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FF-REMORSE-MAAN & GEET-THREAD 3- (Page 120)

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
omg the part was superb i simply loved it
it was awesum really i didnt expected sumthing like this
i mean i read it n i was blown out of my mind
believe me like 4 sum moment i was just numb like cudnt feel anything i didnt expected this part that too this quick well i kno it was high point bt 2 this extent i really didnt expected now sumhow i can really relate 2 ur remorse which u myt in here
wen geet felt sumthing haapy in her heart surely she will b thnk sumthing like that


nd surely he will regret nd will repent tooo
i kno i shudnt be feeling sad 4 him coz he is

bt i dont kno y i really missed a tear 4 him 4rm my eyes

sumwhere i did felt pain 4 him in my heart i felt like sumthing pierced thru my heart

i kno the way his heart gt break 2day it had 2 b 1 day bt isint did he desereved this


was sumwhere in my heart was feeling sorry 4 him 4 his ryt now state nd feared 4 wat nxt will happen 2 him wen he will realize the whole pain he has givev 2 her this was just physical didnt even bothered her sumwhere wat abt the internal damage he had done 2 her bt sumwhere i tot
if he even asked her 4 4givness she myt say this


y y did u had to hurt me so much that now there is sumhow no cum bck y did he hurt her so much even though she asked him nt to loose his morals then y
it was nt that his hand bleeded 2day it was his heart that bleeded 2day
it is just that he cant understand ryt now bt im afraid wen he will realize the real damage he has done 2 her which is much bigger than this pain that he tnks he has given to her by just pulling her hair wat will happen wen he will realize that he has brutally taken away her soul
bt wat can we say now he did wat we all was afraid off he did

this so true this is wat had happened here
nd now we are waiting wat more


now last bt nt the least i must say u have written the part so beautifully completely justified if i have written so much its just coz u made me feel sumthing real strong n real hard dear the emotions were well explained that just touched my heart u wrote it so well that i read it many times then still icudnt resist it although it was a real sad part bt the way it was written i felt reading it again n again coz loved reading it i hope im nt praising u so much only how much u deserve
hope my comment is worth ur update
keep writing dear simply loved it
keep writing
god bless u waiting eagerly 4 nxt part

bt im real afraid of his REMORSES
 





Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 02 March 2011 at 1:19pm

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by holyangel

is ur 20 min not over...Angry

ohhh dont tell me u slept again on ur lapi....LOL


oO update is upEmbarrassed

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:29am | IP Logged
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee 
nw maan is feeling d actual pain of geet
hope nw geet will feel happy n try 2 b happy 
n ya precap is scary if maan is nt alright thn hw can geet give him more pain n hope 1 day thy both feel sorry for thmselves

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:30am | IP Logged
omg!..
the precap was a shocker gurl!......Shocked
pls pls.. put everything right on path!.....
awesome update i loved it!...


Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 02 March 2011 at 10:31am

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:31am | IP Logged
wow maan feeling the remorse and geet's pain... lovely update... happy for geet.. OMG hope maan's alright... precap is scary.. continue soon

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
before she was cold & then lost  baby
mourn for the baby but turn to psych depression
& the other she doesnt have anybody to confide
her greiving of her lost baby & his the reason
that why she bahaving like that  when mother
lost he child its big loss  even if he change or
love her she doesnt believe at all everytime she
see him it remind her the killer of her baby
she need professional help or else she turn
crazy soon  
 
keyama ur really damn excellent writer
this things happen in really life to sorry i posted
long i'm happy for what yu do i'm really appreciate
ur taking time to make happy thanks a lot from the
bottom of my heart MUAH
super fabulous update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnn


Edited by simi91 - 02 March 2011 at 10:33am

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
awesome update.... now the real Remorse begins....

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE

Originally posted by holyangel

is ur 20 min not over...Angry

ohhh dont tell me u slept again on ur lapi....LOL


oO update is upEmbarrassed

yeahhhh... saw it at the same time i posted... what a timing.... Wink

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