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FF Dostana || NOTE pg 64|| - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago
hei pooja,
aww..shaan is killing khanak..poor girl getting dilemma even in choosing the scrub..but loved it when she took the strawberry..very naughty shaan..praising himself for his planning..n loved the way zia said sorry for eavesdropping..that was so sweet..flirting shaan is too hot to to handle..but v love it..😳
😳😳 hope we get some sizzling updates.will u make us wait for weeks for next update?do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hahahahaha...

Shaan is one evil meanie !!
 
Poor Khanak........she is abso-freaking-lutely frustrated !!
 
Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 13 years ago
PD.....log uhi nehi kehte..sangat ka rangat....2 hottt my dear...and thanks 4 this treat...lmao..i m going crazy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol pd finger licking good..................................it was good yaar ...........awsomely hottttttttttt i love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
What was all that?

How cruel of him to do this to her? But I loved all the scenes in both part ...
😉 Tashu and Khanak discussing these things was too cute.

Shaan, Zia and Rohan are fantastic (devils alike) !!!!!! 👏😈

Haaye ... last romantic part was awesome dear!!!
😳
Shaan is too good at all this, isnt he?

Keep going madam, when will she know and when will he admit.... pls update soon.

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 13 years ago
LMAO. Alright, I have to comment.

Shaan killed it. *giggling*

"There was no peanut buttter."
That line is EPIC.

Pooja, amazing. Obviously.
I could sit here and analyse everything, but the only thing that will be repeated is how awesome your story is and how awesome your writing is, and how awesome you are. :)

This is the only story that I keep up with - I just love it.

<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pooja both parts were amazing, just sizzling hot, romantic along with hilarious!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Only, Only, ..again, ONLY if Pooja's FF could be portrayed on TV! God, I think I will be a couch potato 24x7. AMAZING, Fantastic, Mind-blowing, Sizzling Hot, Romantic, Naughty, Funny, ..etc. everything is this update. Can't even describe the feeling. I may be thinking naughty or inappropriate for some of the viewers, but I so WISH they would show kisses on TV :/ Anyways, loved loved lovvved the update. You are the best Fan Fiction writer Pooja. Just 'la la land" amazing. :D can't wait till the next one, but take your time and come out with more Delicious delicacies ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Pooja..............🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

read part 2 now..................

it was hot...................😉

amazing update as always..................👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

khanak & tashu's convo................. mind blowing......................😆

shan making her to loose her senses.................wonderfully described 

khanak can't even buy the scrub fisrt took sandalwood & then came back & took strawberry.............

awesome............

continue soon........................

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thanks 4 the PM

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Posted: 13 years ago
PD !!!!!
Whats to be embarrassed in this ???????????????
He just licked her small Finger .....  Thats IT !!!  Hahahahahaha !!!!
 
Great update !!!!
Loved both parts ... Liking Zia and Rohan a lot .... Awwww the underlying friendship .... Very Nice !!!!!!
 
How long is Shaan gonnnnaa keeeep doing this ??????
I want him to dooo moreeeeeeeeee ...
And ofcourse she toooo ....  Responding !!!!
 

Your storytelling is quite gripping ... Love the way you pen down the casual dialogues !!!!
Great Work ... Poooooo !!!
Muaaaah ..Update sooon !!!!!