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286pearl

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged

gr8t part....

but geet  ko dev ke baare main... maan ko batana hoga...
wo akeli kuchh kar nahi sakti....
cz dev is baat ko hide karne ki koshish karega....
wo geet ko kisi bhi level tak hurt kar sakta hai.... ye geet abhi jaanti nahi hai....
geet ko sirf or sirf maan he support kar sakta hai....
maan ko bhi geet ko ye bharosa dilaana hoga....
 
pl update soon


Edited by 286pearl - 20 April 2011 at 6:15am

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GEET KO DEV KO SAZA DELVANI HOGI...................................... SHE HAS TO BE STRONG

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oh no, guys.. i writeen this ss.. but my all effort goes to vain.. becoz this stupid net. Angry
                                                                         part 10
past
geet went to the doctor with pinky.
geet: doctor i want dna test. this ur jent.
doctor : its not safe geet for ur child. its ur primary stage.
geet: no, doctor. i want this. its my decision. by the way i dont want this child.
doctor surprised: geet what r u saying.
geet: yes doctor this is my child so i decide.  i don't want this child.
 but i want this. three turned back.
geet whisper: maan! again.
 maan:sorry doctor for late. i think my wife is suffering some psychological problem.
doctor: mr khurana. pls take care ur wife.
maan: yes doctor i'll. she never said this again. geet furious. pinky about to faint. she excuse her self & run from there.
 maan dragged her & stand i n front of her in out side.
geet: who r u? who gave u permission to it. lisen its my life.  i 'll decide. do'nt  do this again.
 maan grip her arms: firstly i m maan singh khurana, i 'll not allow u to do this. i told u before.
 geet: why? what the h* r u think ur self. this is my child. & i m his mother
maan: mother, do know what meening is this. a mother never imagine her child bad. and here u wanted to kill ur own child.
geet down her eyes. she felt sad.
maan: shame on u geet. u did wrong & u punish this child for ur crime. whats wrong with u.
now, tell me. who is the father of this child?
geet: i m not telling u?
maan: u have to. or thought u even dint know who he is? he closed his eyes. he know he hurt her soft part in heart.
 geet slapped him tight. how dare u maan. how dare u. how could u say that? how?
she hit his chest. maan hold her then hugged her. her head on his chest. he hold hertightly.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 geet also hold him same. suddenly rain fall. tears down from there eyes. but it mixed with rain. its seems their uncountable pain wanted to come out by tears. those pain hit there heart. cut it pieces. but no one can notice it. no one.
 the rain tried to wash their pain. but it seems infinity.
they did not know how they stay there like this. when geet realize  she free her self & run out. but she fainted. maan hold her. he carried her in his room. maan notice she had high fever.
 he dressed her in dark. geet hold him tight. his bare body stuck with her. he also hold her tight untill she swiift. when maan realize her fever go down he realesed her & laid her on bed. he rubbed her hand. geet in her sleep: i did not do anything. i m not wrong. pls trust me.
maan: hold her hand & said: i know geet. i know. u never wrong. pls tell me geet pls tell me the truth. his tears hit on her palm. he kissed her hand. pls geet pls.
 
 
 
present
meera enter a room.
meera: mom, why u did this? whetever u did its wrong. but not any more i tell bro everything.
the old lady: no , meera. u don't. whatever u did. its our sake. u don't tell anything to him.
 meera: no , mom. we did mistake. we have to tell him. pls try to understand this. i cant bear it more. he has full right to know everything.. pls mom.
 the lady: no meera. no. i told u before. this secret keep our family happy.
meera: happy: where we r not happy. we ruin someone own life  then how can be we happy? mom pratham bro should knoweverything.
the lady: no.
what i should to know. they turned. pratham stand near the door.
pratham : mom. whats the matter. which secret u r talking.
both ladies face turn pale.
 
 
precap: the secret. past twist.
sorry guys for delay. i was suffering for fever. & my exam will coming soon. i m too busy. pls don't angry with with for this short update. pls do comment.


Edited by reea88 - 23 April 2011 at 1:52pm

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
great update

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
lovely update
love it
yippe the truth
coming out
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
great update...

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
nice update  

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all the best for your exams Smile
hope to see you write an update soon


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