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aparna4karanika

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
its r8... bt plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dnt end it..
coz its incomplete W*Hout being ARJUHI!  arjun n arohi r incomplete W*Hout each other

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Hey Dear, 

I liked it and the poem too. 

Just a suggestion, next time you write please try to write proper english. I know we all write in chats and all, But when you are writing a story, its easier to understand if you don't use shortcuts.  Smile

Good Luck with more writing

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
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thnk u all 4 ur lovely commenta nd lyks....rlly appreciate it....i knw Arjuhi r incomplete wivout each other buh i wanted 2 keep it as an OS, i cnt think of any new ideas..if any1 has any suggestions nd ideas 2 dis....just tell me nd i probz fink of finishin dis until Arjuhi meet....
thnk u once again.....Smile



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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kanuk

Hey Dear, 

I liked it and the poem too. 

Just a suggestion, next time you write please try to write proper english. I know we all write in chats and all, But when you are writing a story, its easier to understand if you don't use shortcuts.  Smile

Good Luck with more writing



hey thnk u so much.... nd thnx 4 da suggestion will keep in mind nxt tym....i'll try not 2 use shortcuts.....thnk u V.much....Smile


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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
great first part
 
why Arohi leaving Arjun although she loves him?
 
And your poems to explain their feeling is superb
 
waiting ffor next part  

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
its really nice i like this plz continue andd nice work:)

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thnx 4 ur lovely comments....
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rrly appreciating it as dis was 1st OS.....thnx a ton guys...

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Posted: 25 July 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
neelam, plz continue on this, i thought u wuld cuz we all want arjuhi together it wuld be a better endin...plz continueSmile

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