Untitled FF - MayUr - Part 6 Pg.34 (16.07) Updated - Page 22

Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
but how is realeted mayank with the case i havent understood
Posted: 12 years ago
tht was beautifull part...from a horifying strt to a mesmirzing love story...it was beautiful...but wht went wrong is still mistry...i really liked it
Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update Laiba
n mayu's confession was wonderful
although didn't get any hint why she hate him
i thought the reason will be about his confession
but it come out she olso have feelings for him
waiting eagrly next update
tank for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.
guns scene was perfectly written.
mayank confession was so sweet.
very romantic.
update soon.
thnaks for the pm.
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
loved it superb
do continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Wao that was so beautiful 
Mayank's confession was amazing
I think Mayank have so me relation with that Mr chopra and he married Nupur for pressurized her dad for taking Mr chopra case 
Lovely part
plz cont soon
thanks for pm
and all the best for exams.
 
Posted: 12 years ago
aww... laiba...
awesum update!!!
sooo... MN wr really in luv!!!
now i got d hints.. of y ws she really angry wid him...
luvd it!
continue soon!
n Best of luck 4 ur exms!👍🏼
luv ya!🤗
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
but i m still confused...
whats d relation of mynk with this case...???
i m waiting for next part
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey I just read the whole 5 parts in one go and i liked it a lot
you are a brilliant writer
you maintained the past very well...
You really confused the readers with your past and present tale...
I some how guessed that it was mayank in both past and present after 2 parts or so... somehow i guessed it before you revealed it.
And now eagerly waiting to know about this karan and about the mystery behind mayur's marriage...
so sad of them. mayank is trying to make things normal and nupur is making it too hard for him but i guess there could be a strong reason for nupur's anger.
Waiting for the next part.
Do pm me this time. I'll send you a buddy request. Do accept me and pm me this time.
Don't forget me huh... pleaseee
Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update!
 
cont soon..
 
payal_

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