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.SmokinSanz.

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 1:24pm | IP Logged

awesome

loved it

really touching

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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YOU WROTE SMARTLY ...................BUT IF MAAN IS NOT THERE I DONT WANT PM.............. DONOT WANTS TO READ IT ANY MORE

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NOTE: THANK U GUYS FOR UR WARM WELCOME FOR MY FF. I really speachless.. many of u r very sad of maans dead.. i m so sorry

.. ok i will make it cover later.. just stay with my ss. & do comments..thank u everyone..

part 2

present

shaan: what! mom, what r u saying.. its not true. tell me its not true..he cried.

geet turned her face & said: i wish, its not true. i wish my son.

shaan: but mom, u always live as a married women. u still put sindoor on ur forhead, & wear mangulsutra. why mom mom.

geet see herself: coz, its ur dad wish. u made me a promise if he left us without our knowledge, i keep my married style to save both of u from this cruel world.

shaan: i don't understand!!

geet: he always knew, if he left us, this world snached our happiness. his own blood will betray with us for property. shaan u & sur was his life. he never bare a single tears in ur eyes. thats why he wanted me like this.

shaan cried more. he can't bare this anymore. he cried loud.

geet console him. shaan now this time u u need to know everything.

shaan looked at her.

past:

geet in 8 years old. she entered khurana mansion with her father. her father name mohan.

mohan: madamji, kaise hain aap? maans dadi looked at them.

dadi: well, tum kaise ho? aur ye kaun hain?

mohan: ye mere beti hain. aap ko bata hain ki mere patni gujar chuki hain. is leye main chata ho ki ye aap ki sheba kare. he looked down. mohan was khuranas old servent. & geet his child.

dadi: kaise bat karti ho mohan, itni choti si bacchi keya kaam karege. she looked at geet. she is so innocent, her eyes sparkling now.

dadi ek kaam karo, tum iss ko mere pass rakho. main isko parwarish karonga.

mohan eyes moist. he said to geet: beta kuch v ho jayee, kabhi inki baat nahi talna. jo in logo ne kahe ohi karna. he left geet. but her father word fixed in her head.

day passed, geet in 12 now. all those years dadi & geet alone in this mansion. but now, dadis three grand sons coming home from canada after their parents death.

elder grand son: maan sing khurana 18 years old. very angry & reserve person. rarely talk to any one.hw just passed his high school. and wanted to join defense. he hate liars.

dev sing khurana: 16 years old. very charming guy. love to enjoy life with girls.

vicrant sing khura : he is same age as geet. he is 8th standerd as geet. and very wise person. love to read books all the time.

the day was beautifull. dadi arrenged everything for his grand sons. geet little nervous, for maans. coz she heard he is very angry. they all reached the mansion. dev & vicky hugged dadi. but maan

touched her feet. dadi impressed. then he saw geet. a little girl wear a pink salwar suit her hazzel eyes stared at him. he liked her eyes.

day passed

geet is in now 15 years old. she is 10th standered now. she & vicky goes same school same class. they r best buddy now. they share their books notes everything with each other.

on the other hand maan join army academy he tried to himself best cadet in his academy. dadi told him to join khurana business but he refuged. but dev in interested in business he is now 19. and maan 21 he lived in hostel. today maan is back in mansion. hear this geet face turned pale. she did not want it. she most scared of maan. all the time he just scold her for her childish behaiviour. whenever he back home he most of the time he locked himself in his room. but geet childish behaiviour irratating him. but today geet decide she will not do something stupid which made angry him. but her luck not support her. on the other hand geet like dev for his charming attitude. he always impress him by giving gifts & other activities. she missed him when he never home.

maan noticed their some difference between geet & dev. but he did not like that. knowing geet she is very innocent & dev is an idiot. but he ignore that.

geet in 18 now she just passed her school. and dev in business study. & and maan complete his academy study. he become a army officer now. he is well trained, love to camp in jungle & saved innocent life. he hates criminal & liars.

precap: maan scold geet again..

pls do comments.. i will update it past & presnet combinition, big surprize coming up..

Edited by reea88 - 18 February 2011 at 5:01am

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 2:22am | IP Logged

nice one yaar...continue soon

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged

Geet likes dev no no no way......... yyyyy..... I know i m overeacting but dev koi aur nahi milaa....

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 2:46am | IP Logged

nice update ....

lady Maan shud better be alive .. otherwise am coming behind u with a danda in my hand.... LOL

continue soon babe!

love

Sana

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 3:07am | IP Logged

yar pehlay Maan ko maar dia now geet likes dev yeh kia hai yar Shocked

anyways nice update wow MAAN AN ARMY OFFICER hayeeeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 3:08am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sindu555

nice update ....

lady Maan shud better be alive .. otherwise am coming behind u with a danda in my hand.... LOL

continue soon babe!

love

Sana

hehehehehhehe tumhara famous danda yahan bhi agaya LOL

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