MN OS GALLERY...FRIEND AHEAD OF HUSBAND..Pg 67... - Page 42

Posted: 12 years ago
O.M.G.😲
OMG!!! what was that Maha??????😲
i cant believe my eyes!!!!!😲
it was a full roamntic os😳 ... u r brilliant in humor...nw u r grt in romance too... i never thought u can write such kind of stuffπŸ˜› πŸ˜†
gud going Maha...Fari ka asar tumpe dikh raha hai ...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
beautiful os.⭐️
i was all red during reading... n blushed like a fool β˜ΊοΈ
like mayur talk ... they wr so sweet at first ... lol ... nupur past half an hour se bus 5 min bolti aa rahi hai ... lolπŸ˜† ... i can imagine nupur in red-black saree ... she llok really hott in those attire.πŸ˜ƒ
gud choice Maha πŸ‘πŸΌ
next i was waiting for a nice dinner with fantastic four iwth lots of teasing with lil romance ... but u made me speechless ... and then the all famous rain changed everything.☺️
i was all red then.☺️
Maha, tumne to Fiza ko bhi piche chor dia ... lol ... gud job huh!!🀣
bdw, aapme ye achank se romance ka pahar kaise tut parah????πŸ˜›
akhir baat kya hai, jara hume bhi to pata chalen!!!πŸ˜‰
it was totally outstanding romanctic superb os.πŸ˜ƒ
loved it.😊
love u.πŸ€—
waiting for next os😊

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur


O.M.G.😲
OMG!!! what was that Maha??????😲
i cant believe my eyes!!!!!😲
it was a full roamntic os😳 ... u r brilliant in humor...nw u r grt in romance too... i never thought u can write such kind of stuffπŸ˜› πŸ˜†
gud going Maha...Fari ka asar tumpe dikh raha hai ...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
beautiful os.⭐️
i was all red during reading... n blushed like a fool β˜ΊοΈ
like mayur talk ... they wr so sweet at first ... lol ... nupur past half an hour se bus 5 min bolti aa rahi hai ... lolπŸ˜† ... i can imagine nupur in red-black saree ... she llok really hott in those attire.πŸ˜ƒ
gud choice Maha πŸ‘πŸΌ
next i was waiting for a nice dinner with fantastic four iwth lots of teasing with lil romance ... but u made me speechless ... and then the all famous rain changed everything.☺️
i was all red then.☺️
Maha, tumne to Fiza ko bhi piche chor dia ... lol ... gud job huh!!🀣
bdw, aapme ye achank se romance ka pahar kaise tut parah????πŸ˜›
akhir baat kya hai, jara hume bhi to pata chalen!!!πŸ˜‰
it was totally outstanding romanctic superb os.πŸ˜ƒ
loved it.😊
love u.πŸ€—
waiting for next os😊


ye fari ka asar , fari ka asar- kya laga rakha hai??
maine kya kia??
sirf romantic update likhneko kaha
and u guys r responsible to spoil innocent fari..
itna romantic stuff likhoge tou wo bigregi na??
isme uska kya galti hai???


btw maha- kya ek aur romantic OS mil sakti hai???lol lol
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by -Faria-



ye fari ka asar , fari ka asar- kya laga rakha hai??
maine kya kia??
sirf romantic update likhneko kaha
and u guys r responsible to spoil innocent fari..
itna romantic stuff likhoge tou wo bigregi na??
isme uska kya galti hai???


btw maha- kya ek aur romantic OS mil sakti hai???lol lol
 
farii dosroo ko keh keh romantic os, ka aab itni innocent ban rahi hu... TongueTongue
hmay nai maloom tha k tum itni jaldi bugadnai lagoo gi...abb jab k ap bigad rahi hai tu phir hum aur romantic os kaisei likh saktai hai... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
 
but farii thanks a yar... πŸ€—πŸ€—
 
 
suja...;::  suja thanks a lot dear...
u know i was scared before posting this...
i thought k kahi yeh out of limit na hu...
but ais response aaeiga i didnt expect this... πŸ€— πŸ€—
 
thanks  alot dear...
Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry dear for the late comment
that was romantic OS beautiful
thanks for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago
  NOTE:
 
    THANK YOU SO MCH GUYZ FOR LIKIN MY OS...ITS REALLY MEAN A LOT TO ME...
 
