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MN OS GALLERY...FRIEND AHEAD OF HUSBAND..Pg 67... (Page 20)

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Thanks a lot for ur immense support and lovely comments...Hug

it really meant a lot to me...Big smile

hope u like this part also...



with love




Edited by drmaha - 22 May 2011 at 9:26am

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged

Part 4:


Mayank was listening all the conversation and smiled'..suddenly an idea got struck in to his mind''.. and he gave a broad smile''''.

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Today is dia's sangeet ceremony.everyone was so excited specially nupur.she was wandering around here and there and while doing this she also snubbed by dadi  coz she as usual broke 3 glases, I tray, and vase'.. Shocked

Dia sangeet rituals was abt to start whn dadi called her.she make-believe to move slowly due to her high heels...

M: kahu tu mai uthaloo miss patakha.? Grin

N: giving agony look' no thanks.i don't need anyone's help'I can walk by myself'..

Kitna shok hota hai inn ladkoo ko ladkiyoo ko chonai ka' talking to herself but mayank listen in..

M: oh hello'mjhey koi shok nai hai tumhay choonai ka'.vo tu tumlog khud moka deti hu hmai'(With playful smile)

N: tum''..pointed him finger''meanwhile her mom called her as the ceremony was abt to start''..

Tumhay tu mai baad mai daikhoo giAngry''..and left'.

M: hi maar gaya'..is ada paiDay Dreaming'''hum bhi tu yahi chatai hai k aap sirf hmay daikhai''' completely drool over her'.

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Nupur sat beside dia and join the sangeet'..competition was going on between girls and boys'and mayank in no way let go any chance to tease her'.

Dadi: aaray bacho kiya gatai hi rahoo gai ya nacho gai bhi''chaloo nupur uth aur shorro huja'..

Everyone starts to hoot'.wah wah dadi kiya baat kahi hai'''maynak pass flying kis to dadi''.

N: nai dadi meray paer mai dard hai''mai nai nach sakt...Unhappy

Dadi: aachaaa''.abhi tujhey agar kaha jayei k cricket khel tu kaisei bandariyaa ki tarah nachti peri gei''..annoyed

N: dadi pls''..( pleaded)

Dadi: haa dadi ki baat q mano gi bhala''apni dadi thori na samjhti hu'.depressed

M: nupur tum dadi ki baatnai maan rahi  awww Shocked''.uff''.. sharam aani chayei tumhay aisa kehtai hui bhi'''        (showed her tongue)

N: aggravated .tum chup raho.yeh mera aur dadi ka matter hai''

Shilpa aunte: aaray tum loogoo aaj ka hi din mila hai jagda kernai ko''..

Dadi: nupur khabardar tu nai mayank ko kch bhi kaha tu''

Kitna samjhdhar aur piyara bacha hai''.(gave him blessings)

N: piyara aur mayank? Laugh out louder'''ROFL

M: q? jealous hurahi hu meri khubsurti se''? arrogantly said

N: helo..jealous hoti hai meri jooti''..

Nupur bhushaan ka kisi se koi competition nai.aur na husakta hai'''( Tongue)

M: yeh tu tumnai sahi kaha' I agree..bhala kabhi kisi bandariyaa ka bhi competition hua hai vo bhi insaano se'''. winked'.. q dadi'?

Everyone laugh and nupur got hell mad at him she rather to have any further convo left the place'. Girls start dancing. Soon Mayank got bored so he thought to talk to nupur abt the idea he have in his mind so he looked for nupur'..

Nupur was looking after all the prep whn mayank came to her'..

M: hi miss patakhaa..?Smile

N: tum..Tum yaha q aayei hu''.? with angry look

M: q? Mai yaha nai asakta'' made childlike face

N: nai aasaktai''.keep ignoring him and doing her work''' go inside as everyone was looking for u''.

M: sab busy hai''.aur mai boor huraha tha tu socha k tumharai pas aajao'.

N: q.? mai koi time pas hu.? Fuming at him'.

M: aacha aacha'..chalo m sorry for whtever I have done''I wana talk to u sumthg imp''.

N: surprised at his behavior''..yeh tum hu''.? I don't believe this''.

M: haa '.yeh mai kehraha hu''see nupur'..

Dia and aadi getting married and we all are best frnd''I have decided to do somethg special for their wedding''.

N: wht special'..?

M: It could be anythg tht can make their wedding memorable''although it's quite late but still there is a lot to do'but I can't do this alone.i need ur help''..will u..? lets be frnd'.. he fwded his hand towards nupur'''

N: jaha tak wedding special plan kernai ka hai tu will surely help u'.. but as far as friendship is concern tu.mean while shilpa aunt called  her inside'

Nupur was abt to leave whn mayank grasp her hand .

M: m w8ing nupur''?

N: hmmm''.socho gi''..said it wid smile and ran inside''..

Mayank also smiled at her jesture and follow her'..

Music starts:

everyone   got alert towards mayank''

Mayank:

He went around nupur and forward his hand'..

KEHDO K TUM MERAY DIL MAI RAHO GEI

KEHDO K TUM MJHSE DOSTI KAROO GEI

Nupur  disregard him'..

DAIKHOO GI SOCHO GI'.

KAL PARSO KCH KAHO GI'

Mayank:

KEHDO K TUM MJHSE DOSTI KAROO GAI''

Nupur

OOH''DAIKHOO GI SOCHO GI'.

KAL PARSO KCH KAHO GI'

Dia meanwhile join them and remembering old days of life''..she clasp aadi hand and move to nupur'.

HUM SATHI KITNAI PURANAI

PHIR Q HAI ITNAI ANJANAY

KIYA RANG LAYEI NAJANAY'.

BACHPAN K YEH DOSTANAI'.


Mayank:

Mayank looked at nupur deeply and encircles hir arms around her waist and make her twirl''..


KAB KAHA.. KIYA KHABAR

JA RUKAI YEH NAZAR'..

ARAY KIYA PATA KAUN HAI'

KIS KA YAHA HUMSAFAR''

 

KEHDO K TUM MERAY DIL MAI RAHAO GAI

KEHDO K TUM MJHSE DOSTI KAROO GAI

Mayank went to dia and join his hands''(pleaded tone)


TUM BHI TU HU DOST MERI''..

TUM TU MERA SATH DAIDOO''..'

APNI SAHELI KA MERAY ''.HAATHO MAI TUM HAATH DAIDOO''.


Nupur:

Glared at him and he winked''..She forwaded her hands towards mayank''..


LOO MAINE KAHA TUMSE DOSTI KAROOGI'''.

TUM BHI KAHO MJHSE DOSTI KARO GAI'''.

Mayank decided to tease her lil more'''..


SOCHHO GA DAIKHOO GA KAL PARSOO KCH KAHOO GA''''.

 

Nupur become sadden at his behave''.but then all three dia, aadi ,mayank join nupur and sang together'''.. snap have been taken and this moment everlastingly captured''.


HOPE U LIKE THIS...Wink

pls leave ur precious comments...



Edited by drmaha - 22 May 2011 at 9:39am

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:02am | IP Logged
Mayank Teasing Session is Still on..LOL
he is not Leaving a Single chance..LOL
Btw Loved the Song and Nice part

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:37am | IP Logged
dadi's totally horrible! i dont get why she has to be so mean to nupur?
and mayank is being such a jerk. if i were in nupurs place, mayank would be dead!

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Nice update...Mayank leaves no chance to tease her...she is just too adorable but stubborn too...nice song selection...cont soon...thnx for pm...!!!

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
hey this is reallly nice...
continue soon...
liked it a lot...
please PM me the next time...

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Lovly part.

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