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                                                               part 11
present
meera & her momz eyes widen.  pratham looked them  with confused.
 pratham: what happen? why u both look me like this?
meera: nothing brother, its just our little conversation.
pratham: ok, can i know the secret?
meera: no, i mean we want to give u surprise. so that we wanted to hide it from u.
pratham: u r telling true? ok, i m waiting for ur surprise.
 meera relife.
the old lady: pratham, what about ur  project.
pratham: oh! i have to go india to complete it.
both surprised: what, u want to go india? no thats not possible.
 pratham: why?
meera: i mean u can handle it from here.
 pratham lough: no, meera its possible. don't worry i'll be ok. he left.
 meera looked at her mom.
 meera: mom, now its time to reveal everything. otherwise everything will be destroy.
the old lady: nothing will be happen. i cant let it happen.
meera: why, u don't undersatnd.  he is not ur son. my brother died long back ago. we found him near by river when we finished my brother funeral. why u can't accept it.
the lady: shut up meera. he is our son prtham. don't tell like this.
meera: yes, he fullfilled all duty as a brother & a son. but what about his life. u just destroy his life for ur own benifit. this is not right.
old lady: no, thats not right i gave him everything. name frame wealth his family.
 meera: family? which family. this is not  his family. u brought prthams bro wife & his son sameer here & forcely included them with his life. u know that, this lady never gave my brother any happiness. then why u did this? why mom?
old lady: just stop it meera. i don't want to lisen it. just get lost.
meera: ok, i m leaving. but i warn u tell him everything , otherwise i tell him.
meera left. pari heard everything from behind the door. she just shaking. she could not beleave her ears. she run to her room.
pari: no, i have to tell mamaji about this. she cried loudly.
past
 whole night maan took care of geet. she got high fever. maan called doctor. he followed doctor advice.
next morning
geet slowly opened her eyes. she found herself in maans room. maan manage healthy food for her without anybody knowing.
 maan: good morning geet, ur breakfast ready. lets finish ur breakfast.
geet: i don't want to it. firstly u told me how i came here? & who changed my cloth?
 maan: geet, u asked so many question at a time. said very softly. firstly u finish ur breakfast.
geet: no, firstly u have to tell me?
maan: i brought u here? & i changed ur cloth. but trust me i did nothing wrong.
geet: how dare u to change my cloth? who gave u permission?
 maan: what r u talking about. u wanted to left u there in heavy rain?
geet: yes. why u touched me?
maan: geet u misunderstood me. lisen to me once.
 geet: no, i don't trust anybody. specially khuranas. understand.
 maan grabbed her hand, what the hell u think ur self?  i saved u & ur unborn child . & u blame me?
 geet: i never told u to help me. just leave me alone. she left leaving maan furious.
 
pre cap: devs plan in past.
 
 
  note sorry guys for ur long waiting. i was sick u already know that. & also i was trapped in my personal work  still i m so busy so that i can't regular update. pls try to understand. and my exam was well. thanx a lot for ur well wisher. thank u all. perdon any mistake.
 
 
 


Edited by reea88 - 16 May 2011 at 10:25am

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hope u r fine nw
lovelyy update
cont sooonSmile

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amazing update.
love it.
do continue plz.
thx

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wowww loved it
hope pari tells pratham everything

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nice update 

continue soon


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lovely update
cont soon
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