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Dark Temptations [My OS Gallery]: Breathe : Pg 11 (Page 12)

KaSh-Maneet-Fan IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 December 2009
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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Awesome os
Loved it
Heart touching
Loved da song
Thanks 4 da pm

..Ashi.. Goldie

Joined: 28 March 2009
Posts: 1877

Posted: 10 December 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
that was a BEAUTIFUL piece of work Mahak

the essence of the OS ...u did full justice to it

tehzeeb25 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 9114

Posted: 10 December 2011 at 3:17am | IP Logged
amazing oS yaar ...faab
Thanx for pm
Ameres IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 March 2008
Posts: 21656

Posted: 10 December 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged
It was BEAUTIFUL!! Clap
I could relate to the feelings of loving someone and knowing they would never feel the same way. It really hurts. You described it beautifully! :)
monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Awesome OS...
--ANGEL-- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 01 January 2011
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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
hey mahak...
awesome os again...u write nothing but the best...loved the os...i could literally feel the pain...love is so complicated...and it leads to pain...u described it so well...tears were in my eyes while reading it...will wait for more of ur os...read ur reply to my comment...thanks 4 taking so much time...
with love
p.s - a definte yes to eye lock part 2
lilangel_soumya IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2639

Posted: 10 December 2011 at 7:07am | IP Logged
hey mahak,

it was a beautiful OS
i felt as if there was more to it that was not said
for me this was sort of like a prologue to a whole new story
at the end of this OS the one thing that came to my mind was why is love so complicated? why cant it be simple? i loved the way you expressed all the emotions
great writing! Smile
can't wait to read more

love soumya
dbr_kmichi IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 July 2008
Posts: 3629

Posted: 10 December 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
hey mehak...
really beautifully written..
i like your style of writin

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