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MN OS GALLERY...FRIEND AHEAD OF HUSBAND..Pg 67... (Page 29)

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arjun-forever

this was really nice...
continue soon


thanks a lot...Smile

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged
lovely and cute updt dear
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gopi06

lovely and cute updt dear
thanks for the pm


thanks a lot dear...Smile
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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 6:07am | IP Logged
THANKS A LOT GUYZ FOR LIKING THIS SS...UR COMMENTS REALLY BOOST ME A LOT AND GIVE STRENGHT TO WRITE BETTER N BETTER...Hug

SORRY FOR BEING TOO LATE THIS TIME...


I'LL UPDATE TWO MORE PARTS THN THN SS WILL BE END...


WITH LOVE
MAHA...WinkSmile


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PART 6:

 

She then ran to the baby and start playing with him…….and mayank was watching his life with immenced loved and passion……..

M: God I just love this girl………( smiled)

Then they went for the dinner….on returning back to their homes both were memorose their entire day……nupur found a different mayank which she never thought……….and mayank was just more fell in love wid this shy, innocence, bold girl……….

Journey of the day comes to an end but to start wid new thoughts…….

 

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Finally the wedding day arrived. Everyone was happy and busy in making prepations.

Phone rings:

N: hello.

M: hi miss patakhaa…

N:  tu ye tum hu.? (irritatd tone)

M: q? tum kisi aur ko expect ker rahi thei………?

N: kitnai samjhdhar hugayei hu mayank tum meray sath reh k………..bilkul sahi samjha tum nai…afsos tum niklaI phone pai……..Unhappy

M: ohh hooo………tu mis patakha sapnai bhi daiknai lagi hai………by the way yeh ladkiyoo wali aadat kab se aayei……?Confused

N: wht do u mean ladkiyoo wali aadat……..angry……kiya kehna chatai hu k mai ladki nai hu…….?Angry

M: yeh mjhey kaisei pata huga k tumladki hu k nai……….chee… chee…….kaise baatai ker rahi hu nupur…..aiee bhagwaan...ShockedShocked aj kal ki ladkiyoo ko kiya hugaya hai…………ladkoo se pochtei hai k mai ladki hu k nai…….. with suppressed smile...

N: this makes nupur hell annoyed…..shut up mayank.just shut up…….iss waqt if tum meray samnay hotai tu jaan se mar dalti……furious Dead

M: hey bhagwaan yeh ladki shadi walai din kiya kernai ja rahai thei……thank god mai phone pai hu…..warna mera tu kahri din hota ……….aabhi maine dikha hi kiya iss dunya mai……….Cry

N:   go to hell……hang up the phone……….

Samjhta kiya hai yeh apnai ap ko……samnay aayei phir batati hu………

                           

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Dia has arrived from parlour….every one admiring her…….

Dadi: meri bachi ko nazar na lagay…..

Dad: aaray bhai hum late hurahai hai nikalnai ki tiyari karoo…..yeh nupur kaha rehgayei hai……..?

Meanwhile nupur came…she wore blood red fish lehnga wid half French hair style looking just awesome…….

Dadi: loo aagayei sahabzadii………

N: dia u looking awesome….aadi ko tu bhagwaan bachayei aaj….Wink….

Dia: shut up nupur……………blushed……… waisey nupur tujh pai yeh red color kitna suit kerta hai…….sachi…..lag raha hai meri nai teri shadi hai…….

N: thanx dia……but pls mjhey koi shadi ka shok nai hai iss liyei meri shadi tu na karwa tu aach ahai…………

Dia: aacha……mayank k baray mai kiya khyal hai…….?

N: wht ……….voo saroo, kharoos……..yach…………..never…..chee……..vo akhri ladka huga tab bhi mai uss se shadi nai kaeroo gi…….

Dia: nupur jii..piyar badai badoo ko rastai pai  lai aata hai tu phr tum kiya cheez hu………..? daikhtai hai kiya hota hai………..

N: theik hai……will see……..ab chalay nai tu tumhara honai wala hubby khud  yaha aajyei gai lainei ……lol…..

