way mayur respect and loved each other ... they r most most most adorable couple... loved them a lotBig smile

this last two lines were heavenly ... how nicely u explain their inner feelings.Clap

grt job girl.Clap

hats off to u.Clap

continue soon ... i impatiently wating for next update Big smile... u know what i trying to sayEmbarrassed

thanks for the pmSmile

love u Hug (behan behanLOL)

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