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MG FF Pyaar Ka woh pehla Ehsaas Link To Thrd 2 (Page 28)

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
yesssssssss both of them in same place now that is destiny i just hope they meet

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged

too good!!!

loved it maan saying to the pilot to drive fastROFL

now curious about geet's past plz reveal little bitEmbarrassed

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wow so many updates in 1 day i am loving it...............do u plan to update the next one too............
pl make them meet....................

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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dear lovley update hope they meet soon .............................................................................. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon next ..................hope u will update today ........................................................next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged

both parts were wonderful!!!!!

hope both meet

gr8 update!!!

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
omg...geet came to ny......bt happy that maan has come after her......i wanna no geets past which is troubling her...............continue soon

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

wow so many updates in 1 day i am loving it...............do u plan to update the next one too............
pl make them meet....................
It is nearly finishedSmile
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged

Part 15

G WALKING FROM 1 SIDE,M FROM ANOTHER.

G:Lets go into this shop.

M: No further down.Thats rubbish.

G: Thanks for dissing my choice.

M:Sorry! u know I love u really?

THEY LAUGH

SCENE CHANGE.M WALKING

M:G,where are u? Please let me find u.

HIS PHONE BLEEPS.HE READS THE TEXT AND IS LOOKING DOWN.G WALKS PAST HIM AT THAT MOMENT AND HE DOESN'T SEE HER.THE WIND STARTS BLOWING FAST.

G ST:WHY DID I FEEL AS IF M WAS HERE? NO,G,U'VE GONE MAD.WHY WOULD HE BE HERE? HE MUST BE IN INDIA IN COLLEGE.

M: G,are you coming?

G: Yes.

THEY GO INTO THE SHOP.

SCENE CHANGE.M WALKING OUTSIDE.HE PASSES THE SHOP G AND M ARE IN.

M:She would never go into a shop like this.Leave this one,I'll try the next one.

SCENE CHANGE.ITS 5 OCLOCK.G AND M IN A CAF.

G:That was so tiring.And I swear im never coming shopping with u again.U treat me like a doll.Try this,Try that.

M: But it was fun,Wasn't it?

G: Fun? Are u crazy?

M LOOKS HURT.

G:Im only joking.I had the best time ever.I actually enjoyed myself for once.

M ST:FINALLY I GOT A SMILE ON YOUR FACE,G.NOW I HAVE TO MAKE IT STAY THERE.

MAAN ENTERS THE CAF.

Maan ST:Urgghh!! That was a day wasted,not even 1 sign of her.And so much humiliation.I cant believe that assistant thought I was a paedophile when I was shouting her name in the changing rooms.Its good that I managed to make up a story about my missing cat,Geet and me coming to find her.Now I think I deserve a hot chocolate after that.

Maan: 1 hot chocolate please.

Assistant: Weve got a sale on.Coffee at half price.Would u like to try that?

Maan HAS A FLASHBACK OF HIS COFFEE DATE WITH G.

Maan:No thank you.Just Hot Chocolate.

HE TAKES IT AND LEAVES.HE SITS ON THE TABLE BEHIND G WITH HIS BACK TO HER.

G: Now im tired.Lets go home.

M: I want to know why  came here first.Please,G. I want to help u.

G:M, I need time.The wounds still aren't healed and it will just hurt me.Especially here.

M: Ok,but you'll have to tell me.

G: I know.Can anyone argue with u?

M: Actually,youre getting pretty good at it.

THEY BOTH LAUGH AND GEET TURNS TO LEAVE,PAST MAANS TABLE.

M: No,Geet.Not that way.Its quicker this way.

G:Oh,Ok.

Maan ST: GEET?

HE TURNS ROUND AND SEES A GIRL WEARING A LIGHT PINK DRESS LEAVING.

MAAN ST:NO,THAT CANT BE HER.IT WAS JUST A COINCIDENCE.I BEST LEAVE.HOPEFULLY,TOMORROW WILL BE BETTER.

HE LEAVES.

SCENE CHANGE.AT GEETS HOUSE.IN THEIR BEDROOM.

G:I should ring annie.Afterall,A promise is a promise.But if I break down?No,G, u have to be strong.

SHE DIALS THE NUMBER.

END

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