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Future Track: AnuMona's babies - Decision Time

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Here's a possible future track that might create some serious buzz...

Mona give's birth to twins, fraternal twins, a boy and a girl. Both families are ecstatic and love the fact that they are the first set of twins on either side of the family...the elders hope this will finally bridge the bitterness between the Gandhis and the Bedis.

But someone has a bee in their bonnet after all the hoopla dies down and Mona and twinsies come home from the hospital. Bharti is happy, but only for Anukalp, she feels that now he's a dad, he might be drawn even farther away from her due to the kids, whom he dotes over. He and Mona are on seventh heaven. And these two bi-cultural wonders...these two babies from different religions are just beautiful to behold.

Bejal (Daily News)
Arre wah, judva bacche! Yeh tou hamarey khandaan mein bhi nahi hua ab tak, kyu Bhabhi? Kya khilati ho apni Bahu ko? (Teasingly...)

Bharti
Hmmm...Prabhu ki kripa se hua hai, ham isaano ke haath mein nahi. (As in Mona get zero credit for lugging the twins around for 9 months.)

Ba
Ab sochne ki baat tou yeh hai Bharti, ke bache kiske dharm me palle badenge, duniya tou kaheygi ke bachon ka dharm, baap ka dharm hota hai. Yeh tou sab ki manyata hai. Hai na?

Bejal
Hain, lekin hamarey padosee kya yeh manenge? Woh tou Mona ko aisee patti padayenge, ke woh Anukalp ke kaan bhardegi,,,,bachon to Sikh dharm mein dalo. Chokra bada ho ke itni moti peeli pagdi pehnega, kada pehnega, daari mooch rakhega, jo hamey bilkul pasand nahin....aur chokri yahan wahan bhagegi By God, By God bol bol key bheja kha jaegi...Punjabi mein kya bolenge hamsey...kuch palle nahin padega...aur dono maas machhi kahenge aur akey tujhsey zorsey lipat jaenge Bharti...tab kya karogi? Mujhe tou mas ke barey mey soch ke hi ulti ati hai...ooof!

Sejal
Lekin, Bhaiya tou kehte hein ki bache abhi bahut chhote hein, yeh sab dharm chunna tou dur ki baat hai.

Hetal
Mona bhabhi kehti hein ki dono bache Gujarati sikhenge aur hamarey dharm mein badhe honge.

Bejal
Woh tou Anukalp to kush karne ke liye kehti, man mein tou kuch aur hi hai. Agar Anukalp Mona ki baaton mein agayaa, aur tera chokra hai tou kacche kaan ka, tou bas, gaye bache hamarey haath sey.

Sejal
Tou phir mey solution nikalti hoon, ham sab abhi kuch nahi karenge, jab dono badhe ho jaenge, tou apna man pasand dharm khudi hi chun lenge, akhir dharm ek bahut hi private maamla hai. Agar unko hamara dharm acha laga, tou woh Gujarati Vaishnav banjaenge, agar Sikh Punjabi dharm pasand agaya, tou....

Bejal
Sejal, pagal hogai hai kya? Yeh, baat bachon ke haathon mein kyu ho? Yeh baat ham badhe tey karenge...hamne duniya dekhi hey, yeh baal dhoop mein safed nahin kiye...

Sejal
Lekin aapke baal ko kaley hein Phui, aap dye jo lagati hein har do haftey washroom mein raat raat ko chupa kar...(giggling)

Ba
Bharti, dekhli nai nasal ki tedi soch, dharm bache tay karenge? Sejal, zara soch samajke baat kiya kar..tu kya apne bacho ko itni dheel degi?

Sejal
Hain! Kyun nahin? Agar meri shaadi kissi Gujarati ladke se nahi hui tou. Freedom of religion bahut important baat hai, Ba. Dharm dil ki baat hai, kitabo ki nahin.

Ba
Lo, kardiya na mera bheja garam is ladki ne subha subha? Tu bhi kya dharm sey bahar shaadi karegi, tere Bhaiya ki tarah?

