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Ameres

@Ameres

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 12 years ago

It was BEAUTIFUL!! 👏

I could relate to the feelings of loving someone and knowing they would never feel the same way. It really hurts. You described it beautifully! :)

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

hey mahak...

awesome os again...u write nothing but the best...loved the os...i could literally feel the pain...love is so complicated...and it leads to pain...u described it so well...tears were in my eyes while reading it...will wait for more of ur os...read ur reply to my comment...thanks 4 taking so much time...

with love

angel

p.s - a definte yes to eye lock part 2

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Soumya

@lilangel_soumya

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey mahak,

it was a beautiful OS

i felt as if there was more to it that was not said

for me this was sort of like a prologue to a whole new story

at the end of this OS the one thing that came to my mind was why is love so complicated? why cant it be simple? i loved the way you expressed all the emotions

great writing! 😊

can't wait to read more

love soumya

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372382

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

hey mehak...
really beautifully written..
i like your style of writin

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458562

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Posted: 12 years ago

woww mahiii outstanding OS seriously well written and the way u penned down touching emotions awesome 👏

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

AWESOME BLOSSOME!!!

really i just so blood loved it!!

whoa...tooo good!!

thanks a ton for the pm!

love

komal

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Rafa.LunaPotter

@Rafa.LunaPotter

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey! Another fellow TS Fan? How can I not do the honours with a hug? :P. This song is what keeps me awake at night, been my soul concrete for so many days! And the OS was apt! Great job! U and TS too! She's an angel! :D

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491644

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Posted: 12 years ago

this was beyond beautiful. I can't tell you how much I loved this piece of writing.<3 Do write more & thanks for the PM :)

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bhargavi

@gopi06

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful one mahak
thanks for the pm

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516247

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Posted: 12 years ago

very nice os with nice writing

thanks for the pm.

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