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Destiny's Play-Pg 118,128,136, 144 (26/2) (Page 103)

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged
lovely update
continue soon

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Awe geet is getting used to living in the chawl and making most of her time and awe poor geet csn't handle the way maan sometimes speaks to her but good to know he realises that he may have been too harsh and apologises so sweet and awe lokin at each other eye to eye and eating how sweet anyways another great update and can't wait to read more Smile
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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Opti, I am also amazed at how much pain she can endure. 

What a mixture of opposites for siblings. Arjun is always inflicting pain and Geet is always enduring pain. 

I am falling in love with Maan and Geet all over again reading your updates. This phase of them trying to acknowledge each other's presence, making an effort to understand each other and beginning to care for each other is so cute. 

I know it is important for you to develop the parallely track as well with the other newly wed couple, but please give us enough Maneet in each update. 

The story is progressing beautifully and I cannot wait to read more. Day Dreaming


Edited by Soapoperasrfun - 25 February 2011 at 6:51am
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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Hav u lyk written this ff already n just posting d parts now, given d high frequency of ur updates . Btw i luv more n more updates. Maan being rude reminds me of early geet day. Lets see how long it takes 4 him to fall 4 her n more importantly admit it:-)
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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
superb update....
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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
finally maan is being a bit understanding..continue soon......
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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 7:08am | IP Logged
awesome part. loved it.
 some time s rude but in heart maan is golden heart.
 their relationship is progressing.
update soon.
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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Me totaly in love again with ur FF opti..poor Geet i think she has got hurt twice till now from when she reached the chawl... oh Man this girl really has patience...for not whimpering when some one stamps on ur leg...

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