HERE M UPDATING ''BUSINESS TRIP PART 2''AFTER A LONG TIME AND ON REQUEST OF MY DEAREST SUJA... AND ALSO ON REQUEST OF ANILA...
 
suja: this is ur paymet with loads of hugs... πŸ€— πŸ€—
 
hope u like it guyz...πŸ˜‰
 
 
with love
maha
Edited by drmaha - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
 
 
 
 
                                                               BUSINESS TRIP
 
 
PART2
 
M: mayank bhag iss se phley k tera number phir ajayei ''. Mayank ran towards their seat''. Meanwhile nupur follow him''.

N: I wont spare u'''. how dare u to laugh at me''.. lol''.

This is all going on until they both get to their respective destinations at airport...

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Both were waiting for their cars at airport and trying to ignore eachother''..

N: by god how tiring it was'. Moving her hands in air to get freshen air.

M: in a low tone '.kitna natak kerti hai yeh pura time rest kerti rahi hai meray shoulders pai..   mean while massaging his shoulders''aur aab daikhoo... by god how tiring it was'' (copied her) πŸ˜†

N: kia kaha tumnai? Glared.

M: kch nai tum se  kch nai kha'' kch ziyada hi kaan bajh rahay hai tumharay''' annoyed..

N: oh hello'. Aisei hi nai meray kaan bajhtai'aur tum hotai meanwhile cars arrived..

M: thank u bhagwaan u saved me'.nai tu aaj mera raam raam satya hujata''' πŸ˜‰

N: tum nai phir kch kaha''. 😑

M: maine kaha ayei bhagwan iss bala se mjhey bachana'' saying this he  ran into the car'.. bhaya pls. chaloo jaldi iss se pehlai k ye chezz hmarai pechay lag jayei aur agar yeh cheez chipik gayei na tu koi bhi jadoo nai chalay ga''.. πŸ€£πŸ€£ ''.

driver: sahab aap aisei cheezo ko cheertai hi q hu? 🀣
 
M: aray bhaiya maine nai cheera khud hi peechay paar gayei aab bhagoo...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
N: her eyes were just abt to poped out''' samjhta kia hai apnay aap ko iss ko tu mai choroo gi nai ek baar meray samnay ajayei''' she was continuously abusing him whn some one interrupted her'
 

Driver: madam agar apnai hawa se baatai ker lei hu tu hum chalay'''.

N: chup chap kharay raho'' aur tumhay kis nai mai hawa se baatai ker rahi hu''.. furiousy said.

Jab meri marzi hugi tab chalay gai''..aayai samjh'😲.. haa tu mai kaha thei yaad aaya yeh uss ko tu mai   (continue with  her blabbering)'''.

Driver: ayei bhagwaan yeh kis se milwadia madam hai ya koi bala''😲

N: kia kaha tumnai''?? Tumhari itni himmat k tum mjhey  mean while her sentence was  incompleted by the interruption of driver'..

D: nai nai kch nai ''.hum tu kehrahai hai k sab waha apka wait ker rahay hai pls chalay '''

N: haa tu chaloo '..kab se yaha kharay time waste ker rahay hu''.. mai tu kab se ready hu''.

D: his mouth was left open'.. tooba tooba itni jhooti bala matlab itni jhooti aurat maine nai daikhii''. πŸ˜†

Both stayed at the same hotel but haven't come across each other yet''..       

Late in the evening:

Phone rings

N: hello.

Receptionest: mam ur meeting is fixed tomorrow morning at 10 in conference room on 15th floor. Pls. be there on time.

N: wht did u say 15th floor? Have u gone mad? fearful tone '. Aasman pai meeting rakhnai ko kis nai kaha tha ground floor pai ya 2nd floor pai nai husakti thei meeting''. Furiously said

R: sorry mam we cant do any thg abt it as top floors are always been arranged for the meetings.

N: ok ok' i'll be there on time'..

R: thank you mam' tc'

N: by god nupur tu kaise jayei gi 15th floor tujhey tu height phobia hai na'.. crying like face'.. aur aab business trip pai bada shok tha business trips attend kerni ka'..aab bhugtoo''. Sad''

Mayank was busy in makin his presentation when he was also informed by the receptionist for the meeting''.

M: how exciting na. 15th floor wow'.. kia beautiful view huga'.cant wait to see'. Mayank terai tu mazey aagayei ''. He was so excited abt the meeting actually abt the view which soon he would going to be enjoy.

Whereas on other hand nupur was damn scared abt the meeting'..

