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Adi's 'The-Vampy-Spy__The-Apple-Of-My-Eye' CC!!!!! (Page 80)

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
ROFL brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
you're an amazing vamp ritzy!!!!!! ROFL

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
Thanks Adi EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed. I am trying to be more and more evil. LOL
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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
It's working really well. ;)
 
 
Next part
 
 
Sid: Anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!! My love!!
 
(Shaurya comes)
 
Shaurya: Love? Hawwwwwwww!!
 
Pia: Angellllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Chaand (hissing) : Haaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
 
Abhay: Dad....please..
 
[Chaand's eyes turn blue. Sid's eyes turn turquoise green.]
 
Sid: Yummy!!
 
Panchhi: Yes sir?
 
Anu: Main bataati hoon tujhe...yes sir ki bacchi!! *throws sugar at Panchhi*
 
Sid!
 
Sid: Yes love?
 
Anu: We... *blushes* Haaye allah! Sharam aati hai!
 
Sid: Oh c'mon...bolo na.
 
Chaand: You two are getting married. Agle week.
 
Abhay: Cool dad...lekin abhi toh engagement hui thi.
 
Chaand: Abhayyyyyyyyyyy.
 
Abhay: Yes dad?
 
Chaand: Shut up!!
 
Shaadi ki preparation karo........... T ko bulaao............. aur Pia ko bhagaao..........
 
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me off now. gonna dream about anu ki shaadi. :D
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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
Gooooooooooood Niiiiiiiiiiight Adi. Superb. ROFL I liked Shaurya's entry at Love ha ha

And thanks. I loved the way Anu pounced on Panchi. Yeh aisi heroins honi chahiye tabhi hero haath mein rehte hain. But wait for me to come Wink


Edited by Ritz93 - 02 March 2011 at 3:26pm

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
This was too long so, I divided it in two parts.

Next part a- The scene shifts back to parlour where Ritz is getting ready

The parlour lady does the red makeup to go with the red scarf and black short dress. The eye makeup is smoky to match the smokin' looks that Ritz is going to wear later.

Now comes the hairstyle.
The Parlour lady: Do you want curls or straight hair look?
Ritz: I am confused. Sometimes Pia has curls and sometimes straight. No copying the main lead. But T is no different for curls and straight. Can we have both?
The Parlour lady: Okay, half straight, half curls. What about color?
Ritz is irritated that the parlour lady wants so many details.
Ritz **furious now**: Do you have to ask everything to me? Can't you decide?
The parlour lady (scared): Okay base dark black and highlights red?
Ritz: Fine!!!
The Parlour lady: Fine!!

Meanwhile, the tubelight is on. And Ritz knows how to look smokin'. Ouch, that's difficult as Ritz doesn't smoke but the vamp should smoke. Otherwise, how will audience know that smokin' is bad. Ritz can't compromise her principles for the Vamp character. So, she uses Anu's brains and replaces cigarette with a white pen to complement her black dress. And audience can imagine the smoke.

The audience nods and claps.

Next part b - In the parlour...

Ritz is looking smokin' hot, sexy, beautiful and evil. Satisfied with her appearance, Ritz goes to the payment counter.


Ritz turns to the audience: Any guesses on how will I pay?

The audience replies for the first time: Ritz will use Abhay's credit card.

Ritz: It's toooo obvious. **turns sexily her back to audience** A vamp can't be that obvious.

The audience yawns: Okay, you will use somebody else's credit card.

Ritz thinks in the background, "The audience is not scared of the Vamp, at all. I will check on that part later. First, I need to complete the scene."

Ritz goes for the payment. She shows the parlour owner her empty wallet. The owner **faints**. Ritz runs. Her revenge with the Parlour lady is complete. **evil grin**

You know Ritz chorified **faints** from Adi's writing style  and yawns from Anu's- that's a real bad habit. Ritz is ready to be a Vamp now but she needs to practice more evilness to be successful.


Edited by Ritz93 - 02 March 2011 at 3:42pm

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
ROFLROFL
 
you are sooo funny ritz! ROFL
 
 
achha listen...don't post parts aise hi...post them between our parts otherwise we'll also get confused about what we are doing. LOL
 
aaj shaam mein have to post next section...can hardly wait!
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