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Drabbles- AR No.57pg50 09/09 (Page 23)

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hannah.

Originally posted by ScatteredCastle

so IF officially hates me. Twice, today i've been gifted this 'Invalid worlds' message. honest, i typed a good two-essayed comment. ;( 

Grr. I'm gonna type another one cause you sure as hell deserve it, but for now - i simply love the fact that there are songs we can listen to and get inspired. i love you and everything else on this goddamned thread. xD

I MISS YOUUU!!! Pshh I hate exams! After they are over we should have a nice catch-up <3 LY Xo

that we should sweety! I MISSS YOU TOOO, THREE FOUR. Big smile

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Shattered

The murmurs had finally died down after three painfully stretched months, that was something. Maybe after another three her parents smothering would too.

She'd always lived a fairly silent life, she didn't deem it necessary to talk to random people to play part in a generic conversation, wasting niceties on people she wasn't particularly fond of, or people she wasn't going to meet again. Hence, she kept quiet, not getting to know people was easy, no emotion meant no attachment, no attachment meant no pain, no pain meant no time spent in vain no waste in gain. So she liked silence, silence was a comfortable companion, that was until he walked through those glass doors with his charismatic nature and an air of freedom. He was the first to teach her to live, her parents taught her everything else but he taught her truly how to live. To live, to love, to laugh. He taught her the meaning of life. Then why did he have to be the end of her beginning.

So she didn't cry. Because if she did her heart would finally break and if it completely broke then she wouldn't be able to pick up the pieces and piece herself back together. She's lost who she is, she doesn't understand why her heart is so broken only the lifeless words carry on. All she knows is the the ends beginning.

She wants him to come back to take her back to the start, to her take her home back to her heart because only then will the silence break. So she lives, breathes silence because only then will she be able to wake to another day.


It's all very ambiguous, but it's a drabble about death and there is lyrical usage through the piece.

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Oh and it is deliberately supposed to change tenses. It was intentionally written this way.

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
sorry third box for today...
I won't mind if you drop in a couple of song suggestions cos I'm running low on songs. All the ones on my iPOD are all emosh and depressing cos that's the kinda shiz I listen to and no I am not emo, I just like depressing music :)
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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
I love your drabbles Hannah. Period. Oh, and I'll reply to your PM soon, on through my phone at the mo! <3

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
That was beautifully written Hannah :| and it made me tear up :( AHH I need to suggest some happy songs if I can :P 

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 12:58am | IP Logged
That was very well penned, Hannah. I loved it. and oh, you should actually try some happy ones. :P er, i wanted to suggest it to you from a long time now,Waiting for the end by Linkin Park. It is a sad one though, but i would love to read your version of it. Toodles. :) 

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Hannah! Loving the drabbles <3 I loved the latest one, it was beautifully sad! :|

Song suggestions? I'll drop in when I can think of something :D

xoxo
Aanya

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