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Untitled FF - MayUr - Part 6 Pg.34 (16.07) Updated (Page 12)

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 6:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -SupriyaluvsMN-

hey Laiba..
Congos 4 ur new ff..Party
i'm sorry .. i cudnt read ur updates earlier...Ouch
nups ws forcefully married 2 mayu..
hmm... interesting...Embarrassed
luvd it...
 
Thanks... Embarrassed
 
No problem, read when u can...
Well she got married to someone... Forcefully can't be the exact word but something like it...
 
I'm glad u liked it... Big smile
 
Originally posted by -SupriyaluvsMN-

oh god... part 2 made me more confused...ConfusedLOL
who's d man.. Nups luvd & whom she's married 2?Confused
Laiba ji... jaldi update kejiye..
i just cant wait 4 mystery 2 unfold..LOL
 
 
 
Confusion is my forte.. LOL
There 2 men... thats what i can say....
Okay Supriya Jee I will soon... LOLTongue
It will soon, i don't want this ff to be too dragged maybe 10-12 parts only...depends on the pace...
 
-Laiba
 

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
Hi Laiba congorats ur fist FF
i just fond ur FF 2night
n it's interesting
part 1 was amazing
n part 2 olso was lovely
n nups n her man were romantic the dance n everything
but bit confussing Confused
plzz add me ur pm list i wouldlove to read more
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RUBA-SIDDIQUI

awesome part
liked it
continue soon
thnx 4 thnx
 
Thanks... I'm glad u liked it...Embarrassed
I will cont. soon...
 
Originally posted by mahakmev

amazing
 
Thanks...Embarrassed
 
Originally posted by Alisha-MJHT

Hi Laiba
I just read the first 2 parts - awesome FF!!
Can't wait to read more
Please continue soon and please add me to your pm list
 
Thank you... I'm glad u like it.. Embarrassed
I will add u, and update soon...
 
-Laiba
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Favouriteofall

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!
 
I will update soon, next week or sooner... Embarrassed
 
Originally posted by -Sajjal-

reserved
 
Will be waiting for ur comment... Embarrassed
 
-Laiba
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 7:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AmyArTiMayUr

Okay im sooo sorry for the late reply...but at least im not reserving and then not unreserving alsoLOLLOL so just to remind you, you have to edit your reserves on my writingLOLLOL

The update....wow....it was sooo beautifully described...esp the flashback seemed so beautifulBig smileBig smile

Its confusing considering the men are more or less namelessLOLLOL

I am assuming she loved someone else and then was forced to marry Mayank or something???ConfusedConfused

Whatever...its real interesting so plz plz plz update soonBig smileBig smile
 
*Looks away* *Trying to Ignore the first line* LOL
 
It's okay... well for me it is.... LOL No, i did actually read the first part and i edited my comment right? Confused
 
If not then i'll do it either tomorrow (today) or on sunday pakka...
 
The past is supoosed to be sweet and romantic... Embarrassed
LOL Don't worry they will get names soon....Tongue
 
what is with everyone guessing the same is it so predictable... Ouch If so i'm sorry to say it's nothing like that, well in a way maybe but not directly...
 
She married a human being...I can assure u that... Not an item or "something" as u said...LOL
I'll update very very soon.. Embarrassed
 
Thank u for the lovely comment...Embarrassed
 and finally the last comment... Sleepy
 
-Laiba

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Sajjal-

i know i reserved somewhere!Stern Smile but too lazy to find it right now!LOL....Anyway Nice update, i love your writing style very unique because you describe everything ever so beautifully...Embarrassed
 
And also you make me confused as to what exactly is going on... i know for sure Nupur is married to mayank right??,,,Confused...right??... you have kept them nameless so its hard to configure each but i guess in later parts all will be revealed in due time right?Tongue
 
anyway ..did nupur love someone before...was she forced into this marriage...so much questions and no answers to them!Ermm now i'm angry
 
so update soon so my confusion would go away....as right now i'm in the middle i think it can be mayank or it can't be!Big smile
 
Update soon and yes madam unres your comments on THH...soon kk!LOL no pressure bas remind kar rahi hoon...
 
Amazing part...and have you chosen a name for this ff kya...hmm let me suggest something...Teri Meri kahani, Hamari Dastaan...i don;t know i can't suggest more as i really don't know much about the story due to your overly small updates!Pinch next update make it longer...Update soon.
 
Sajjal
 
 
lol... India jha kar lazy ho gaiy ho... LOL
 
Thank you... Well the credit goes to you, u describe so well i just follow...Tongue
 
She married a man named something.. did that clear the confusion? LOL
 
I know, i know its very confusing, its supposed to be I'm heading for a different story not the usual we usually read. don't know if i am heading right though... Confused But yes in due of time the confusion will clear i hope... Tongue & i love making people confused... it's fun...Big smile 
 
It can be, and it cannot be.. Hopefully the next chapter will reveal the identity of one of them (the man in the present) i hope so... i have written the chapter so i have add some details to reveal the masked man... Tongue I'll hopefully update tomorrow phir khud he parh lena...
 
Okay I had actually forgotten... But i haved edited now... I reserve first but edit last... old habit u know...LOL But Sanam updated so i thought of reading it tomorrow and then comment but that "tomorrow" never came...
 
Overly small? Ouch the coming update is longer i hope so... But none can compare to urs of course... I enjoy reading every bit of it but now i'm curious how u write that much, but then again.. yeh tumhara kaam hai... Embarrassed
 
To the titles... very good ones, i might pick one of those..
 
Thank you for the wonderful comment... Hug
 
-Laiba
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As u mentioned titles...
 
"Amna*
 
& I'm sorry i couldn't title it with ur title...How to say it it's not an fairy tale story... and The PathWay to Love is awesome but my story isn't the Pathway to "Love" Tongue
 But i have something else for that title you'll now very soon..Embarrassed so don't use it...Angry
 
 

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princez_94

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Liaba u dunno how happy I am
dat u finally updated
when I saw ur pm I waz like "YAYYYY"
 
I love this FF tonzz n tonzzz
 
ok so this part waz aMaZiNg
so Mayu tookNupur to some place
which she loved
n then they had fun there
danced
and then wat in wat just happened??
 
Mayu bringzz bangles n sindoor for her
n she throwzzz it??
hailaa kya se kya hogaya??
I thought she liked him before
when they both sed to each other
I love u
anywayzz this part waz gr8
do continue it soon :)
HeartLinu
 
Aww... Thank you soo much... I'm glad u liked the update... Embarrassed
 
Well the part is divided in two parts. a present and past... the part in italic was supposed to be the past...I  thought it would be clear... well I'll making a bit clear next time...
 
To know what happened keep reading.. Wink  I'll update soon...
And thank u for the lovely comment...Hug
 
-Laiba
awww no need to thankz na Liaba
but thankz for telling me about present past
now get it na
btw any idea wat u gonna title this FF?Embarrassed

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