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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 3:20am | IP Logged
~ Nazron Se Nazrein Milli ~

It's morning, Raj so raha hai aur Naina kitchen me khaana bana rahi hai


Naina: shaadi ke baad aaj mera pehla birthday hai aur Raj abhi tak so raha hai Angry, woh to mujhe bhool hi gaya hai


Raj ata hai aur woh bade hi ache mood mein hota hai Smile

Raj: Good morning Smile
Naina: Good morning Smile

Naina think "shayad isse yaad aa gaya hai" Big smile

Naina: Raj, tumhe yaad hai ke aaj kiya hai? Big smile
Raj: kiya hai? Confused
Naina: tumhe sachchi mein yaad nahi hai? Disapprove
Raj: nahi... Confused
Naina: sachchi mein?
Raj: yaar kiya subha subha mujhe tang karna shuru kar diya? Angry

Naina rona shuru kar deti hai Cry aur Raj pareshan ho jata hai, phir dheere se woh Naina ke paas jata hai aur uske ansoo saaf karta hai

Raj: mujhe yaad aa gaya hai ke aaj...

Naina is very happy Big smile

Raj: ...aaj meri important meeting hai Wink
NainaCry: tumhe tumhari meeting yaad hai lekin main...

woh phirse rone laghti hai aur Raj Naina ko aise dekh kar pareshaan ho jata hai, Naina rote huwe challi jati hai aur phir Raj muskuraa tha hai

Raj: sorry jaan... baas shaam tak intezaar kar lo phir sirf hum dono honge aur hamari mohabbat  Wink

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Naina room mein baith kar ro rahi hoti hai Cry

NainaCry: Raj itna buda ho gaya hai, main usse kabhi bhi baat nahi karoun gi, woh bohot buda hai, shaadi se pehle usse har pal main aur meri har baat yaad rehti thi lekin aab woh sab kuch bhool gaya hai

Naina bathroom mein jati hai, wahan par ek gift para hota hai aur woh bohot hi khush ho jati hai


Naina: iss ka matlab Raj ko mera birthday yaad hai, main bhi na usske baare mein kiya kuch bol gayee, sorry!!! Big smileBig smileBig smile

Naina woh gift kol kar dekhti hai, uss me se ek laal dress nikal thi hai

Naina: woow! kitni khubsoraat dress hai, Raj mujhse kitna pyaar karta hai Big smileEmbarrassed

Naina uss dress ko muskurate huwe dekh rahi hoti hai tab hi Raj ata hai aur woh dress Naina ke haat se kench leta hai

Raj: arre Naina tum iss dress ko chu kar kharab mat karo, yeh meri secretary ke liye hai


Naina Shocked: mere liye nahi aur upher se secretary ke liye?
Raj: haan meri secretary ke liye, aaj se thik ek saal pehle ussne office join kiya tha

Naina feels sad
Cry

Naina think "iski secretary ne office kab join kiya yeh yaad hai lekin mrra birthday hai woh yaad nahi"


Raj: tumhe lagha ki yeh dress tumhare liye hai lekin yeh kissi aur ke liye hai... iss sabke liye sorry Confused
Naina: It's ok SmileConfused


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Naina jaa kar bed par baith jati hai aur usse bohot hi buda lagh raha hota hai, Raj woh gift apne haath mein liye Naina ke paas jaa kar baith tha hai

Raj: tumse bada aur koi befcoof nahi ho sakhta, yeh dress tumhare liye hi hai LOL
Naina: lekin tumne to kaha yeh tumhari secretary ke liye hai
Raj: tumhe tang kar raha tha

Naina use maarte huwe uske seene se lagh jati hai, Raj uske maathe ko chum the huwe bolta

"I Love You"


Naina: I Love you too, maine tumhe galat samjhaa... iss sab ke liye sorry Smile

Raj: It's ok jaan Wink
Naina: main tumhe har baar galat samajh thi houn aur main khud hi galat hoti houn Cry
Raj: aab yeh rona dona baad karo aur tyaar ho kar shaam ko terrace par aa jana Embarrassed
Naina: thik haai Big smile

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In terrace

Shaam kaa waqat hota hai, sara terrace decoret huwe hota.... Raj chair par baithe huwe Naina ka intezaar kar raha hota hai, Naina woh dress pehn kar ati hai Raj usse dekhta hi reh jata hai

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Raj uth kar uss ke paas jata hai aur uske kaan mein kuch kehta hai

Raj: tum bohot hi pyaari lagh rahi ho, Happy Birthday Wink
Naina: thnks  Embarrassed


saath mein ek tape pari hoti hai, Raj woh play karta hai


Raj: tumhari iss ada ko dekhne ke liye kabse main pyasa tha Wink
Naina: Raj Embarrassed

