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Dark Temptations [My OS Gallery]: Breathe : Pg 11 (Page 16)

--Ruchi-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 May 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Its a beautiful piece of writing Mahek...feeling the words you have written.Song is very nice.

perkilicious IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 9:15am | IP Logged
this is the first os of urs i read..n t title attracted me towards it :) love the song!
anyways the os was totally awesome :)
dumas IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
emotional os well written loved how you describe her feeling awesome thanks for the pm keep up the good work

Edited by dumas - 29 November 2012 at 6:58am
Monstuholic4evr IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
miss your writings :(
Inkpen4877 Goldie

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Very very well written!
KaSh-Maneet-Fan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Hiii beautiful os
Loved it
U r an talented writer
Plz do write more
Thanks 4 da pm
Humayra IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Fabulous os.. Loved it to the core..
The os define the true feelings of the song.. The songs words and you os's words complement each other..
Each and every word of your words touched my heart..
Please do write more os(s) and thanks for sending me the pm..
Ziva01 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 23458

Posted: 30 November 2012 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Awesome OS Mahi ...love it ...thxs for the pm  

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