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SS: (AN UNCONDITIONAL LOVE )PG 35 prt 11 (Page 8)

pickachu IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Nice part!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
shocks par shocks...!!ShockedShockedLOL
omg....geet likes dev!!TongueDead
cont. soon dear...lovely update...Clap

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 2:15pm | IP Logged

Awesome update

Loved it

geet likes dev
Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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awsome one yaar!!

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lovley update 

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hey plz PM me too...
otherwise i will lost the SS in the flood of posts...Big smile
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                                                                            part 3
in london a 16 years old girl running in a mansion.
the girl: mamaji, kaha hain aap?  MAMAJI... the girls scremed.
pari roko, mere baat sono. bhai ko tang mat karo. her mother meera yelled from behind.
pari: oh, mom.. aap ko to bata hain na ki mera din mamaji ko dekh kar bina nahi soru hoti. mamaji kaha hain aap?
meera: tumhe bata hain na is waqt bhai kaha rehte hain. pls onhe tang mat karo.
pari : janta ho , par iss waqt sirf main jaa sakti ho onki pass. main onki ladli jo ho.
she entered a room. she saw a 51 years old man drawing something on his table paper. this is a painting room. everywhere various printing like a mansion, jungle, fighting etc. she came to the man and looked to the drawing. pari hug him from back & said: keya mamaji.. aap abhi v yehi pic draw karne ki try kar rahi hain. jo aap se nahi hota. the man stopped the drawing & gave her side hug & said: kaise hogi, agar mere princess nahi chahti. he peak on her forhead.
pari: main chatiho ki aap isse complete kare, har roz aap isko complete karni ki koushish kar ti hain. leken ye kambaqt hoti nahi hain, sibaye in do akhoke. aap itni achi achi printing karti hain par ye kue nahi.
man: bata nahi, yehi sawal ki jawab dond raha ho. choro chalo breakfast karti hain pher main tumhe school droop kar dongi. pari jumped with happiness. meera smiled to see that.
meera: bhai, main keh rahi ho aap se, aap ki ladli din ya din begar rahi hain aap ki wajase. aap nahi khud kuch isse kehte hain aur nahi hume kuch kehne dete.
man: jane do, bachi hain. tum bhi humesha mere beti ki peache pari reh ti ho.
pari: ha mamaji aap bhi kuch kahi hain na mama se. main aap ki ladli beti hoo na. she make baby face. main mr pratham mehra ki ak loti vanji..
man: ha, tum pratham mehra ki ek loti beti ho. both r smiled.
geet in now 18, maan back home. he is now 24 young angry guy. his body & arms so strong. every girl just gaga on him. but only geet so much scared him. she dared to talk to him.
maan in his room, geet entered his room with a glass of juice. she kept in on his table. maan W*H vest came out from washroom. when she turned out to run she bang with maan badly. both lose balance fall on the floor. geet hurt on her back head she closed her eyes with pain. maan looked at her angerly. his anger spit out by his eys. geet slowly open her eyes & saw his angry eyes again shut her eyes again. maan pulled her & stand infront of him.
maan: keya kar rahi hain tu? tere pass akhe hain ya nahi. dekh kar nahi chal sakti. geet shaking with fear.
maan again: keya, hua ab keya akhe ki sath bolti v band ho gayi tere. keya hoa tujhe.
geet: oh main.. oh!
maan barged: oh keya! dimag to hain nahi, pure din dosro ki demag khati rehte hain. ja ye ha se.
geet fuming now she looked at him & said: mera koi sak nahi apki kamre main ane ki. oh to dadi ma ne veja. isleye.. aur ha main nahi chati apki demag kahne.. itna sara hoa cheeze nahi khati. after that she ran out firstly.
maan jaw few open. the first she replied back & thats way! then he smile with her innocent: keya karo main iss ladki ka.. pure pagal hain.
geet entered her room still fuming: sadu, akru, samaj ta hain keya apne aap ko.. jab dekho tab mujhe datti rehte hain. vicky poked her.
vicky: keya hoa, ferse maan vhai ne data keya.
geet: kab nahi dat ta o bol. ye tere vhai ko na mental hospital main admit karne chaheye. he deserve that palce. vicky smile.
vicky: tu to janti hain onka gussa. oparse onka khatarnak job iss leye onka demag thora olta chalta hain.
geet: thori, pure chalte hain. mana main galti karti thi, lekn tab main choti thi. leken aab main bari ho gayi. main jaan vojkar apna sima torongi keya taki tera vhai ravan mujhe utha ke leke jaye.
vicky: don't worry ramji akhe tujhe bacha lege.he smile.
geet: ha ramji to mujhe ravan se bacha lege par iss maan se kaun bachayega mujhe.
vicky loughed out.
days passed, geet admitted as bba like dev. dev finished his bba course. & vicky admit in law. so this time vicky & geet college different.
an evening, dev dragged geet to the terece. she saw lot of roses, & candles cake etc. geet happy to see that. dev know how to impress a girl. he also know that it was geet dreams. an teneger dreams who always live in a dream.who always think her prince will come & rescue her from this world. always want her lover as a hero who saved her from groons like film.
dev kissed her forhead & said : i want to tell u some thing, i love u geet. here this geet in 9th cloud. she did not expect it at early. she fell shy they both cut the cake & shared with eath other. then dev licked her chocolate from her mouth. geets body stiffen. she did not used that type of touch. dev understood her feelings. he crried her with his arms & went devs room & locked it behind. geet little scary now. he put her in bed & slowly undress her. geet tried to protest. but she did not. they finally reach their climax. dev got what he wanted & geet submitted herself to him. don't know what 'll destiny play to her.
precap: maan suspect on geet..Ouch
guys don't kill me. i know its odd. coz u don't want dev. i also want. but this is important for futher story. there r lot of man like dev in this world who simply play with innocent girls emotion & ruined their life..  and its a crime i think.specially teenage girl mostly attacted by this crime.
pls comments.. what u'll think..

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