Whn every one reached at hall they all r stunned looking at the decorations…enterance is decorated wid flowers…red carpet is placed from enterance to the mandap….at the corner of hall there was a big portrait of dia and aadi's mehendi…

Dia eyes filled wid tears….she couldnt even imagine all this……

Dia: nupur….mjhey samjh nai aaraha k mai kaisey tujhey thanx kahoo……..i just ….i jus…….

N: chup…….kia mai terai liyei apni behen k liyei itna bhi nai kersakti…..mera tujh pai kiya yeh haq nai…….got teary……..

Dia: I love u nupur………tu meri jaan hai………they both hugged eachother………..

Agar aap dono ka love session khatam hugaya hu tu kiya hum aajeyi……..all r turned around to see..barat has arrived……..everyone welcoming them whn mayank came to nupur….

M: miss patakhaa aj tu tum sach mai patakhaa lag ragi hu……..Wink…….

N:  blushed….thanx……waisey tum bhi aaj thorai buhat insan lag rahy hu……

M: shukriya…….ap ko iss Bandai nacheez  mai koi tu baat aachi lagi………waisey ek baat kahu..??

N: kahu………

M: aj tum…….he came close to her……..nupur felt her heart beat  rises to the top…….nupur tum buhat …. i mean mera dil keh raha hai…..

N: kiya kehraha hai tumhara dil………??

M: mera dil keh raha hai……came more close to her.. she can felt his breath on her cheeks…….she closed her eyes in eagerness…….. mera dil kehraha hai miss patakhaa….k...k... k kahi tum aaj khushi se phaat na jao………ROFLROFL………and ran from their…….

N: I hate u …….i hate u ……….u monkey,  …….mai tumse aab kabhi baat nai karoo gi………AngryAngry


Wedding rituals was abt to start…all are gatherd near mandap to give thier blessings to the couple…..nupur also doing the same whn mayank came and stood beside her…..

M: how romantic na nupur……….?

N: iss mai romantic wali kiya baat hai……..pheerai laine mai kaisa romance…………?? Let me correct u Mr….They r looking adorable……ok.!!!

M: ahem ahem……..thanks miss patakhaa batanai k liyei warna mai tu kch aur hi samajh raha tha……..smiled at her childlike thought…..by the way if  tum kaho tu hum bhi aaj….

N: kia hum bhi aaj…….kia kehna chatai hu k hum bhi aaj shadi kerlai……..??rite……?? Angry….. aisa sochna bhi maat……tum jaise ladkoo ko mai aachay se janti hu……

M: Sshhh……..nupur chup……..ahista bolo………

N: acha aab tum pai aayei tu ahista bolo…..how mean……..frown

M: excuse me…..!! let me clear u dear……mai yeh kehna chata tha k tum kahu tu hum shadi baad raat mai long drive pai chalai………

N: she astonished to hear this…………….tumhara kitna bura sense of humour hai…Shocked……improve it pls……..( in a order tone)

M: in a low tone…….tumhay kiya maloom k mera sense of humour kaisa hai……?? Saarai romance ka satya naas kerdiya…….humour tu dur ki baat mera sense hi kharab kerdiya………. LOLLOL…….aie bhagwaan itna bura joke tu maine apnay app se aaj tak nai kiya….jo aaj kerna paraa…….meri image……….Cry………ROFL…….

N: kch kaha tumnai …..?

M: tooba meri baap ki jo aab maine kch kaha tumse……… hold his ears……ROFL

Dia rukhsatii was taking place…….everyone was sad……..nupur hold her and take her slowly to the car…..her eyes got teary……dia meet  wid everoyone…….and in the last whn she saw nupur she couldn't control herself and tears flow down frm her eyes………both hugged each other….

Mean while mayank announced…..

M: hey guys pls be quick abi abhi pata chala hai k Katrena( rainstorm)  aanay wala hai……..

Everyone surprised……..katrena….??

