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Heartless~~~Pg-45 part-8 (Page 27)

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
i m updating a small part now........if i get good no of comments den i may write the next part........coz the real story will start unfolding den............

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Part 6:

Dev: (cluches Geet's hair tight….pushes her hand behind her)Wat will u do????

Geet: (struggles)Leave m u ass****….and tries to get him off her….Dev pushes her towards the wall….

Dev: do u want more????wer u not satisfied yesterday?????and hides his face in the crevice of her shoulders and bites her……..

Geet: slaps him hard……Dev leaves her….moves a little back……..realises wat happened…..He instantly becomes more angry…….

Dev: How dare you????u bitch………..He slaps her a number of times…….pulls her by her hair  and throws her on the floor……Geet hurt her head badly……..

Dev:         I think I hav to repeat d same thing again………holds her and pushes her to the bed………

Geet: her head was paining badly…….she could not make out wat he was saying…..she cluches her head in pain…….

Dev :comes towards her…….gets off his shirt….and comes to bed……..on her

Geet:….."NOOO"….she stuggles to say…..

Geet struggles……but she was vry weak……Dev pins both her hand on either side of the bed……rips her dress exposing her upper half…….Geet pushes him him but in vain…….her eyes wer closing……….Dev traces his fingers along the edges of her bra and puts his hands inside them……..Geet with all her might pushed him and turned around…….she was now on her stomach……..She tries to move forward….towards the bedside table……..to get something that would help her…….

But Dev came back …….pulls her hands down…….and he tries to turn Geet but in vain…….Geet cluches the mattress really hard………..Dev unhookes her bra and pulls it off……His hands move under her cluching them……..hurting her and in no time turns her……

Dev : I want you to see me……..so that u remember who is powerful next time…….Geet struggles….but she s really vry weak……..

But still…….she tries to move towards the table……

Dev in the meanwhile has stripped totally and was pulling off her salwar…….

Pulls it off……..Geet had nearly reached the table……Dev had already started playin with her…….His hands left her hands long back and was now all over her…….

Dev utters a lot of nasty words in her ears and was on the verge of entering her when Geet took some spray kind of a thing and sprays it on his face……….he jumps back in pain…….

Dev: wat d hell……omg…….wat was dat(his eyes are waterin he rubs dem)

Geet in the mean while quickly gets off the bed searchs for her clothes……wears them …….sprays some more off the spray on him……..He shouts and tries to sneak out…….

Opens the door (which he hadd luckily had left open)…….and sneaks out….

Her head was spinning but she had only this chance……..She locks the door behind her and sneaks off……..

She walks through the long corridor…..She heard some noices from some of the room which wer on either side of the corridor………

She quickly gets down the stairs which was nearby……..There she could see sunlight penetrating………she knew the exit would be somewhere near,……..She sees a door and run towards it……But someone comes in front of her……….and smiles the same wicked smile as Dev…….

Man:so u want to get out of here????or are u tired of the same person????ha?????Geet tries to look for a way out……..but she was slow……the man cluches her arm…..and pulls her towards a huge hall………his nails wer enetrating deep under her flesh……….

She tries to get him off her………"Why are u doin this to me????wat did I do???plz leave me…….plz……."

Man:takes her to a huge room and there she sees……..

 

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:21am | IP Logged
hey i want more please over hear love this painfull ff u r such good writer i like it eventhough its really sadCry but i like itBig smile

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
still how much more geet will suffer dear...............cant wait for her to get out of this pain..............poor her..................pl cont soon is she going to escape hre self or is maan going to b her saviour...........wat di she c in that room

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged

Liked the update,but u left it hanging,curious to read the next part.Hope Geet is safe soon,but wonder how she got here.Continue soon.........

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Umm very short! & late!
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:59am | IP Logged

does any one want another update?????

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Yes yes yes! We want long and big update!
U hardly update!! :( and now this short! We want update! :)

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