Raj Naina ke galle par kiss karta hai aur Naina sharmaa rahi hoti hai aur Raj se nazrein chura rahi hoti hai, phir Raj uss ke chehre ko chute huwe apni taraf karta hai



Song: Nazron se nazrein mili to
Jannat si mehki Fizayein


Naina sharmaa the huwe Raj se door jaati hai aur jaa kar baith jati hai, Raj aa kar uss ke paas baith tha hai aur uske hothon ko chumne laghta hai

Lab ne jo lab chu liya to
Aasmaan se barsi Duyaien


phir Raj Naina ko apne galle se lagha leta hai....

Naina: Raj, mere nazron ke samne se apni nazrein kabhi bhi hatne mat dena Smile
Raj: main kabhi bhi apni nazrein tumhari nazron se nahi hataoun ga Big smile

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Edited by amira_saeed - 20 February 2011 at 3:27am

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged

Hi Dear

Nice OS..
I really loved it..Raj was teasing Naina a lot..Inspite of remembering her birthday he was pretending that he has forgotten it..Naina was cursing him so much..Then that dress scene .LOLLOLLOL Raj got that dress for his secretary LOLLOL Naina is surely going nuts..
Last part was  very cute and romantic..Big smileWink They both r lost in each other..Smile
 
Do write some more OS
Bye


Edited by suhana.dixit - 20 February 2011 at 9:50am

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

It is Naina's first birthday after their wedding and she is thinking that Raj has forgotten it as he had not wished her!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Naina tried to ask if Raj remembered but Raj got irritated which made her cry!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Raj got worried and then said ke usse yaad aa gaya ke aaj uski important meeting hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Naina who had gotten hopeful that he has remembered, again starts crying and walks off!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Raj smiled as he was just teasing her and had something planned for the evening!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina is crying in her room that Raj has forgotten everything!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

But how can Raj forget it??Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueAfter all it's his Naina's birthday!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Naina is happy to see a gift in the bathroom and opens it to find a red dress!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

But Raj takes the dress away from her saying that it is for his secretary as she had joined his office one year back!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

One moment Naina feels that Raj remembers her birthday and the next moment Raj does something which makes her think he has forgotten it!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Raj is really teasing Naina a lot and pretending that he has forgotten her birthday and Naina is cursing him so much!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Finally Raj gave her the dress saying that it is for her showing that he had not forgotten her birthday!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

He called her to the terrace in the evening!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

In the evening the whole terrace was decorated and Raj was waiting for Naina!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj was mesmerized to see Naina in that dress as she was looking beautiful!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

Raj wished her Happy Birthday and kissed her on the cheek!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

The song is very nice and romantic!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina is blushing and Raj kissed her!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

It was very cute and romantic!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Raj celebrated Naina's birthday very romantically and promised to stay with her forever!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Party Party Party Party

It was a very nice one shot!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap


 



Edited by Shaina_b - 03 March 2011 at 10:45am

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Aww.....thats a sweet shot. Loved the way Raj was teasing Naina. Specially wo dress wali part....secretary ke liye hai....coz ek saal pehle office join kiya tha....ROFL....wat a reason!! I loved that portion...a bit too much...hehe. And the rest was also very sweet....there was this sweet romantic essence all thruout the shot....which was very nice. Loved reading it...and thanks for writing this one shot. And yeah....this song itself is a charming one....so it simply adds to the flavour!!

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged

lovely OS Ameera...

pahle sare scene na padhte hue bada maza aaya...!!! ek pal me naina ko lagta hai ke raj ko yaad hai us ka birthday aur dushre hi pal me raj jan bujh kar aisa kuch karta hai ke naina use mann hi mann galiyan deti rahti hai...

dress bhi us ke hath se khinch liya aur bola ke secretery ke liye hai... kyoun ke ek saal pahle us ne join kiya tha...ha ha ha...!!! yeh naina bhi na...har choti baat par roti hai...!!! par akhir dress jis ka tha use mil bhi gaya...

aur voh song bhi baht khubshurat tha...aur last scene bhi baht romantic tha...par is OS me char-chand laga diya voh Raj aur Naina ke pic ne...



Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 20 February 2011 at 7:51am

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Hey i don't know u but it's ur first OS on Raj & Naina i think.
From ur dp i know now that ur KK & KMH fan.
Lovely OS Raj can never 4get Naina's birthday he was just teasing her & trying to surprise her, and it was beautiful & romantic fic.

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged
great

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nice one

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