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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting concept...
cont soon n pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing concept annie.........cant wait to read the next part............
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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting concept
looking forward for u r update
do add me on u r pm list😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
aaaaaaaannnnnnnnn me not in ur pm list 
ummm ye kya hua :( 

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Posted: 13 years ago
wherez my name in that PM List?
 
nice concept.. update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
res agnπŸ˜†
i kno u wil kil me now...
 
 
 
ps- i loved d titleπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
n do i need to say? add me to d pm list asap!!πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice concept annie PLZ cont soon

thx alot for the pm
Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys! Thanks for liking the CS and Intro and giving your precious replies to me, they meant alot, so here is the First part of "Kaisa hai yeh Khumar" Thanks for commenting on the title too..πŸ˜‰ Loved that! Thanks again.I hope this part is exactly like ur hopes were on me. 

It was sunny afternoon when a girl with a stylish dressing entered the Malhotra mansion. She was tall and even beautiful.

She saw a woman sitting on the sofa, reading a newspaper. She ran to her,

Girl:Hi Shilpa aunty!

Shilpa:Hey Roshni! You? Here? How come?

Roshni:Aunty! What can I say now! Dont you remember? Today is my birthday!

Shilpa emerged to hug her and after the hug Roshni made a sad puppy face..

Shilpa:Hey? Why is the birthday girl sad?

Roshni:Your son!

Shilpa:Hey? Didn't he wish you?

Roshni:God knows what is he upto, I mean he is still sleeping rather than wishing me..

Shilpa:Really?!

Roshni:Yes!

Shilpa:Then go and wake him up na..

Roshni:Are you sure?

Shilpa:Go na!

She pushed her.. And Roshni went into the room of Mayank, the room was messy.. Mayank wasn't an organized person. Mayank was wrapped into the white comforter and was sleeping tight.

Roshni:Mayank!

Mayank:Umm.. What is it Rosh?!

Roshni:Wake up! 11 already baj chuke hain!

Mayank:11 toh roz bajte hain.. Let me sleep now!

Roshni:Wake up Mayank or otherwise..

Mayank in an irritated voice said:Otherwise what?

Roshni:I am gonna pour a jug of water on you!

Mayank opened his eyes and quickly checked his mobile..

Mayank:Oh God! Sorry Rosh! Happy Birthday!

Roshni:Uggh Mayank! I am gonna kill you anyway.. Itne unromantic tareeke ka Happy birthday is not acceptable!

An idea quickly clicked Mayank's mind and he hugged her from backside..

Mayank:Rosh! Yaar, itni bhi khadoos na bano, pehli baar hi toh tumhara birthday bhoola hoon..

Roshni:Oho?! Really?!

Mayank:Ab.. Woh manta hoon keh aik doh baar pehle bhi magar main kya hai?!

Roshni:Kya hai Main?

Mayank:Main yeh hai keh aaj ham tumhari birthday aik dam mere style mein manaye ge!

Roshni:What?! Mayank dont tell me keh ham phir se wahi boring romantic candle light dinner karne wale hain!

While Roshni's phone started ringing..

Roshni:Mayank, aik second han..

She went away..

Mayank:Roshni ko iss waqt kon phone kar raha hai?! 

Roshni came back after 15 minutes..

Roshni:Sorry Jaan! Main late ho gayi..

Mayank:Late nahi bohot late..

Roshni:I said sorry na!

Mayank:So what?! 

Roshni:Mayank!!

Mayank:What!

Roshni:Shaadi kab kar rahe ho?

Mayank:Kya! Shaadi?!

Roshni:Pehli baar naam sunna hai kya?

Mayank:Nahi yaar, but its too soon for this, look shaadi toh tumse hi karoon  ga na, main kahan bhaga jaa raha hoon leikin abhi shaadi keh liye bohot jaldi hai please!

While Shilpa called them both downstairs..

Roshni quickly left..

Mayank:Yaar... Main neeche gaya toh mom bhi yeh shaadi keh issue keh le kar shuru ho jayengi! Mujhe nahi karni shaadi yaar!

Mayank then got freshened up and proceeded downstairs..

There on the breakfast table, Shilpa and Roshni sat with him while he had breakfast both of them kept on forcing him for marriage..

Mayank:Mom! Rosh! This is the last time I am saying keh mujhe shaadi nahi karni!!!

Shilpa:Kyun nahi karni?

Mayank:Pata nahi! But I do what my heart says, jab dill kahe ga shaadi kar le, I will then marry.. Aur Rosh! Maine tumse pehle bhi kaha hai na, keh main koi bhag nahi raha hoon, jab shaadi karni hogi toh kar loonga na! Aur agar ap log mujhe force karte rahe na .. toh main!

Shilpa:Toh tu kya?

Mayank:Shaadi se aik raat pehle bhaag jaoonga..

Shilpa:Chup kar badmaash..

Mayank:Sach keh raha hoon maa!

Mayank's POV:Why dont Rosh and Mom understand my point.. Its not that I dont want to get married..Its just that I want some time.. To be in love with Rosh.. I cant just force myself to love her!

Now cut to a girl who was getting ready for her job.. She wore her usual jewelry had put on her make-up. She was looking damn beautiful..

And went downstairs..

Downstairs stood a boy who held her hand..

The boy:You look beautiful today..Jann!

The girl:I know..!

As she didn't like to speak much...

The boy:Nupur! What is this han? Aunty! Aunty!

Soon Nupur's mom came out..

Rachna:Kya hua Sameer beta?

Sameer:Dekhen na! Main Nupur ko bachpan se "Jaan" bulata hoon.. But she never calls me neither jaan nor Sam!

Nupur:Han toh Sameer its not about saying I consider you like that na...Waise bhi I dont feel like calling you Sam or Jaan, dont know why!

Sameer:Nupur You are impossible!

Nupur:I know that! Acha mom I am leaving for the job..

Nupur's POV:Why does Sameer force me to call him Jaan or Sam... Its just because I dont feel like calling him..But that doesn't means I love him..I cant marry him until I am completely in love with him..

Rachna:Arre ruk! 

Nupur:Kya hai?

Rachna:Sameer keh maa baap pooch rahe the, keh tune shaadi keh baare mein kya socha hai?

Nupur:Shaadi! Ughh mom! I knew keh ap yehi poocho ge.. Mom I dont feel like getting married too soon...

Rachna:Toh ab kya tere 30 ka hone ka intezaar kare ham? You are already 23, Nupur!

Nupur:23 ki hoon 32 ki nahi! Waise bhi...Mujhe abhi shaadi nahi karni hai...Get that!

She left..

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Precap:Mayank and Nupur agree to get married to Sameer and Roshni, and run a night before there marriage, first meeting!

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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely update Annie....loved nupur in dis....she is so straightforward...πŸ˜†.

waiting 4 mayur meet...😳
thanks 4 d pm😊
Edited by RatiArTi - 13 years ago