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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
nice update....

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
loved it.....why is geet acting so weird.??...i hope maan doesnt misunderstand her...update soon

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
wow amazing updates.. finally they met.. continue soon n plzz add me onto ur pm list...

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
loved all the 3 updates 19 20 21.......................
well i thought when she was speaking to meera near her house abt maan i thought he wud hv heared it...............but it seems u hv diff plans....................
well finally they met and i think they wud hv sort of their diff by talking abt a lot of things.....................
waiting for the next updates

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
so finally they met, and having a heart to heart conversation..lovely

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged

Part 22

 

MAAN LOOKING AT GEET IN ANGRY DISBELIEF.

Maan:Geet,You really think that? Is that how much you understand me? I came here because I was worried about you.You just disappeared after our meeting that night.I thought I'd done something wrong so I came to find out.Ive been here since Tuesday and todays Friday.Ive been searching for you like mad.

Geet:Why? Why did u think it was because of you?

Maan: Well,after our conversation…

Geet: What? Maan,I had to sort some things out with myself.

Maan:Well youre coming back with me tomorrow.

Geet:No,im staying here for another week.

Maan:Fine,ill stay with you.

Geet:Why?

Maan: Because and that's that.

Geet:You cant boss me about.

Maan:Oh yes,I can.

GEET GETS UP TO LEAVE,MAAN HOLDS HER ARM AND PULLS HER DOWN.THEIR FACES ARE CLOSE.EYELOCK.GEET MOVES AWAY,MAAN PULLS HER CLOSER.

Maan:I wasn't finished yet,Geet.

Geet:But I was.

MEERA COMES.GEET AND MAAN MOVE AWAY.

Meera: Ermmm Hi.Who are you?

Maan:MSK.I talked to you on the phone yesterday whilst geet was out at 3am buying chips.

GEET BLUSHES

Maan:You know these kinds of cravings are normal…

GEET CONFUSED

Maan:…In Pregnancy.

Geet:Do I look pregnant to you? No,right? So? Idiot!!

Meera:Ok,stop fighting.So,geet this is your M-

GEET STOPS HER.

Meera:But-

GEET SIGNALS WITH EYES NO.

Maan:Im her what?

Meera:Ermm youre her….her…Her melon.

GEET SHOCKED.

GEET ST: WAIT TILL WE GET HOME,MEERA.IM GOING TO HIT U SO BAD.

Maan:What? Im her melon?

Geet:She means that all my friends,I give them nicknames of fruits.So I called you Melon.Sometimes Sweet,Sometimes bitter.You know,split personality.Ive got one for Meera aswell.Mango.I hate mangos you know…

MEERA ANGRY.

Maan: Do you like Melons?

Geet:Ermmm Meera lets go.

Meera:Geet,how rude!! Atleast answer him.Btw,Mr.MSK,Where are u staying?

Maan:Oh in a hotel.

Meera:Go now and pack your stuff and check out.Youre coming to stay with us.

Maan:Excuse me? No,its ok,ill stay there.How can i?

Meera:Oh,Don't worry,its no problem,We have spare rooms.And geets friends are like family to us,Right Geet?

Geet:Yes

SHE LOOKS AT MEERA IN ANGER

Meera:So,its settled.Youre coming to stay with us.Heres our address and we'll see you tonight.Make sure youre on time.Bye.

MAAN LEAVES.

MAAN ST:MAAN,WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY NO? WHAT WILL YOU DO STAYING THERE?

MAAN CONFUSED

END

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
maan n melon wow meera what thinking u have

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
awesome gal...u r on roll of updates today.........thanks dear

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