Sejal
Woh tou depend karta hai mein kis ke saath pyar paungi...dekhungi, jo bhi dharm ho, sab dharmo ke ladko ko chance doongee, may the best man win! I'm a catch, after all. Kyu Hetal didi?

Hetal playfully punches her and smiles.

Bharti (in a serious tone)
Bache hamarey dharm mey daley jaenge. Bas. Yeh faisla ho chuka hai. Ab panditji ko kalhi bulakar dono ke naam rakhlete hein, woh Punjabi log kuch naam chunne ussey pehle ham dono bacho ko naam dedenge. Baat khatam. Gujarati naam, Gujarati dharm.

Bapuji walks in, who has been listening to everything.
Bharti, aisey nahin hota beti. Tum bhool rahi ho ki yeh dono phool sey bache Anukalp aur Mona ki amanat hein, ham apne vichar unpe nahin thop sakte. Maa baap tay karengey, ki bache Sikh honge ya tou phir hamarey dharm mey palengey.

Ba
Yeh kya baat hui? Yeh to pagalpan hai! Bache Gujarati Vaishnav hi honge! Is ghar mein dari mooch waley mard nahin ghoomenge!

Bapuji
Tu apni naak maat dala kar doosron ke maamlon mein, budiya! Barso se karti ai ho, aur mein barso sey yaad dilta aya hoon tujhe. Yeh kya laga rakha hai, dari mooch, dari mooch...mein bhi ek zamaney mein mooch rakhta tha...

Ba
Hain! Aur meiney moondvadi!

Bapuji
Zabardasti! Zabardasti moondvadi...meri marzi sey hamari jawani mey kya hota tha...woh tou ab meri umar hogai, is liye tu kabhi kabar mera adar karleti hai, khas karke koi dekh raha hoto...tu tou vaisi ki vaisi ho...har cheez mey zabardasti...lekin bachon ke saath mey aisa nahin honey doonga, kabhi nahi.

Bharti
Lekin Bapuji, aapki har iccha ka adar karte hue mein yeh kahungi, ki agar bache hamarey dharm mein jaenge, tou ham sab bachon sey kabhi dur nahin honge, dekhiye na, sab ko bachon sey abhi sey kitna lagav hogaya hai. Agar Punjabi Sikh dharm mein badhe hue, tou baar baar unke log hamarey bachon ko ghaseetkar hamarey ghar sey le jaenge, ki yeh rasam hai, woh rasam hai...yeh ham kaisey hone denge? Nahin, mein apki baat sey sehmat nahi hu.

Hetal
Ambaji, ladki ke liye Sheetal ya Geeta naam kaisa rahega?

Bejal
Aur ladke ke liye Dinesh ya Ramesh?

Sejal
Aur agar dono Punjabi Sikh dharm mey daley gaye, tou ladki ka naam Amarjyot, kyu ki Bhaiya ka naam A sey shuru hota hai, aur munni ka naam hoga Manjyot, kyun ki Mona bhabhi ka naam M sey shuru hota hai...(smiling)

Just then Mona's female family comes rushing in to announce that their astologer has already picked out names and they want Mona to take a look at the note...Anu is at work.

Vimmi (all excited and out of breath)
Mona kahan hai ji? Bahut zaroori baat karni hai!

Kalavati
Hain ji! Bachon ke naam dikhane hein! Inne pyarey naam chunne hein hai Panditji ne, seedhe Gurdwarey sey aye hein ham log...Mona! Mona!

Bharti
Arre! Nahin! Yeh kya tum log....Mona gehree neend so rahi hai, aap log baad mein ana, abhi aap ussey sone dijiye...kahan ja rahey hein?? Suniye tou! Rukiye! Arre!!!

They rush up shouting Mona's name and burst into her room...Mona is awake, lying and playing on the bed with the twins who are smiling and giggling....