Next morning nupur woke early and get ready at 9 and was roaming around in her room to find out solution'

N: nupur agar tu stairs se ja phir tu koi pblm nai hai but 15 floor tera keema (minced) ban jayei ga. Bad idea.kch aur soch'. If I say tht I am not feeling well then ..nupur tu pagal hugayei hai itni dur aayei hai business trip pai aab kia loss karwayei gii''

Uff ayei bhagwaan pls help me'' pls pls'.. closed her eyes and move towards lift pressed the button after a min glass door opens she entered in to the glass door  whn she saw the height of building she shouts and came out of the lift'πŸ˜†πŸ˜²

N: by god mai nai jarahi'.shukar hai ayei bhagwaan tu nai bacha liya'.mean while mayank came..

M: tum yaha? Surprised'

N: tum yaha bhi aagyei mera peecha kertai hui.. shame on u mr. ek ladki ko iss trah se follow kerna is bad manners''..mai tumhri complain karoo gi''😑

M: ohh hello miss'. Mai koi tumhai follow nai ker raha aur mera taste itna kharab nai hai k mai tumhay follow karoo'..

N: wht do u mean by taste? Furious '. Mai tumhay her words interrupted by sum 1..

Receptionist: sir everyone is waiting for both of u .meeing is just abt to start. Pls proceed towards that floor'..

M: ok .thank u'.

N: puzzled' tu tum iss meeting k liyei''.

M: jii madam mai iss meeting k liyei aya hu ap chayaei tu apnai dil ki satisfaction k liyei samjh saktei hai that I was following u''.  annoyed.

N: m sorry '.. I thought''.cut in between her lines ''

M: aab chalay we r getting late''..

N:I wont go''

M: y' pls yeh jagda baad mai kerna lets go''.. he pressed the button''

N: I said I wont go''. I m having an affliction of height phobia'.scared'

M: laugh out louder'' ohh tu miss bala ko height phobia hai''

N: ohh hello how dare u call me''.. he immediately grab her hand and move inside the glass door and closed it''

Nupur closed her eyes and hide herself in maynak chest'mayank puzzled at her sudden reaction and un intentionally he covered her by placing his arms around her''

M: relax miss nupur'kch nai huga''

N: shut up u moron.. sab tumhari wajah se hua hai '. Q tum lai k aayei hu mjhey' agar kch hugaya mjhey'. Ayei bhagwaan abhi maine deikha hi kia hai iss dunya mai'' aabhi meri age hi kia hai'

M: 30 yrs'.. suppressed his smile''.🀣

N: furiously move aside '. Kia kaha 30 yrs'.. khud tu jaisey new born baby huna'.. nanhe kid'. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

M: oh hello miss tumhari tarah mai apni age nai chupata'' vo alag baat hai k mai young lagta hu ladkiyoo ko aur ladkiyaa mjhpai fida hai''.. proudly said'.

N: oh ho ho ho ho'.. ladkiyaa fida hai'' un bechari ladkiyoo ko kia maloom k vo kis changeez khan k zamanay k ladkai pai fida hurahai hai'' lol

M: hmmm'. I can feel Someone jealousy'' placed his finger on his nose''

N: and I can feel that sum1 is stinking jab hi tu puri bottle perfume main naha k aaya hai''' placed her finger as well on her nose'''

M: really miss bala'' jab hi tum merai itnai kareeb aayei thei'.. πŸ˜›'..

N: mjhey koi shok nai hai umharai kareeb aanay ka vo tu mai''. And glass door opens''.

M: here we are on 15th floor''.. came out of the lift and smile

N: hum puhanch gayei'. Wow'.. mjhey pata hi nai chala''. Joyful

M: yahi tu magic hai mr mayank Sharma ka k kaam bhi hugay aaur pata bhi nai chala '.. winked and left from there'..

N: means'.. after registering his words she smiled ohh that's mean he has done intentionally wht ever he did in lift'. So that I don't feel scared''smile and left for the meeting''

After the meeting both came out of the room'

M: nupur if u don't mind would u like to join for a coffee'

N: sure'.smile

Mayan ordered the coffee and was looking around the view'..

N: mayank thanks'..

M: for what?

N: lift mai jot um nai kia''

M: ohh vo'. My pleasure' waisy bhi mai tu iss tarah k ahsan kerta rehta hu'..

N: in a low tone'.. haa haa bada aaya changeez khan'.

M: changeez khan nai madam shah rukh khan kaho'.. lol'

N: oyyei mr. khabardar agar khud ko shahrukh khan se compare kia tu''. Kaha mera shah rukh ( dreaming abt him) aur kaha tum changeez khan'.. aei bhagwaan yeh sunai k pehlay merai kaan band q nai hugayei'' placed her hands on ears and pretending to be sad like misery'..

M: oh god'. Ek baat batao tum kia bachpan se hi unique nautanki piece hu'. Suspiciously asked..

