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Dark Temptations [My OS Gallery]: Breathe : Pg 11 (Page 12)

MysticRiver IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 12:09am | IP Logged
nice...Clap
KaSh-Maneet-Fan IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Hiii
Awesome os
Loved it
Heart touching
Loved da song
Beautiful
Thanks 4 da pm
..Ashi.. Goldie
..Ashi..
..Ashi..

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
that was a BEAUTIFUL piece of work Mahak

the essence of the OS ...u did full justice to it

tehzeeb25 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 3:17am | IP Logged
amazing oS yaar ...faab
Thanx for pm
Ameres IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged
It was BEAUTIFUL!! Clap
I could relate to the feelings of loving someone and knowing they would never feel the same way. It really hurts. You described it beautifully! :)
monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Awesome OS...
--ANGEL-- IF-Dazzler
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--ANGEL--

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
hey mahak...
 
awesome os again...u write nothing but the best...loved the os...i could literally feel the pain...love is so complicated...and it leads to pain...u described it so well...tears were in my eyes while reading it...will wait for more of ur os...read ur reply to my comment...thanks 4 taking so much time...
 
with love
angel
 
p.s - a definte yes to eye lock part 2
lilangel_soumya IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 7:07am | IP Logged
hey mahak,

it was a beautiful OS
i felt as if there was more to it that was not said
for me this was sort of like a prologue to a whole new story
at the end of this OS the one thing that came to my mind was why is love so complicated? why cant it be simple? i loved the way you expressed all the emotions
great writing! Smile
can't wait to read more

love soumya

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