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Dark Temptations [My OS Gallery]: Breathe : Pg 11 (Page 14)

adi_gupta IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 December 2011 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
I played my music player because songs are the best medicines for the pain.
mahak this line is true and every time i feel that there is no body for me to help me i do the same
really touching os and the song i love it
the way you describe all this i mean this is naturally happen but we can't describe it in that way how you describe it...
lovely song and lovely world.

But no matter what, I had to learn. Learn to breathe… without him. I know I have hurt him immensely and I am sorry for hurting him, but this is the only way I can save my heart from breaking into pieces. I know I am being utterly selfish. I can't breathe without him, but I know… I have to.
actually i want to write many things  but i don't have words
lovely os
sorry for the delay

anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
wooowww mahak...

touched heart simply yaar...

beautiful n awsum...

amazing...loved it...

thnx for the pm...
daniella05 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
beautiful os!!
_SilverLining_ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Awesomeee ONE SHOT Mahak... love d song, love Taylor swift, loved ur OS!!!!! Smile 
I love all of Taylor's songs because they all tell a story and portray different aspects of love... not that all have sad endings, many end happily as well... dis song is one of my fav and dis portrays d pain of separation in very very touching way...
BUT I HAVE TO Broken Heart
binudamania Senior Member

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
amazingly potrayed every emotion
Monstuholic4evr IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Mahak...

Originally posted by nandinii_goyal


I am hoping for you to leave a review for me, if possible :)

- Mahi

I have edited my post :)
dynamic_doll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 15163

Posted: 18 December 2011 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
nice OS Mahak!
thanx for the pm Smile

Edited by Favouriteofall - 18 December 2011 at 12:36pm
rose.three IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 8:18am | IP Logged
sry 4r late reply dear... plz dont mind 
was totally busy :(

anywayz awesome os...
beautifully written...
loved it...

do pm me wen ever derz a new updt...

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