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FF-REMORSE-MAAN & GEET-THREAD 3- (Page 2)

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread you totally deserve it for such and amazing ff Clap

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So maan is getting effected by her so much that he beat his brother to death and ergh dadi is so venomous alongside dev and awe the way he was searching for her like a mad man but not for the pleasure but to check if she was alright but geet is only function to be his slave she has lost all emotions to see his remorse which she was scared he would fall in but it's too late she doesn't know anything and maan has drowned and awe when he came back to geet so he can sleep peacefully in he arms her immediate reaction was to take her clothes of but maan doesn't want that now well he did but now he just wants her presence which soothes him but too late for that she's become lifeless and only functions to be his body pleasure which now he is hating remorse is such a deep emotion that it can destroy people like maan anyways another great update keyama and ooh precap can't wait to read more Smile

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread.......

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 5:54pm | IP Logged

Maan- are you alright? He was panting... He looks at the lips where that b**** licked... How dare he? He kissed her tight... Like those lips only belongs to him. No one els. He sucked everywhere he licked... How dare he? That r*** that b****! Geet stood there num... Her both hand resting on the side..

her both hands on either side.....i felt like i'm going to choke now

Cry Cry Cry



Maan- why you behaving like this?
Geet- I am your slave. You wanted me to behave like this. I am only your sex pleasure & that's what you want me for... What els do you expect?... Geet walks towards the bedroom...



can u believe that out of all u'r updates, this is the one that made me cry. i don't know y..
in the previous chapters first geet was hopeful, then maan went to total extremes of lowpoints and geet met with ultimate disasters but i don't know......may be it's hard to read that now she is so dead inside that the person who brought the death can also feel it.




Edited by basicquestion1 - 19 February 2011 at 6:12pm

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 6:03pm | IP Logged

Oh the other man was his brother, wow, Maan starting to feel jealous......

Update soon please......
 

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
awesome part!
maans in love... crazy love
con't soon!

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
congrats on new thread
awesome update
continue soon


Edited by ambbiha - 19 February 2011 at 6:21pm

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
Hey keya 5naly rockng updte!wil u updte next part also nw?plz updte na!plz reply atleast plz plz!so dadi cld maan a garbage n i luvd 2 knw maan kickd dev ypieee

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
Congo Shongo for the new threadPartyParty

Thanks for an amazing update .
Maan has started getting feeling the pain of possessiveness,bonding,relationship and above all love .
He is heating to see himself falling for Geet.
Good way to reveal this track .
Continue soon

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