SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19) - Page 6

loved the update ,lolll very interesting concept,as i already sed.

plz coninue soon,thanx for the pm 😊

nice update
thanks for pm.

awesome update....

Nice update! Maan has GF sammeera than also he askd 4 some company when he met geet in hotel, tat means eithr he's not loyal or is not serious wit sam. Plz cont sooon

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@Part 4...

thats awsome one yaar...loved it ...add me to ur pm list pls 

chapter 4 was nice
well written😊

really interesting  story

nice update....so Geet pakdi gayi na khud ke baaton se...thoda toh kaabu karna seekh leti apni baaton pe....ab dekhon Maan ka shaq aur badh gaya....well I'm liking it....continue soon pls...