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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 12:48am | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinalshah

loved it has something in geet's past happened that she has become like this?
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhanu_rekhag

ITS AwESOME BUT I THINK STORY IS MOVING TOOOO FAST
I knowCry
So do iCry
What can i do to slow it down?
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Part 12

MAAN RINGS GEETS HOUSE.GEETS MUM ANSWERS.

Maan: Hello

Mum: Hello who is it?

Maan: Im geets friend.I needed to talk to her urgently and she not picking up phone so…

Mum: She cant pick up on a flight can she?

Maan: What? Shes not here?

Mum: No, shes gone to New york for a while to her cousins house.She needed to get away from here for a bit.

Maan: But why? I mean what happened?

Mum: That I don't know and I try not to interfere in her life too much.I want her to stand on her own feet.So when shes ready to tell me she will.But I do know that something happened last night due to which shes upset.

Maan: Could u tell me how long shes gone for? A phone number? Address?

Mum: I don't know,it could be weeks or months.When shes ready,shell come back. And I don't think shed want me to give out details of where she is so… no.

Maan: Please?

Mum: Im sorry.

SHE CUTS THE PHONE

Maan: Hello? Hel-? Damn! What do I do? I have to speak to her and shes not answering the phone.Ive only got one option left.

HE RINGS SOMEONE.

Maan: Hello? I want the first tickets to new york.

HE WALKS OFF

SCENE CHANGE.GEET GETS OFF HER PLANE.SHE LOOKS AROUND.

Geet: This is the best way.I'll have to stay away from india until ive got my feelings sorted out. But ill fulfil my side of the promise.I'll ask annie but on the phone not face to face. But I don't know why,even though were on different sides of the world,I cant stop thinking about him.Anyway,I best go.They'll be waiting for me.

SHE WALKS OFF,A GIRL RUNS UP TO HER AND HUGS HER.SHE IS CALLED PINKY AND IS GEETS 8 YEAR OLD COUSIN.

Pinky: Geet! Geet,u took so long!!!

Geet: Pinky,are you ok?

ANOTHER GIRL COMES BUT SHE IS 22 YEARS OLD,ALSO GEETS COUSIN,CALLED MEERA.

Meera: Pinky,let geet talk a bit.U just keep blabbering.Geet! I missed u so much.U just forgot us sfter moving to india 4 years ago.Didnt you miss New york and us at all?

Geet: I did but u know I don't want to keep too many relations with this city.Especially after….

MEERA GOES QUIET AND LOOKS GUILTY.

Meera: Anyway,lets go home.Everyones waiting for u.

Geet: Meera,u haven't done anything special,have u? You know im not into all that.I just want to go home,unpack and rest.

Meera: Don't worry.We've just ordered food,Our favourite Remember?

SHE LAUGHS WAITING FOR GEET TO LAUGH ASWELL BUT SHE DOESN'T.

MEERA ST: GEET,SOMETHINGS HAPPENED.AND YOU'LL HAVE TO TELL ME.BUT NOT HERE,AT HOME.

Meera: Come.

THEY LEAVE.

SCENE CHANGE.MAAN ON A PLANE.

MAAN ST: Geet,im coming.And I'll find u wherever u are.But New York is a big city,how? But I have to talk to u.I have to know whats wrong with you.For the sake of our friendship,atleast.

SCREEN SPLITS IN HALF,MAAN ON PLANE AND GEET IN CAR.

END

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged

YAHOOOOOOOOOOOO ME FIEST LOVED IT YAAR.................

 
YES AS THEY R TRYING TO UNDERSTAND THEIR FEELING  HOPE EVERY THING WILL BE CLEARED AND THEIR STORY WILL BEGIN WITH LOVE Clap

 

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by maansee - 24 February 2011 at 5:00am

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged

gr8 update!!!!

loved it..........waiting for Maaneet meeting in NY!!!

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
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