N: aur tum batao tum kia bachpan se hi saroo, akroo, ghamandi hu''. Glared'..

M: wow thanks for giving me such a beautiful nicks''. I'll be grateful to u always'..

N: thank u thank u'.mention not''.

Both looked at eachother and burst out louder''.

M: did u notice?

N: wht?

M: hum jab se milay hai bacho ki tarah larh rahay hai'..

N: apani baat karoo mai tu bachoo ki tarah nai larhtei mai tu badoo ki tarah larhtei hu''. Lol''.

M: uff nupur tumhara kch nai  husakta hai''. U r helpless'' sad

N: I know tell me somthg which I don't know''. swollen with pride

M: aab chalay sham ki flight hai''

N: haa haa tu maine kab manah kia hai''. Tum nai hu mjhey baatoo mai laga rakha tha'' mai bechari masoom , mai kab itna boltei hu'' tum nai kab se meray kaan khayei hui hai'' aab deikho na''. she was continuously blabbering and blabbering and blabbering''.

M: myank tu gaya aaj'. Yeh business trip nai teri life ka horrible trip tha''. Kitna bolti  hai'. Ayei bhagwaan yeh kia cheez hai jo bhi hai I like it kia kehti hu maa ek moka tu daina chayei'..'' and lauged louder''. πŸ˜‰

N: y u r laughing.?? Ek min tum mjhpai hans rahay hu '' tum harai itni himmat'.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†'.. and he continuously looking at her as he got his reward of business trip...

hope u like it guyz...
pardon errors...πŸ˜‰
Edited by drmaha - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
me first πŸ₯³

edited


sorry for editing late.

n u know na why i m late.

now coming to this update.😊

it was totally hilarious update.πŸ˜†

loved it totally.πŸ˜ƒ

mayur convo outside of airport was hilarios.🀣

poor mayank ... aur nupur poora flight sone k baad bhi tired feel kar rahi hai πŸ€£

kuch nahi ho sakta inn dono ka🀣

i like that 'bala'... he was just ran for his life🀣



i like driver's sense of humor 🀣 ... he was no less then mayankπŸ˜‰

on the other hand nupur's driver pata nahi kaise jhooti bala k sath phas gaya🀣

poor driver ... usse kon bachayega nupur nam ki jhooti bala se🀣

ohho ...to miss bala ko hight phobia hai.😲

i loved the way mayank diverted her mind in lift.πŸ˜ƒ

par ye kya, nupur ki age 30 years...aur mayank new born baby...nanhe kid ...agar inn dono ki shadi hui to age difference kafi jaida nahi ho jayega naπŸ˜•πŸ€£

changeez khan ... oops sorry, changeez khan nahi, shahrukh khan😳🀣

love u Maha ... u r just awesome in humor ... love uπŸ€—

loved their cute fighting ...it was too much enjoyment for me.⭐️

awww...i loved the line when mayank said, maa ko ek chance milna chaiye.😳

i just looking forward to it.πŸ˜ƒ

plzzz😳

i want its continuation πŸ˜³

plzzz    na math karna😳

waiting for next part.πŸ˜ƒ

continue soonπŸ˜ƒ

thanks for the pm.πŸ˜ƒ


ps : Thanks for my paycheck ...par abhi 2 installment baki haiπŸ˜›




Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
YA ALLAH...
sukar hain...😳
akhir mera intezaar pura ho hi gaya...😳
By God...kabse baithe the hum aas lagaya akhir humey ap mil hi gaye...
wah kya line likha hain maine...heheheπŸ˜†
thank u MAHA Api...
love u lodsss...πŸ€—
hayyy...i loved it.
i loved it...😳
i loved it lodsss...
dats again a superb hillarious part...
dat "BALA" n "CHANGEEZ KHAN" was tooo hiillarious...🀣🀣🀣
i sooo adore dis "MAYUR"😳
dey r adorable...😳
u know wht API...
m gonna b mad coz now m feeling dat i want another part of dis OS πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
i told u na ke i sooo wish it was as SS or FF hayyy...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜
ab ismein meri koi galti nhi ok!!!!!!!πŸ˜›
jab bhi ek part parhti hoon phir agar dusri part parhne ka maan kare toh main kya karu sab apki galti hain...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
ab yeha pyar nhi hua agar pyaar hoon jata toh main shayad aur demand nhi karti ab kya karein...😳
plzzz consider my choti si dil ki pyari si "KHWAHISH"πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
love u API lodsss...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
Edited by 18anila1 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Loved their fights πŸ˜†
Thank you!
Posted: 12 years ago
totally hilarious..i soo soo soo loved it...πŸ˜†

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