Dadi: aaei hye…yeh katrena ko kis nai bulaya……..aab kiya hmari shadi mai yeh filmmo walai bhi aayei gai…….aei bhagwaan……..yeh daikhnai k pehlay mai maar q na gayei………

N: dadi abhi apnai daikha hi kaha hai usko………. Whn she realized wht did she said……she felt guilty…….oopsShockedShocked……yeh maine kia kaha…..lol

Dadi: haa haa tu chati yahi hai……..

N: nai dadi mera yeh matlab nai tha…….sad

Mayank winked at aadi and pointed towards nupur……..aadi laughed…..

Aadi: aaray dadi mayank k kehnai ka matlab yeh hai k toofaan aanay wala hai…….agar hum jaldi na niklay yaha se tu……..he again pointed towards nupur……..every one laughd out louder……… nupur was  crying so according to mayank if rukhsati wouldn't take place widin few min……katreena will come………lol………..

N:mayank k bachay…….

M: bhagwaan ap ki zubaan Mubarak karay………LOL…..

N; tumnai q sochlia hai meray hatthoo mernai ka………?

M: hayiii…….hmari aisei kismat kaha……..?? mischievous smile……..

Dadi: chaloo beta late huraha hai .nupur ka tu kam hi lartai rehna hai…….

Nupur made childish face and maynak laughed at her with love……..

 After rukhsati nupur went into the garden and sit…she was missing dia…..and remembering the moments which they both spend together………

Mayank came and sit wid her and place his hand on her shoulder…….

M: miss ker rahi hu dia ko…..?

N: she saw her and nodded…tears roll down her cheeks……

M: removed her tears ….. nupur ek na ek din tu dia ko jana that tu iss mai udas honai ki kiya baat hai……

N: nai maynak mai khush hu k usski shadi hugayi but aab mai akeli hugayei  hu……aab koi nai hai meray sath, meray pas jis se mai baatai kersakoo , share kersakoo…….hans sakoo…….. roo sakoo…….u know mai aur dia bachpan se sath hai…….

Mjhey aaj bhi yaad hai……school mai whn I was in 10th standard…..i liked sum one……I truly mad for him……..after school we often went out for the icecream…..on my b'day he gave a surprise to me…..he said nupur I promise I wont let u down .never……I will always make u happy……..on my b'day he took me to his apartment…..he decorated for me……..i was soo happy….mjhey laga k mjhse zyada lucky iss dunya mai koi nai ….but  I was wrong………..he misbehaved wid me……. He want to won a bet…….

M: bet……?

N: yes bet…….? Ussnai apnay frnds k sath bet lagyei thei k vo mjhey apni g/f bana k deikhayi  ga…….thori dair baad uss k frnds bhi aagayei ….every one made fool of me…….they were all  laughed at me…….i was dumped by him……..i just ran from there………I was completely shattered…….dia thei jis nai mjhey sambhala…….she remain wid me throught my school days, college days……..she never left me alone………thn I changed myself…….i used to hate boys…… asab ek jaise hotai hai………………….mayank kiya mai itni buri hu k ussnai meray sath aisa kiya...he used me just for the bet mayank……..meray bhi tu sapnai hai…….mai bhi kisi ko apna kehna chati hu.but………

She cried……mayank hold her close……she sumwhere felt relief from her pain in his cuddle……. Both were sit in the same position for an hour…….nupur slept in his arms…….

M: I promise nupur mai tumhay aaj k baad kabhi akela nai choro ga...kabhi nai…….will give u loads of happiness………thts my promise to my love and to my life………he lean down and kissed on her forehead………

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Edited by drmaha - 19 June 2011 at 6:29am

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
i dont know how many times i've written this here that mayank is  totally a jerk! and nupurs such a sweet heart! she always forgets the dispute and behaves so sweetly! if i was in her place, i'd have made him regret each and every joke his cut on me!
i loved mayanks promise at the end. which made him look like a cute jerk! i hope he holds on to his promise.


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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
uhhh...mayu is such ajerk and nupsi is being very sweet!!

loved last line...

nice update dear..!!

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mayank is the first jerk whom i love...loved his promise...

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