Mona
Yeh naam tou badhe changey hein, lekin Anukalp ki Ambaji ne apne pandit ko bula neki baat ki hai, kal tak inke Gujarati naam bhi ajayenge...

Kalavati
Hai rabba! Bachon ke Gujarati naam hongey? Aji hamarey naamo mein kya kharabi hai?

Mona
Anukalp ko bhi dikhana hai, phir ham dono mil ke decide karenge...

Vimmi
Mona, puttar, baat bahut nazuk hai...kabhi na abhi bachon ko kissi ek dharm mey dalna hoga...tuney kuch socha hai?

Mona
Nahin, abhi tou bas, man karta hai ki inhe dekhti jau, dekhti jau, dekhti hi rahu...

Vimmi
Acha, puttar, tujhe feedings ke barey mein bata dete hein, yeh Ambaji ajaye ussey pehle...unhoney tou shayad baat bhi nahin ki hogi tujhsey...koi gal nahin, ham hein na? Mein meri bacchi ko sikhaungi, kitne saalon sey is din ki rah dekhi hai, meri bachi ab khud Ma bangai, hai Rabba, meri khushi ki tou koi hadh nahin, inko ko kissi ki nazar na lage...

They give her some tips on how to feed the babies, hold them during feedings, change their diapers, as well as how to tell when they're hungry, how often to feed them and how to burp them after feedings...etc. They brought diapers and baby powder, etc.. Mona gets a 101 on baby management from her mom, and she's extremely happy to learn this from her, it becomes a mom-daughter bonding session...Ambaji is left out of it, but she is quietly listening behind the door.

Ambaji mulls over the question in her mind...
Ab is musibat ka kya karna...bache hamarey dhram mey kaisey laungi, hey Prabhu, hamara saath dena, yeh dono pyarey phool galat dharm me na chaley jaen, hamarey sanskar, hamari paramparao sey mehroom na rah jaen...kya hoga pata nahin...

Vimmi thinks over as she watches her daughter happily interact with the twins...
Wahey Guru, in choti atmaon ko sambhal ke rakhna, kahin aisa na ho, ki inhey apne dharm mey daal ke yeh log vapas Rajkot chaley jaen hamesha ke liye, kissi baat pe naraz ho kar...Rabba, tere haaton mey mera sawaal rakhti hu, agey tu raasta dikhana...

More soon....hope you guys enjoyed this track, which is of course way into the future...but fun to think about, huh? (-:




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sunshine33 Senior Member
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 9:07am | IP Logged
oh no, i would love to read your FF, but I do not understand hindi. Too bad it's not all in english :(
 
but it seems to be quite interesting.

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
good archana.....but  anu & mona themselves kids to have kids....

you must have written to  show case the  dharma thing...nice ...
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Way into the future this is surely one track I would like to see take place. It creates conflict between the 2 families with Mona and Anukalp and the babies caught in the middle not to mention them as well.

It would be fun to know whether Anukalp will listen to his mother or to his wife if they happen to pick different names or religions for the babies. Great idea to have twins. Of course if they reach a stalemate the couple could make one a Gujarati and and one a Punjabi though I don't think that would make either family happy.

AF you've really given us something to think about... Great track idea.
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
very interesting ff
Archanafan Senior Member
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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 5:59am | IP Logged
This was a future track, meaning way into the future.
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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Thanks KF, you sure understood the gist of it....you got where I was going with this....

I always like reading your view of my writings, as you seem to "get" screenplay writing...



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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
This was my last post.

The baby issue won't come along for a while, but real scriptwriters go far into the future and keep ideas in mind for later use. Their minds are always scanning the horizon for possibilities.

This one above even has complete dialogues.

It won't be on the discussion table for a while, but the way Anukalp is raring to go, so to speak, it won't be long before Mona is pregnant.
(A hotel room? Seriously? She's your wife, not a h****r. Jeez. That's just icky-weird to any bride.)

So, watch for this track and its ideas to be included in the show.

Good luck and take care everyone! I'll try to be in touch when time permits.

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