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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the convo...can u write the other part a bit longer....anyways i loved it....update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome....update fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank You to everyone😊
I cant believe i've got over 100 comments in just 3 days😊
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesomeee update
loved it
continue soon plz
Thank u

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nice update.. maneet n frndship.. hmm sounds cool.. continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loveee the part!!!
They r friends now!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 8

Geet walks into college.Shes looking around.

GEET ST:Wheres Maan? He said he'd meet me in the morning?

(SHE LOOKS AROUND,ANNIE COMES)

Annie: Who are you looking for,Geet?

Geet?:No-one,who would I look for?

Annie: Only you know that.

(MAAN COMES)

Maan: I'll tell you.She was looking for me,right geet?

Geet: N'No

Maan: Don't lie.Youre not good at it.

Geet: Oh, so now you'll tell me what im good at? I thought youd changed but no.

Maan: Chill,im only advising u.

Geet: Well I don't need it.

Maan: But that's what friends do.

Annie: Youre friends now?

Maan: Yes, we agreed this when we went out for coffee last night.

Geet: Oh yes,Annie.Whilst we were drinking coffee.You know he took me out for coffee but didn't buy me any.Ask why?

Annie: Why

Geet:Bcos MSK doesn't like coffee and that was just an excuse to get me to go out with him.

Annie: Now that's wrong Maan.If  Youd had done that to me, I wouldn't have talked to you.

Maan: Well,It looks like my charms worked on Geet.

Geet: No.Now come or we'll be late.

SCENE CHANGE.GEET AND MAAN WALK INTO CHEMISTRY.THEY BOTH TAKE THEIR PLACES NEXT TO EACH OTHER.

Geet: So,should I ask you something?

Maan: Ask

Geet: Last week,why were you so un-friendly towards me?

Maan: That' I thought that you were like the other girls.You were impressesd by my looks and fell on purpose so u could spend a few moments in my arms.

Geet: Are all the other girls like this?

Maan: Yes apart from you and Annie.

Geet: No,just apart from me.Annie also likes you but she hides it well.

Maan: Really?

Geet: Yes, she dies over you.All the time its Maan this,Maan that.Its so annoying.

Maan: Now can I ask u something?

Geet: Well since I asked you I suppose u can ask me.But only one question.

(MAAN STARES INTO GEETS EYES,GEET FEELS UNCOMFORTABLE)

GEET ST: Oh god,what have I agreed to? It looks like hes going to ask a hard question to answer.

Maan: Why aren't u like the other girls? Don't you feel attracted to me? Even a little bit? I mean,I don't  have any problem with u not, but I was just curious.Afterall, whats the difference in you and other girls?

(GEET BLUSHING,SHE LOOKS DOWN)

Maan: Why aren't u looking at me. Remember were friends.You have to tell me the truth.

Geet: That'

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Part 9
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
not fair yu stop
at best part
awesome update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn